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Reviewer: lxmacks Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 12:51AM Title: Going Home
...and so the plot thickens... Arthur, Molly, and Bill seem to be in on the deception...how intriguing.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.02.04 - 02:02PM Title: Going Home
Aaugh!! Mean cliffie!!!
So, Harry was possessed by Voldie or something, who made him hurt Ginny, so now they're all afraid of a relationship.
Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 10:59AM Title: Going Home
EEEK! This was a very fun chapter - and then that ENDING! On to the next chapter!
Abraxan
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2008.04.13 - 11:27AM Title: Going Home
great chapter thedreams & headaches are geting more intense & are defenatly linked though the fact that harry at som leve or at some time wanted to hurt ginny is not a good sign & it will be intresting to see where you go with that particuler plot thred.
Gabrielle flirting & ginny reation to it was one of the few light moments in what was a quite sirus chapter . Well molly arthurs & bills reaction to harry was defenatly unexpected ok so it might be slightly un profesionall but ther out right hostillaty & bill was rather hostile beforeof harry before he found out the were to gether was rather disturbing & defenatly seems to indicate they dont trust harry with there daughter so thats on more plot thred to keep an eye on
And then to top it off you have malfoy appear in ginny room while evryone eles is occupied thankfully the next chapter is alredy up so i can get on with this amazingly twisting & rather complicatedstory oh & that a compliment as i just love story with alot of depth to them.
James
Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2008.03.04 - 10:47PM Title: Going Home
You make us really hate Malfoy.
Reviewer: hesch Signed Date: 2008.02.08 - 01:34AM Title: Going Home
fantastic story!
but what a "cruel" cliffhanger, hope you continue soon!!!
hesch
Author's Response: lol, thank you hesch! You're in luck b/c I just uploaded the next chapter today. I hope you enjoy where I take things from here! :)
Reviewer: SunB Signed Date: 2008.02.02 - 02:08AM Title: Going Home
I have read your story till chapter 14 at another site and loved it. I am reading it here again and am falling in love with it all over again. I realy like the way you capture the character's and I really enjoying reading what is going on Harry's mind. Anyways I wanted to know if you have written after the 14 chapter.
Other than that great work1
Update soon!
Author's Response: Hi, SunB! I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it so much! Unfortunately, 14 is as far as I've gotten at the moment. It takes me several months to fit a new chapter into my real life schedule, but at the moment I'd guess I'm about half way through with the next one. Thanks for the review and I'll definitely be posting here regularly until I get caught up with what I have finished... :)
Reviewer: SunB Signed Date: 2008.02.02 - 02:07AM Title: Going Home
Another great chapter! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.02.01 - 06:24AM Title: Going Home
Aargh! No! You filthy rotten swine, you!
What's with Malfoy being able to simply pop into Ginny's bedroom at the supposedly-secure Burrow?
What's with all the headaches and dreams and stuff? One is led more and more to suspect that something has been done to tamper with people's memories: did Ginny *really* go to Beauxbatons? Did she *really* have a boyfriend named Julien?
Will we be tuning in next time? You betcha!
(oh, and you miss a 10-rating this time only so as to leave headroom for when it gets even better next time ;-)
Author's Response: lol...I'm going to assume that first comment is directed toward Malfoy and not me... ;-) And what is with him just popping into her room? Not to mention all of that other stuff! Someone has some explaining to do! Oh right...that would be me...lol. *shifty eyes* You will, I assure you, be getting much more information that you have now as the story unfolds, so I hope that you continue to read and enjoy! Thanks for the review and I will work really hard to earn the 10-rating before I'm through. ;-)
Reviewer: ShadowFang Signed Date: 2008.01.31 - 10:39PM Title: Going Home
Ok wats up with DRACO being able to aparate in her bedroom with there being wards up !?
i mean he cant be THAT powerful right? Dumbledore and the oreder r the ones who bult them right? and if he is that powerful enough to over power Big D and the order even harry then the sense of realism ur trying to install sort of wears off right?
is this a soul bond story? if so it would be awesome and make the story more intersting considering its fueled by love. and harry would know that malfoy somehow{patheticallly} was able to slip by .
ill say more later
story is good but that part
Author's Response: No...he can't be that powerful...at least I'm sure Harry and Co. would hope he couldn't be that powerful. If they thought he was, Harry certainly wouldn't have left her alone in the first place. I agree that the realism does wear off if I make Malfoy powerful enough to break through DD's wards without breaking a sweat. Hopefully the next chapter will provide some answers to put the realism firmly back into place. I think that you will find with this story that many things happen leaving both the characters and readers confused as they work their way toward the truth...so never fear, even if it seems random, I've tried really hard to tie everything together in a logical, realistic and in-character way.
I don't know what a "soul bond" story is...so I guess I would say...I don't know? lol. Is that a fanfiction term? Thanks for sharing your thoughts and don't hesitate to ask more questions in the future, I will always try to answer them as best I can without spoiling anything for you or other readers. :-)
Reviewer: hpismylife101 Signed Date: 2008.01.31 - 03:44PM Title: Going Home
this was suucchh a good chapter! gah the end is intense.. update soooon! :]
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'll be updating soon and I hope that you continue to read and enjoy! :)
Reviewer: swannygirl Signed Date: 2008.01.31 - 03:04PM Title: Going Home
NO!!!!! Harry has to come to the rescue! And what is going on with Ginny having images and flashbacks? Can't wait for the next chapter! Great story! I love it!
Author's Response: He does, doesn't he! I for one will be very disappointed in him if he doesn't. :) As for Ginny, I'm sure you'll be getting answers to your questions as you continue to read. I'm happy to hear that so far you're enjoying the story and I hope you continue to do so! :)
Reviewer: tear_away Signed Date: 2008.01.30 - 09:38PM Title: Going Home
I really dislike you for leaving it there. I only just (well about two hours ago really) started reading this story and i have to say its excellent, really brilliant and an amazing idea because you have the reader knowing what has happened and yet I can't figure out how it happened. Simply Brilliant, top marks (or stars as it is).
Please Please do not let Malfoy have his way with her - I would more than likely be very very ill for many days if you did.
Great Story!
Author's Response: lol, I'm sorry for leaving it there for you, tear_away. I'm really happy to hear that the story has kept your interest so far and that you're wanting to find out what happens (and how it happened, lol). And I try really hard not to let anything happen to Ginny...as I agree, Malfoy having his way with her would make me ill as well. Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy when the next chapter posts. :)
Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2008.01.30 - 09:28PM Title: Going Home
grrrrr... that's cheating. Why are the bad guys all knowing and all powerful until the hero shows up? Grrrr... good story, but now I'm really AHdsiaahjdflfdajafahj i don't know what I am, but I think it would be very hazardous to your health if you were to not update very soon.
Author's Response: lol...isn't that the most annoying thing about bad guys? I hope that as we continue, Malfoy does not continue to appear that way to you...although it is safe to say that he has probably had a lot of time to plan what he is doing and when. It is also to remember that he is older and has had experiences and training that his younger canon self had not. That however, does not excuse any random ooc character displays of all knowingness that doesn't make sense, so hopefully I'll be able to avoid that. And I definitely care about my health so I'll be updating ASAP so you can find out what happens, and hopefully figure out how you're feeling about things, lol. Thanks for the review! :-)
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.01.30 - 07:43PM Title: Going Home
Yikes! Great chapter. Quite the cliffhanger.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy where I take things from here... :-)
