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Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2011.09.19 - 03:51PM Title: Protect Me
Great action! I enjoyed this chapter very much. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Manwe Valarian Signed Date: 2010.11.22 - 02:37AM Title: Protect Me
Plenty of action with this one. i loved it.I am trying to figure out if Voldemort has been defeated yet.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.11.25 - 10:52AM Title: Protect Me
wow!
fantastic chapter
I really hope things start to make sense soon though
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.02.04 - 04:08PM Title: Protect Me
Wow, I just couldn't stop reading. Can't comment more, must read next chapter!
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.27 - 07:25AM Title: Protect Me
WOW WHAT A CHAPTER! Keep on writing, I am still glued to this story.
Cheers!
Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 05:38PM Title: Protect Me
COOL chapter, but how the heck can Harry hold hands with Ginny while riding a motorcycle? It takes too hands to control a motorcycle as far as I know I suppose it;s possible that a magical motorcycle wouldn't have such requirements. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Abraxan
Reviewer: lostromanticHPGW Signed Date: 2008.06.27 - 03:09PM Title: Protect Me
loved this chapter!!
very very intense and kept me interested.
I absolutely love this story so far.
Reviewer: hplover92 Signed Date: 2008.04.06 - 09:08AM Title: Protect Me
omg!! the drama. i wish everything would be explained to them and they would just have sex already i mean come on, enough already!! awesome chapter!!
Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.03.27 - 01:39PM Title: Protect Me
The chapter's pace steadily grew as the story progressed. Beginning like a small ripple on the shore, with Ron/H tender romancing in bed. Then the wave grew with Harry/Ginny''s physical contact and continued to grow in power with Harry giving in to his/Ginny's desires. And then the tidal wave crested with the assault at the Ministry and finally smashed ashore when they made their frantic and daring escape. Whew. Exciting ALL the way through, kinda like a 00-7 movie. With DD present at the MoM I anticipated that he was going to intercede again and prevent the couples escape and I am so happy that didn't occur. At times I mix up story lines from reading too many stories simutaneously; but isn't it Harry's excessive powers or H/G combined powers that will cause her death and that is the reason for the couples to be memory charmed and forced separation? If so, I don't understand why the Weaslley's just don't appeal to H/G's logic and just explain it to them. Guess I will have to indulge myself on this snowy snowy afternoon and reread this entertaining story. GREAT chapter. Anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2008.03.26 - 06:51PM Title: Protect Me
**sighs happily** I love re-reading a great chapter.
I forgot to mention before, the beginning scene with R/H and the owl was a wonderful prelude to the H/G banter and passion. You did a terrific job of writing an entertaining scene that also revealed personalities and relationships......even down to the owl's haughtiness. Well done!
Reviewer: bigworm0808 Signed Date: 2008.03.26 - 02:14PM Title: Protect Me
Another great chapter, the confrontation was bad like i thought it would be, im glad they got away tho but im sure theyre in for more tough times, I wonder what will happen when Ron and Hermione and the twins figure out wat is going on also, I wonder if H/G werent the only ones memory charmed, maybe Ron and Hermione were too and thats why they dont know wats going on, they probably never agreed to the plan in the first place.
Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.03.26 - 09:34AM Title: Protect Me
I was almost out of my seat during the fight scene. You're making me so worried about why Ginny's family and so-called friends are doing this to her, I hope we get some more information soon.
Reviewer: darkelf00 Signed Date: 2008.03.26 - 12:30AM Title: Protect Me
I was wondering why Giny never thought of that way to stop Malfoy before. hmm oh well. Finally the confontration! and it was as bad as i thought it was gogn to be. But i noticed the Ron, Hermione and the twins don't seem to be in on whatever it is that they other havde done to H/G. Will they demand answers? and what are they goign to do whne theyget them? but then agin your the author and have your own plan.
Please update soon. really liking this story.
Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2008.03.25 - 02:44PM Title: Protect Me
My, my, my.my, my.......**your writing has the tendency to reduce me to vague repetition**
LOVED the passion in the earlier part of the chapter.....must say that Ginny's "solution" had already ocurred to me, and I had been wondering why it had not already ocurred to DD or some of her brothers. But, leave it to Harry to be all noble and self-sacrificing, even in the face of overwhelming passion.
(As Jane Austern purportedly said, "You can't find a man like Mr. Darcy, you have to make him up." Clearly you have 'made up' a wonderful guy in your Harry **stopping now before I move into inappropariate sighing and .......yeah, well, you get the picture**)
I was sort of amazed that H/G even went to the MoM, knowing that others wanted to seperated them....but I suppose that they had never anticipated the level of effort to seperate them......actually you made that quite clear, in the midst of all the conflict, confusion, spells and desparation.
LOVE that they escaped on a mototbike......just seems to fit my idea of adult Harry....although a Jeep would do, also. Now.....where will they end up?
Please update ASAP!
Reviewer: Sovran Signed Date: 2008.03.25 - 10:49AM Title: Protect Me
I recently caught up with this story, but I'm not very good about reviewing. In this chapter, however, I really wanted to applaud you for letting Harry and Ginny get away from her family. It would have been easy to prolong the angst and the plot by having them separated again. This, however, is more original and much more interesting.
In terms of the plot itself, I wonder if there might not be a Fidelius Charm involved. There are a lot of interesting possibilities with that charm, and you might be exploring one. Memory charms are, of course, another candidate.
I look forward to reading the rest of the story, even if I don't often manage to review.
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 09:19PM Title: Protect Me
I really like the twists of this story. But I was wondering why it takes longer to update on this site. I kinda discovered this story on another site and the chapters are more advanced. Good writing!
Reviewer: CarolineBlack Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 07:50PM Title: Protect Me
Wow! That was action packed! I loved it.
