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Reviewer: Love_Aud Signed Date: 2015.06.02 - 02:05AM Title: The Price of Power

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.11.26 - 11:58AM Title: The Price of Power

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why the hell did Remus do that
after all that Harry's just done for Ginny, stopping Malfoy from raping her and saving her life, he goes and stuns them both!



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.02.06 - 01:12AM Title: The Price of Power

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Wow!! Thank you so much for Harry rescuing Ginny before Malfoy could defile her!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.27 - 07:32PM Title: The Price of Power

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Reviewer: i_lay_my_head_down Signed Date: 2008.11.19 - 04:26PM Title: The Price of Power

Update soon please, I can't stand the suspense!



Reviewer: Chatmandu Signed Date: 2008.11.01 - 10:15AM Title: The Price of Power

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I have just finished reading your story up to this chapter. It was recommended to me by another author. Wow! Just pure and simple Wow! There is so much in here.

First, I really enjoy the play you take on the title, Protection. There are so many levels of that occurring in your story.

Your “Dark (Eyed) Harry,” for lack of a better term, is perhaps the creepiest I have read. The phrase “Hey baby” is permanently ruined for me. I was initially thinking Dark Harry is one sadistic bastard, but there is something masochistic about his behavior too. Sort of like what ever darkness Voldemort transferred remains to punish and torment Harry. Why does that darkness actively seek to destroy the one person Harry truly loves? {Okay, that was a rhetorical question)

I didn’t know what to think about Ginny. Is she displaying Battered Wife syndrome? Maybe Stockholm syndrome? By the end of this chapter I think neither. She shows absolute faith in Harry, despite her fears. Is that Undying Love? (capitalized on purpose).

The brutal manipulation by Dumbledore, Lupin and Snape (there’s a combination!), and the elder Weasleys is well done. It is hard to think of Arthur and Molly doing that to Ginny, it is so out of character! But your plotting has made it utterly believable. How far would I go t protect one of my children? Despite the shock of what they did to Ginny, and Harry, I can’t find it in me to condemn them.

Draco. He is such a putz in canon but you have made him believably dangerous. That Dark Harry swats him away like a nothing is humorous and frightening at the same time.

You leave me here at the end of this chapter wondering if Harry has actually begun to control the Darkness. He still has his Saving People Thing (TM). Yeah!

I was rubbish at predicting canon between the books so I’m not even going to try here. I look forward to the next installments of your marvelous story.



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2008.09.13 - 12:07PM Title: The Price of Power

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Another cliffie?????

I hope Harry finds out what is wrong with him...and why he acts the way he does towards Ginny.

Is the potion Malfoy (I'm glad he's dead!) the same or close to the same that spilled on Harry during the final battle????

I anxiously await the next chapter!



Reviewer: jennymafurr Signed Date: 2008.09.12 - 01:09PM Title: The Price of Power

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REEEALLY?!?!?

You're REEEEALLLY going to leave me hanging like that....

you tease.



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.09.12 - 07:38AM Title: The Price of Power

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This chapter kept me on the edge of my seat. Good-Harry is still in there; I liked that he wanted to give Goyle his sole back, not that Goyle deserved it. Because of all the Dark Magic and the ritual could Harry have permanently syphoned off some of his powers into Ron? Or did he just give Ron back his own powers. Liked how Remus can remove some of the Dark Power so Harry can carry on. How is it that it does not affect Remus' powers in a negative/Dark way? This whole story is well developed and well written. Keep up the great work.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.09.12 - 05:44AM Title: The Price of Power

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This was an amazing chapter but it was not a good idea to read this whilst eating breakfast. Have to say that it didn't go down so well. :)
It was fun to see that my guesses from my last review partialy came true. Very curious for next time.
Until next time. Thanx C



Reviewer: crystalstars88 Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 05:16PM Title: The Price of Power

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This was such an epic showdown! Much more exciting than JKR's anitclimactic finale between Voldie and Harry. It was so intense reading this and I felt so many emotions. I wanted to cry when I thought Ron was dead! I hope he makes it. Excellent writing, I look forward to the next chapter:)



Reviewer: Dando Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 04:38PM Title: The Price of Power

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I'm loving this story and think I've left reviews before. I'm following it here and on SU. Great chapter. V ery good scene between Harry and Remus and again with Harry/Jack and Emma/Ginny at the end. You update regularly too. Can't wait for the next one!



Reviewer: kaypgirl Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 04:31PM Title: The Price of Power

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Yay, I can't wait. I read this chapter a while ago on hpff. They better not try the memory thing again, I don't like trying to hit fictional characters, it just means I have to replace the book.



Reviewer: tear_away Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 04:05PM Title: The Price of Power

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Am worried that you going to put the block back on Ginny and remove Harry's knowledge of it. But you wouldn't do that would you? Good chapter, strongy emotionally and brilliant to read and imagine.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 02:19PM Title: The Price of Power

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Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 01:44PM Title: The Price of Power

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wow, wow wow ! Fantastic.
I knew Ron would be alive. I am so glad for that. I was in tears hearing Hermione go on. How can the blackness leave Harry? When will we be able to know what the real deal is between the two of them and why Harry wants to do harm to Ginny?
I cant wait! I love this story!



Reviewer: jennyelf Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 01:22PM Title: The Price of Power

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Very intense. I can't wait to find out more. Why would they stun them? Hmm.. I love that Harry gave Ron back his magic.

~Jenn :)



Reviewer: poshi Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 11:09AM Title: The Price of Power

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the ritual was very wel written. I'm really looking for the next chapter. I hope he can get more control!



Reviewer: Loyd1989 Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 11:07AM Title: The Price of Power

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Oh my gosh! This is the most riveting story ever! Compelling, bold, awesomely briliant. Your command of the dialogue and how the story moves is so strong and professional. I am so glad you have written this story. I hope to read more of yours and compell others to read this story also. You have grasped the heart of your story and pumped life into it, then let it pulse through out your readership. You are amazing. Love this story. I am curious as to how Harry will be able to correct his overzealous magic or will they have to put the fidelius charm on them again. Or, will Harry actually have to leave like he said. This would be so sad, but in line with your story.



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 10:53AM Title: The Price of Power

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damn! this story rocks! AAAHHHHH!!!!! need more updates! seriously good stuff!




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