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Reviewer: Love_Aud Signed Date: 2015.06.02 - 03:43AM Title: One Step Forward...

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Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2011.09.22 - 09:43AM Title: One Step Forward...

Yessss!!!!! I've been waitin on them to get married. "Sniff"... Thank you so much for making that happen.:-)



Reviewer: Tom Kristal Signed Date: 2011.05.04 - 08:50AM Title: One Step Forward...

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Great story.
I've just finished reading it the past few days and it was very suspenceful
It's lacking something though... something like..an... UPDATE!
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Reviewer: Lady Aster Signed Date: 2010.12.21 - 07:41PM Title: One Step Forward...

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This is so good! I was holding my breath the entire time I read your story. Thank you for posting such a wonderful story.



Reviewer: Tonksaholic Signed Date: 2010.12.17 - 05:29PM Title: One Step Forward...

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Reviewer: ginnyhoff Signed Date: 2010.12.17 - 11:29AM Title: One Step Forward...

Please update soon!! This is an excellent story and I can't wait for the weasleys' reaction to the marriage. You should have Ginny tell bill to go stuff himself some more as well haha



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2010.12.04 - 07:50PM Title: One Step Forward...

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just have to ask... is that the end of the story or is there going to be more? also, I really liked this, though there were a couple times I was tempted to drop it.

ILG



Reviewer: Rowlingisgreat Signed Date: 2010.12.03 - 10:33PM Title: One Step Forward...

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Wonderful fanfic! It's a 10/10 for me. Can't wait to read more. :)



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2010.11.19 - 11:11PM Title: One Step Forward...

Well, i had time to re-read nefore update ). The story is great and I like characters you've created. I like your style and as I already said the story is so inetersting you seems to can't stop reading once you've started.

Not to offend, but I have to say you used to repeat verbs and it would do good to differ them with synonimus. I mean someone is always "lounged" and something "churning". Catching the eye. Doesn't matter much though, still outstanding ).



Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2010.11.17 - 10:03PM Title: One Step Forward...

The first time I read this story there were only 17 chapters. When I saw you won a Silver Trinket (congrats!), I thought it was time to give this a second read. I enjoyed your story, both times, very much. You do an excellent job of writing dialogue--it's natural and always seems in character for the speaker. My only complaint is that your Ginny is rather weepy. Granted, she was going through some very stressful situations, but sometimes the tears seemed almost constant.

I liked the scene with Remus and Harry in the evidence room. Remus got to see how well Harry's doing and instead of badgering him to return Ginny to her family, Remus simply asked if Harry remembered how he was when he was uncontrollable. Hopefully Remus planted a seed and Harry (and subsequently, Ginny) will realize that the initial memory charms were necessary. Without that time of forgetting each other Harry would not have had the chance to learn how to control the power. (Of course the second time for those charms was too hastily done and our couple are understandably angry about that.)

It looks like Molly is going to find out about her daughter's wedding from the Daily Prophet....



Reviewer: ebonydawnpotter Signed Date: 2010.11.14 - 07:13PM Title: One Step Forward...

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I just finished reading all the chapters up until here... How have I been missing such an amazing story so far?! This story is delicately woven character development, mixed with a heck of twist-turning plot line, and genuine emotions leaping from the screen. You've had me as frustrated as Harry and Ginny, and as sympathetic as Bill and Arthur, and as torn as Molly. Definitely an impressive piece of fanfiction.

I applaud your efforts, and compel you to continue writing!

Cheers!

-ebonydawnpotter



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2010.11.13 - 12:04PM Title: One Step Forward...

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Hm, is this the end of story, or there going to be epilogue? The story is great, it keeps you hang on al the time. I couldn't stop reading once I started and I finished it in 1 day (although I skipped some parts and intent to re-read in a whole).



Reviewer: Spyridon Signed Date: 2010.09.19 - 08:28PM Title: One Step Forward...

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lol no matter what you think, your ideas might have already been done by someone else. I was going to do the same basic idea about the eye color from green to black when using Dark magic and to gold if using Light magic. Okay, maybe not gold but definitely another color.

Found this story through an LJ recommendation and definitely worth it. I wonder what the outcome of Ginny marrying Harry will be. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Reviewer: Junky Signed Date: 2010.09.18 - 07:54PM Title: One Step Forward...

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Can I say finally? Still a 10.



Reviewer: alwaysHarryGinny Signed Date: 2010.09.18 - 12:13AM Title: One Step Forward...

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thank you for updating this story. I almost forgot what was the story about, so gladly I reread this story from the first chapter, still amazing. I didnt get bored when I read it. I hope you're not taking a long time to update the next chapter. I think this story will come to an end, right? I cant wait to see the next chapter soon



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2010.09.17 - 01:14PM Title: One Step Forward...

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What an emotional roller coaster ride this story has been. I really hate Ginny`s family and Dumbledore for what they did because they thought they knew what was best. I hope they eat humble pie and it all ends happy ever after. On second thoughts, I hope the Weasley clan is left in abject misery (bad day at work).



Reviewer: hmrpotter Signed Date: 2010.09.16 - 09:07AM Title: One Step Forward...

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I'm SOOOOOOO glad to see another chapter of this story!!!! Please continue writing, cause this is definitely one of my favorites!! I went back and re-read the whole story this week so I could refresh my memory, and it's still as good as it was the first time I read it. Please update soon!!



Reviewer: Clearly Signed Date: 2010.09.14 - 12:55PM Title: One Step Forward...

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I've finally been able to read the updated chapter as I've had to read through the entire story again (eh, what can you do), and even though it's been over a year since the last update it was definately worth the wait.
Lovin' that they got married finally and can't wait to see the reaction from the fam and friends when they find out. Also love that they are at least talking to Ron and Hermione, I think if they completely cut themselves off that could get a bit old after a while.
Looking forward to reading what comes up next for our favourite couple and even though this chapter was worth the year long wait, please, please, please update the next one soon. No rush, but... yeah ok, hurry ;0)



Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2010.09.11 - 10:37PM Title: One Step Forward...

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Well thanks for updating :) Although I would prefer quicker updates than this I can't hold it against you because you're giving us a great story free-of-charge. So thank you thank you thank you.

I like that we're discovering that the Weasleys/everyone who's responsible for all the chaos aren't monsters. They were wrong, they misjudged the situation, but they weren't trying to be malicious or cruel. I wonder though, if (and why) they intentionally used Harry's disguise as Ginny's school sweet heart.

I love how they got engaged originally. I didn't think Harry would restore the ring at first. I thought he'd give it to her as is and it would represent what they'd gone through for their love (since the ring was battered and "bruised") and they'd restore it later but this is great too (^_^)b

I'm very glad that Harry, Ginny, Hermione, and Ron are keeping on good terms.

Now I'm looking forward to see what results from this employees enthusiasm. I'm sure it'll be worth 6 months wait =)



Reviewer: wwwednesday Signed Date: 2010.09.11 - 01:02AM Title: One Step Forward...

After reading this chapter again, I just had to go back and read the whole story again. I had forgotten some of the details and just how wonderful/good/moving/exciting (I've run out of words!) this story is. I am only up to Chapter 10 so far and just loving it all over again. I even sneaked in a couple of chapters at work today!

Again, thanks for giving us all another wonderful chapter and please, please, please - don't leave us hanging too long for another.

Author's Response: Thank you, wwwednesday. :) I ended up rereading the other day too (although it's so long I had to reskim in order to finish, lol). I'm glad you're enjoying and I hope I can get the next chapter up for you soon. :)




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