Reviews For Magic Within, Magic Without
Reviewer: wrappedinharry Signed Date: 2009.03.08 - 11:00AM Title: A Visit From Mum What a lovely surprise for Ginny to have her mother visit. Harry too, He is so typically male isn't he? But very sweet. Reviewer: chelsea Anonymous Date: 2005.06.21 - 09:45AM Title: A Visit From Mum i have been following this story for almost 2 days now and i just keep wanting to know more if you are the writer and your readiong these reviews please contact me at charmed_one_cw112@hotmail.com you are truely wonderful Reviewer: TD Anonymous Date: 2004.12.01 - 03:45AM Title: A Visit From Mum YES! YES! YES! Hopefully some nice kissing in the next chapter. And I'm glad Mrs. Weasley came to visit. Wonder what she told Harry...anyway, great chapter! Loved it. Reviewer: ice princess Anonymous Date: 2004.11.30 - 10:52PM Title: A Visit From Mum Awesome! That was the best chapter yet - and that's saying something! I can't wait to see what happens next with Harry and Ginny. And PLEASE don't make it one of those 'they almost kiss, but don't because it's an evil cliffie' kinda things.
Anyway, enough with my ramblings. Update soon! Reviewer: laurablack Anonymous Date: 2004.11.30 - 10:16PM Title: A Visit From Mum awesome! i absolutely love it! update soon!!! Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2004.11.30 - 08:24PM Title: A Visit From Mum *smiles* oh that was a wonderful chapter and the next looks very promising. :-)
I love the way Harry knows how to deal with Aunt Martha and takes care of her like that. I notice a lot of people commenting on the Ginny/Martha interaction but personally I find her relationship with Harry to be more... captivating I guess... I think there is something to be said for seeing their relationship from Ginny's POV. Seeing the relationship without being privy to the details of their interaction somehow highlights it for me. Reviewer: Macsr71 Anonymous Date: 2004.11.30 - 04:05PM Title: A Visit From Mum OK Saint, another great read (Hey, I LIKED the cyrsalys charm)- I do hope that Aunt Martha realizes she needs those two around to take care of her and to inherit the farm (not buy the farm), finds out she can not change the will so it must go to a Weasley/Hathaway family member (who must be married!) I can just see Harry and Ginevra settling down to run the estate, opening up the big-house and raising up lots of little red/raven-headed children! Oh- I do hope you write out the next 20 years or so. Excellent story most favorite author
Reviewer: heeniebabie Anonymous Date: 2004.11.30 - 02:33AM Title: A Visit From Mum hey
Once again you have posted a truly wonderful chapter. I couldn't help but think that in the middle of the chapter, Harry and Ginny were acting like a normal married couple. I loved the fact that Harry was kind of flirting with Ginny.
But it makes me wonder what Mrs Weaslry whispered in his ear.
Any way, please keep on updating. Reviewer: hairy_hen Anonymous Date: 2004.11.30 - 02:21AM Title: A Visit From Mum Hmm. I don't mean to be negative, but my inner skeptic will not be denied . . . I'm not entirely sure I can see Harry flirting with Ginny so openly, after they've only been here a few days. He doesn't have a whole lot of confidence with the ladies (and he ran off on her in the last chapter, didn't he?), and it seems sort of out-of-character. I didn't quite catch this the first time I read, for some reason. Maybe I was too drawn in by the prospect of upcoming fluff! *snort* Must be losing my touch. Constant vigilance . . . okay, I'll shut up now. This really is a great story, anyway . . . Reviewer: hairy_hen Anonymous Date: 2004.11.29 - 09:03PM Title: A Visit From Mum Oh, dear. I'd been thinking more along the lines of "non-existent" than "small" when it comes to that particular trait of Malfoy's, but seeing as neither of them are likely to check anytime soon I won't argue to point . . . Oh, yes. What *is* it with boys not knowing where things are? Seeing as I'm one hell of a lazy git myself I ought to have an answer, but what can I say? We just . . . don't care? Maybe? Cut us some slack, here. Doesn't Harry seem pretty cheeky today! "Think about it." Seems he's recognised his effect on the fair lady, all right. I daresay I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out for them, and to see how Ginny is able to put her knowledge of the Patronus to use. Those hired men of Malfoy's can't be too far away, I'm guessing. When Ginny had to take care of Aunt Martha and Lotty, I wondered at the sudden appearence of healer!Ginny, but breathed a sigh of relief when she said she didn't want to do that professionally. Mrs. Weasley's visit was very nicely done here, particularly the part where she was talking about Percy and how she wondered about raising her kids. Keep up the great work! Good to see Ginny realising some things by now, Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2004.11.29 - 09:02PM Title: A Visit From Mum For some reason, most fanfics which mention Ginny's future post-Hogwarts career tend to make her a healer. That's why I think it's interesting that you have Ginny flatly state that she does NOT want to be a healer. In that case, I am curious about what Ginny's aspirations really are.
It was nice to see Molly make a quick appearance.
Oh, and speaking of Weasleys, I wonder whether you saw JKR.com and found out that today is Bill Weasley's birthday. It is a coincidence, I assume, that you happen to mention Bill in this chapter (the comment about Bill expecting that the name Ginevra wouldn't be necessary).
As usual, I can't wait to see the next chapter, even if it is most likely all fluff. (Patronus Kiss?) Reviewer: MissCorker Signed Date: 2004.11.29 - 05:40PM Title: A Visit From Mum Perfect end of the chapter! Reviewer: Kyrsten Anonymous Date: 2004.11.29 - 04:43PM Title: A Visit From Mum Another wonderful update! So soon! Don't get me wrong... I'm not complaining. Just a little surprised. XD There is so much subtlness in this story! Its wonderful. Although Harry was being a little obvious... Sweet Harry. Perhaps Ginny will finally get her Patronus right. Can't wait for the next chpater. ~Kyrsten Reviewer: kranestad Signed Date: 2004.11.29 - 04:35PM Title: A Visit From Mum Oh! That was really good! And the best thing was that I had two chapters waiting for me, I love authors who write fast ;) Hehe, can't wait for them to practice on that Patronus..hehehhe :D Update soon, this story is just getting better and better! Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.11.29 - 04:31PM Title: A Visit From Mum oh Harry, we love you so. excellent EXCELLENT chapter! i really want to know what mrs weasley whispered to harry, and i cant wait for the next chapter when harry and aunt martha get back. i thought ginny handled things well with the burning incident, but she just doestn have a lot of confidence in her abilities or what not..anyways the point is, i liked it, just as i like everything about this story. i also LOVE how updates are so quick *wink* good luck and keep up the great work!! Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Date: 2004.11.29 - 04:03PM Title: A Visit From Mum Oh SNAP, I am reallly really in love with this story. I love the way Harry is making these comments towards Ginny!! Even thought the "aunt Martha" plot seemed a little weak at first, I think you managed to pull it off wonderfully. This story is fast becoming one of my favorites!
:)
~Neha Reviewer: DazedMarauder Anonymous Date: 2004.11.29 - 03:09PM Title: A Visit From Mum The Elizabeth Crocker Potions Book., I'm guessing that Betty wasn't available? lol, fantastic chapter! I agree, Harry is really getting more obvious, which makes it all the more fun! I am thrilled that there will be fluff in the next chapter - it's my fav. thing in the whole wide fan fiction world!
Insquequo terminus,
amanda Reviewer: joviality Anonymous Date: 2004.11.29 - 12:09PM Title: A Visit From Mum I'm really looking forward to the magical chapt 7 =) And I love every bit of the fluff in this chapt, and the Arm always make me laughs =) I'm glad Percy turns around, he's a Weasley after all, and I just adore the family. Oh, Molly's right, Ginny should write a book if she ever discover why boys/men often forgotten where they've place theire stuff =P Reviewer: wvchemteach Signed Date: 2004.11.29 - 11:44AM Title: A Visit From Mum I swear I must have done something right this weekend. To get another update in only 3 days? ;-)
I have to say that I think Ginny is selling herself short in stating she doesn't want to be a Healer. She handled herself perfectly in the crisis she was presented with.
By the way I've read somewhere that Ginevra is actually connected to the juniper tree which supposedly has healing qualities.
I'm still curious about the Rue in Ginny's wand, her affinity for water, and what exactly the Jarvey will be saying about the Ferret.
I liked the interaction between Molly and Ginny. It was kind of like one of those moments when you see a passing of the torch.
I have to agree with Melinda about Harry and the kitchen. Thanks to the Dursleys Harry is probably the most domesticated male in Hogwarts. Of course I could just chalk it up to his unfamiliarity with Aunt Martha's kitchen.
I'm curious as to what Molly whispered in Harry's ear as well. Does Molly know something both Ginny and we don't know?
Ginny is starting to get a clue, but Harry is so obvious at this point that its almost painful.
So are we looking at 3 days until chapter 7 or will it be a Friday post?
I definately think you could do a sequel to this (but maybe switch to Harry POV) describing what happens during the 6th year. | |||||||
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