Reviews For Magic Within, Magic Without
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2014.11.06 - 06:45AM Title: The Patronus Kiss A brilliant story becomes even better with every chapter. Especially this one is written with a lot of passion in it. Reviewer: wrappedinharry Signed Date: 2009.03.09 - 02:30AM Title: The Patronus Kiss
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.05.29 - 12:26PM Title: The Patronus Kiss I've been playing catch-up on all of the great fiction I seem to have missed...and how I managed to miss this is beyond me. Truly, I wish I could have found it when it was new and I could have nominated you for a DSTA. Reviewer: chelsea Anonymous Date: 2005.06.21 - 10:40AM Title: The Patronus Kiss oh my gosh you are so talented i absoluterly love your stories they are so passionate ..so liberating...so exciting..so...perfect your stories are absolutely positively wonderful you are a very talented person i have been reading story after story on this site ad these are by far the very best this is truely a privilage the whole kiss thing hade me there picturing what was happening i have been picturing through your whole story the beginning came off just a little slow but the story is wonderful Reviewer: Kyrsten Anonymous Date: 2004.12.05 - 11:42AM Title: The Patronus Kiss That was so sweet anf fluffy! I have butterflies. lol Wonderful chapter. Reviewer: Crimson Tears Anonymous Date: 2004.12.05 - 07:04AM Title: The Patronus Kiss Oh my God, this was a great chapter and I don't only mean the Patronus Kiss. I really liked Ginny's conversation with the figurines....overall, this was all lovely.
I've always thought Ginny's patronus would be a unicorn for the same reason you did. You've got me totally hooked, I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter, how is Arpie doing by the way?
Reviewer: Gabzilla Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 11:08PM Title: The Patronus Kiss LOVELY! how cute!!!!! I love this kiss! It was magical and really sweet! Please update soon! Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 03:07PM Title: The Patronus Kiss Sorry about reviewing again, BUT I did re-read it. I also read a few of the reviews.... One reviewer encouraged you to make this a 'married' fiction in which Ginny is given the farm, but has to marry Harry.
*smirk* If you do... I suggest that they re-wallpaper the main house.
By the way, what kind of shoes does Aunt Martha wear?
Oh, and THE KISS is even more lovely on the second read. Far and away the best kiss I have read in fiction. (I certainly hope JKR is taking notes, as this is how it should be done!)
Nice images with the stag and the unicorn - interesting historical symbols... families that are by tradition united? Reviewer: EmilyFairy Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 12:52PM Title: The Patronus Kiss I usually just lurk around here... I've never submitted a review. Bad Dobby! Bad Dobby! :) Even though I write fic myself in other fandoms and I know how sucky it is to not receive feedback... I'm a huge Harry/Ginny fan though, even though I've never tried to write HP fic... I'm tempted though! I've got one idea but I dunno how well it'll be received since it kinda twists up the end of CoS. *g*
Anyway, I just wanted to say that I love this story. In fact, all of your stories are great. Usually I don't even read multi-chaptered stories unless they're already finished, but when I saw that you had written this one I decided that I would follow it anyway. And I get all happy and fuzzy inside when you update it. :)
This chapter was great... I think my favorite part (besides the kiss!) was the part where Ginny's unicorn and Harry's stag were nuzzling each other. It was just a really good, original idea. At least I thought so anyway.
And the kiss! *sigh* Wonderful... :)
I also like your Aunt Martha character... Sometimes I forget that she isn't a canon character.
Anyway, just wanted to let you know that I am reading. Now you can add another notch to your belt 'cause you delurked a lurker... *g*
Emily :) Reviewer: kranestad Signed Date: 2004.12.03 - 12:01PM Title: The Patronus Kiss Great..absolutely genious.. I especialle love the way it all played out, in this part;
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She didn't know what she wanted from Harry exactly - but she did know what she didn't want. She didn't want him treating her like a precious figurine he was afraid to touch. A tentative, careful kiss was not going to pull a Patronus out of her. Or, if she was completely honest - a tentative, careful kiss was not going to . . . satisfy.
Luckily, she knew how to provoke Harry into something better. "I don't know if kissing is such a good idea," she declared.
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That's more like Ginny..instead of taking whatever is offered to her straight away...When the kiss comes, it bloody well should be awesome! And, oh my, it was..One of the best H/G first-kiss scenes I've ever read.. Can't wait for more! Reviewer: MG Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 10:22AM Title: The Patronus Kiss Ackk! Imiss giving a review in the last two chapters. Anyhoo, wow, I *heart* that Patronus Kiss scene, what H/G shipper wouldn't, LOL!
About Ginny's patronus, I'd read so many different theories on what will it be and I like the idea her patronus (aside from a lion, of course or a phoenix). I think that it's really appropriate for her especially what the unicorn symbolizes in the HP series and in general.
Can't wait for the next chapters to see where that "kiss" will lead to , hehehe. Reviewer: trouble Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 10:17AM Title: The Patronus Kiss HURRAH! They kissed! I loved the Patronus bit too- where Ginny's unicorn wanted to be caught! Can't wait for the next chapter! Reviewer: joviality Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 06:49AM Title: The Patronus Kiss This chapter is totally sweet, loved it from beginning to end, the wait for this fluffy chapt is worth it (the previous chapters have been very well-written too). As usual, I'm looking really forward to the next chapter. Perhaps you can include what made Harry interested in Ginny? I'm curious, what exactly did Molly and Aunt Martha say to Harry (about Ginny)? Reviewer: melody Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 04:06AM Title: The Patronus Kiss so,so,so sweet! and you rarely see a cocky harry in cannon, and in you're stories so i thoroughly enjoyed this one... Reviewer: ll4ever Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 03:06AM Title: The Patronus Kiss *smiles contendedly* Aww, sweet. Nice and mushy, a real heart warmer!! I really hope you can update soon! Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 02:05AM Title: The Patronus Kiss *smiles happily* Thank you, you just made my day. :-) I liked the interaction between the two Patronuses, that was a nice touch. Reviewer: hairy_hen Signed Date: 2004.12.03 - 12:19AM Title: The Patronus Kiss I was feeling like complete crap all day. Then I read this. For a while there, I almost felt like a giddy twelve-year-old girl, before the ruggedness took over again. LOL!
Anyway, I found this to be quite an impressive chapter. A bit "romance novel"-ish, perhaps, but not overly so. The unicorn and the stag really do go together well, don't they? (Much better than the stag and the snake! Oh well.) Something tells me this was a calm before the hurricane--not only haven't we heard the last of Malfoy's plot, I'm sure, but Ginny and Harry have a few things to discuss, or it would all be too perfect. Plus Ginny needs a chance to test her Patronus under pressure! *dramatic sigh* Such a lovely scene though . . . er, right. Anyway.
I don't much like coquettes. There's another word for that, you know, and it has five letters and starts with a "b". At least for the really obnoxious ones. Still, it was funny to read about Ginny talking with those ridiculous figurines, and the dudes talking about how much spunk Aunt Martha has. It's true, "real" men like 'em strong and intelligent, not absurd or manipulative. Good to see Ginny getting some of that confidence in herself--and Harry in himself too, for that matter.
(Just for the record--I never said I was too skeptical for the Patronus Kiss. It just didn't fit that particular spot in my fic. Otherwise, chances are Harry wouldn't have been captured, and then where would my story be?)
So yeah, awesome job with this. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Happy writing! Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2004.12.02 - 11:45PM Title: The Patronus Kiss When I first reviewed this story, I gave it a four -- the highest score on the RLS fluff scale. After I read this chapter, of course that score is going down a little.
A unicorn -- interesting choice! I can't wait to read the next chapter with your explanation of the symbology behing why you chose it.
But alas, you say that you must take a break in order to defend your title as the SIYE holiday challenge champ. So far, most of your challenge entries have been especially fluffy, and so I know better than to expect anything more than an RLS-two there. In any case, good luck! Reviewer: ice princess Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 10:48PM Title: The Patronus Kiss Another great chapter. I'm glad Harry and Ginny finally got together. Update soon! | |||||||
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