Reviews For Magic Within, Magic Without
Reviewer: wrappedinharry Signed Date: 2009.03.11 - 07:33AM Title: Another Journey Begins Oh, Martha! So sad. I knew that cow was bad, bad, bad. Reviewer: M_And Signed Date: 2009.03.02 - 11:42PM Title: Another Journey Begins So I don't know if you check your reviews anymore, and I think it's been awhile since you wrote this, but I know I always appreciate someone leaving me their thoughts on my writing so... Reviewer: chelsea Anonymous Date: 2005.06.21 - 12:44PM Title: Another Journey Begins ....wheres harry when she needs him i hope he comes back soon ...very good story Reviewer: kranestad Signed Date: 2005.01.02 - 07:18AM Title: Another Journey Begins The EVIL cow.....grr...And poor aunt Marge...Has Harry gotten the paper plane message? This is almost too much to bare...But I'm glad you got some action into the story, this will highten the moments with fluff:) Hope you update soon, these chapters are getting better and better! Reviewer: heeniebabie Anonymous Date: 2005.01.01 - 11:46PM Title: Another Journey Begins That was a good chapter.
It was a pity that Aunt Martha died, but at leaset she's with John and Johnny.
Who is going to have the estate now that Martha is died?
How is Ginny going to get out of the mess that she's in.
And where is Harry when you need him?
Anyway please update soon.
Bella Reviewer: Anneliese Anonymous Date: 2005.01.01 - 08:57PM Title: Another Journey Begins I dont need to tell you that you are a fantastic writer. You should already know that. The character of Aunt Martha was beautifully developed, and she served her purpose very effectively. This story is intelligent and well crafted. Kudos to you for straying so far from the "normal" story line! Cant wait to read more! I want to see what happens next. Your Ginny is so self-reliant and spunky. I hope to see her stay in this role. Though I do love a good Damsel And Her Knight In Shining Armor story, I like it even better when the heroine can save herself, or team up with the hero to save eachother. I know you dont need any of MY help, and I'm sure we'll all go nuts for whatever you come up with! Love it! Reviewer: MG Anonymous Date: 2004.12.30 - 04:39PM Title: Another Journey Begins Oh, I can't believe that Aunt Martha's dead *cries*. But I'm really glad that she with her husband and son now. I'm guessing that we will see the fury of Ginny in upcoming chapters especially when she has a fish to fry name Malfoy. Maybe she'll show that "size is no guarantee of power" indeed! Reviewer: Anneliese Anonymous Date: 2004.12.29 - 07:14PM Title: Another Journey Begins And again, superb! Reviewer: joviality Signed Date: 2004.12.29 - 08:13AM Title: Another Journey Begins Excellent chapter.. You're right, I'm upset over Aunt Martha's death but it's time for her to go to her husband. And it's a cliffhanger!! Luckily Ginny is a Parseltongue? So she'll get away fine right? And harry's not here to do the 'saving people' thing again, which I'm thankful cos' we can't have him saving people all the time. And I know it's in Ginny that she can get herself out of all these troubles. Looking forward to the next chapter =) Reviewer: NoLabels Anonymous Date: 2004.12.29 - 12:14AM Title: Another Journey Begins I like it. I am so sad that Aunt Martha died, but at least she's happy now. Kinda evil cliffie there with the rope.... Harry had better save her or else I'll be mad... I like it though. Reviewer: Bri Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 08:02PM Title: Another Journey Begins Well, I trust that you have your reasons and that it is absolutely essential that Aunt Martha die. And, yes, quick updates do make me feel much less inclined towards being angry. Much,much less. Reviewer: Lilyanna Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 07:28PM Title: Another Journey Begins Well, I think you made it easier on Ginny by killing off Martha. She would have had to haul her everywhere and it just wouldn't have been good. Please update soon, this is agreat story one of the best I have read in a while. Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 06:15PM Title: Another Journey Begins I knew it! Mind you, I would never have predicted the actual identity of the cow, though of course it makes perfect sense.
I also wonder about what's happening with Harry during all this, and I hope they are reunited soon. I assume we will learn his side of the story when he relates it to Ginny? :-)
I'm sorry to see Aunt Martha go, but I'm glad she had Ginny to see her off.
I enjoyed the conversations between Ginny and Martha. I especially liked the references to Martha's conversations with Harry and Ginny's recognition that he also needed the answers she is seeking.
As for the next chapters, adventure you say? sounds like exactly the type of thing I like, so I look forward to it. I'm quite interested in how Ginny's interaction with this snake will play out too. :-) Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 04:22PM Title: Another Journey Begins Brilliant job! Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2004.12.28 - 03:06PM Title: Another Journey Begins Not thinking big enough eh? How about Ginny somehow levitates Harriet in cow-form dropping her onto Lucius thereby killing the both of them but not before she tricks ol' pretty boy into signing over Malfoy farms to Ginny and Harry giving them both tracks to farm on into their golden years? Now, how to squash old Voldie into the Harriet/Lucius cow-pie?
All kidding aside ... this was simple beautiful ... Ginny being there at the end (and alone) will make it easier on her in the long run, to know that she can give (and has the strength to give) the ultimate comfort of seeing a loved one off. I'm sure Ginny would rather Harry be there but anyone who is going to hang with him has to be independent and strong as an equal otherwise just wont work. Bit surprised Ginny didn't just have Lottie blip off to find Harry but stress makes you forget
Bukcle up though, it's going to be a bumpy ride for awhile and I for one, am loving it!
Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 02:38PM Title: Another Journey Begins That Parseltongue will come in handy right about now... I guess she does have everything she needs.
That was lovely, Ginny being with Aunt Martha as she passed. The lump in my throat is still there.
What a mad cow that woman was... I hope the Order finds her still bound! I can't believe that there is no Order member watching the Estate. I have thought that someone was there watching. Did LM really go to the estates? Will we know what happened?
Poor Harry he must be going spare with worry over Ginny. She will prove she can handle herself I am confident. I so want him to find her though... he needs her. I would like to know is thought about Ginny while she is gone. 'the heart grows fonder and all that'.....
I hope you had a wonderful holiday! This sure made mine!!!! Cheers!
Did Aunt Martha give the Estate to the Order? She says it isn't Ginny, so I wonder.... Reviewer: Melindaleo Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 02:36PM Title: Another Journey Begins I'm not surprised, but saddened. I liked Aunt Martha. I'm anxious to see Ginny save herself, although the romantic in me is missing Harry. I hope he got the note in time to escape himself. That must be killng him. I liked the Magic Within Magic Without speech. I still can't help but think that even in this, Harry is different though. The prophecy says Neither can live while the other survives, so even his happiness can't be complete until Voldemort is gone.
Loved the twist with the Jarvey really trying to say the COW is an Animagus, how clever of you! I really like this story, and I'm holding my breath for the promised cliffhangers, starting with this one. Reviewer: roary Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 01:39PM Title: Another Journey Begins hope you are going to keep on with the quick updates. Does Harry get Ginny's message in time to see her duel with Lucius? I am sure she needs no help from our resident hero, or perhaps he could hold her high heels which she polishes off the bad guy. I like the idea of a strong woman Ginny. Do you? Reviewer: DazedMarauder Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 11:43AM Title: Another Journey Begins Well, at least Aunt Martha went back to her family - the ones that she hasn't seen in many a year. I'm really not mad at you for killing her off though, especially if it is important to the plot - but I wouldn't mind quick updates... *shy smile*.
I thought Aunt Martha's explanation of the "Magic within, and the Magic without" - I hope that Ginny remembers that - though she does remember the fact that you already have everything. Did you make that up? It sounds very... I dunno, but it's a good thing. I'm probably not making any sense (don't know if I have much to begin with)...
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