Search:

SIYE Time:23:42 on 5th November 2024
SIYE Login: no


Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2004.09.30 - 01:05PM Title: A Fate Too Terrible To Ignore

starstarstarstarstar

You managed to write a very intriguing story over a well-known, but little-explored theme. It felt as if reading "The Lost Chapters of CoS" by JKR herself! I liked the way you developed Ginny's character still staying true to the canon. All those little details when you connected your story with the canon and added further explanations to it were simply brilliant. You also added the much needed depth to Ginny's character, which I missed in the early canon.

Althogh the story ended on a high note, I would be lying if I said that I wasn't a bit disappointed with the ending. I was expecting it to be at least one chapter or an epilogue longer. I was quite looking forward to reading Ginny's perception of the events from the moment she wakes up in the Chamber and until she is reunited with her parents... Do you think you would add an epilogue to the story at a later point?

Thank you for writing in the diary! :)



Reviewer: biggerstaffbunch Signed Date: 2004.07.06 - 11:31PM Title: A Fate Too Terrible To Ignore

starstarstarstarstar

And it's finished? It's been a lovely ride... The ending was surprising too, that you didn't pick up later...but I liked it. The suspense factor was kept. Thank you.




../back
‘! Go To Top ‘!

Sink Into Your Eyes is hosted by Grey Media Internet Services. HARRY POTTER, characters, names and related characters are trademarks of Warner Bros. TM & © 2001-2006. Harry Potter Publishing Rights © J.K.R. Note the opinions on this site are those made by the owners. All stories(fanfiction) are owned by the author and are subject to copyright law under transformative use. Authors on this site take no compensation for their works. This site © 2003-2006 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Special thanks to: Aredhel, Kaz, Michelle, and Jeco for all the hard work on SIYE 1.0 and to Marta for the wonderful artwork.
Featured Artwork © 2003-2006 by Yethro.
Design and code © 2006 by SteveD3(AdminQ)
Additional coding © 2008 by melkior and Bear