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Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.03.23 - 02:25PM Title: The Final Dursley Stay

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ummm....there were 6 horcruxes, the 7th piece being still in Voldy. It was something of Ravenclaw OR Gryffindor, not and.

Decent start, but you seriously need a beta. Some of the word choice mistakes are horribly distracting.



Reviewer: Imperio Signed Date: 2006.07.14 - 07:11PM Title: The Final Dursley Stay

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Petunia bothers me in this. Not sure why, but its just too quick and strange for her to be sorry.

Author's Response: Well, I thought Harry shouldn't ALL bad memories when he thought of his estranged family



Reviewer: joes915 Signed Date: 2006.07.06 - 11:46PM Title: The Final Dursley Stay

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did they destroy the locket while they were there (meaning ar privet drive) becuse asof the end of HBP there is no confirmation that the locket is gone so the yshould at least have to check on it.

Author's Response: No, we do not know if the locket is really gone, but I'll tackle that later on... Thanks!




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