Reviews For How It All Began....
Reviewer: Imperio Signed Date: 2006.07.14 - 07:22PM Title: The Riddle Mansion Lots of new cool stuff in this one, like the flask and I really like the Metamorphosis Chew. You could do with a Beta though. Several grammatical errors could be easily fixed. I know it can be hard to see them but a second pair of eyes could be helpful. Good stuff though so far. Now on to the next chappie. | |||||||
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