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Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2013.12.11 - 07:59PM Title: their first kiss
This is just plain awesome. Most awesome points:
"I don't like you, I love you!" I've always loved that thing.
Everybody's watching them... creepy and awesome!
"HARRY!" "He'll get over it." HA! Love it!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! I might rewrite it to.make it even better but not too sure!! Thank you for reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: harry_Ginny16 Signed Date: 2009.12.26 - 11:31PM Title: their first kiss
HAHA love it,that's sweet
Author's Response: Oh thank you for the review! It's been such a long time since I posted this story! I just went over what I wrote and I realized my grammar is horrible! I should do a rewrite! But I'm very very glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks so much for the review!
~CodeRomance
Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.08.30 - 12:41AM Title: their first kiss
cute little fic...only one thing i didn't like was that hermione said 'you go girl' i can't see her saying that. an off topic question what inspired your username?
Author's Response: the "you go girl" is my americanism coming out so i'm very sorry about that and you have a major point about her not saying that because now that i think about it i dont think she would!
Anyway my user name came from a show that i love to watch called Code Loyoko and so i took the Code part and added Romance because i love romance stuff...im very mushy so it seemed to fit...i use it for everything!
Reviewer: Wooster Signed Date: 2007.03.09 - 12:39AM Title: their first kiss
Hey, you were so nice in all your reviews that I thought I'd check out what all you'd written...
Cute! Ron and Hermione were spot on, I think...and your timeline of how it occurred was adorable. (How long it took them to work up the guts etc) Your writing style is kinda unique...it's more like you're describing a scene to your best friend on the phone than writing something...it makes it a little confusing but it's also kinda charming. It may help a little if you describe more of what's happening and the surroundings and stuff to break up the action a bit. I think this was really cute and I can't wait to see what else you write.
Author's Response: yea i'm not the best author, but i do try. and i seem to write like i talk so when you say my story sounds like i'm talking to my best friend...well thats not surprising! anyway i have written other stuff...but i didnt post any of it on here because it takes too long to get it validated...and like you saw in my review im really impaticent so most of my stuff is on fanfiction...which my web page, if your interested is on my profile! but thanks for reading the story and leaving a review! feedback is always very much needed! and i'm sorry i've left soo many reviews on your story! thanks again!
Reviewer: fanfiction rocks Anonymous Date: 2006.10.16 - 07:23PM Title: their first kiss
Very funny. I liked the spin that you put on it. Muy bien.
Author's Response: glad you liked thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Lapin_Joyeux Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 07:22PM Title: their first kiss
Not bad for a first fic, too rushed and not that original...
Author's Response: ya i know, i was just experimenting, thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.04.17 - 05:46PM Title: their first kiss
Rushed but cute:)
Author's Response: sorry it was rushed!! if u want to read the rest go to fanfiction.net!! sorry!! and thanks for the review!!
~CodeRomance
Aut hor's Response: wait wrong story there is no more to this!! i thought this was the other story!! i am so getting confused with my stories!! so ignore what i wrote up there!! sorry!!!
~CodeRomance
Reviewer: HGFANATIC Anonymous Date: 2006.04.10 - 07:54PM Title: their first kiss
TOTAL FLUFF* =] Very cute and very enjoyable to read! Keep up the good work - you're on your way up!
`Felicity R. Evaldez
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review i'm glad you liked it!!!
Author's Response: if u want to read the rest go to fanfiction.net!! sorry!!
~CodeRomance
Auth or's Response: ignore what i just wrote cuz there is no more!! i am so stupid i thought this was my other story so just ignore the previous response!!!!
~CodeRomance
