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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.10.19 - 07:51PM Title: To the rescue
I can just imagine the stunned looks on the.adults faces.
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.20 - 10:04AM Title: To the rescue
LOL wait what happened with Lockheart? Well you found a way to seperate them so thats good though I would of been ok with a death I really don't know why you do somethings different from the book that you don't have to really doesn't make sense to me.
Reviewer: Ginny Rox the Burrow Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 09:28AM Title: To the rescue
Good chapter. A little mistake though with the line,
Harry was surprised, “What do you care? Voldemort was before your time.”
After his time is the right way I think. Can't wait to get to the solid HGness.*GRtB*
Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.25 - 01:25PM Title: To the rescue
“You fiend,” Harry said what is harry been turneed into a pirate or something? i think 'git' would have been more appropriate
“Quite good, but not good enough. Obliterate!” The blocking rocks disappeared.--isn't obliverate the spell lockhart used to erase harry's and ron's memory in the movie not to crush rocks riddle could have however used the locomotor charm to move the rocks...not that rocks unless really big would hurt a baskilisk...
the sword sliced through the massive body, neatly severing the head off. do you have any idea how large a baskilisk is it would be impossible with or without a magical sword harry would have had to like jump ob top stab the sward in then grab on to the handle and jump to cut all around the neck!
Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2006.08.29 - 05:08PM Title: To the rescue
That's typical. All the adaults were in Albus' office talking and planning while Harry was doing something. lol
Nice job with all aspectsof the story.
