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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.11.05 - 06:04AM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Lets hope he gets back for his snog...i can see him being put right into the task straight away.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 03:14AM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

Well didn't really add much I don't think at least for the amount of fluff you add in there were some tidbits for the readers at least.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 09:27PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.30 - 07:20PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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great chapter! doesn't harry remember there going to be told what the task is 1 month ahead of time? : )



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2006.11.26 - 04:55PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Reviewer: wolfsgurl Signed Date: 2006.11.12 - 09:20PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Reviewer: gemz1313 Signed Date: 2006.10.18 - 06:06PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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pretty pretty pretty please update soon i feel like i've been waiting forever!
Love your story 100% and the more H/G fluff you put in the better!

Author's Response: I hope you're reading the next chapter already. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.10.08 - 05:58PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2006.10.01 - 11:36AM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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well the kids are all growing up and with only the child for so long it is not surprising that the grangers are showing a little catition with this boy name ron....love how all saw ron and hermione make the couple....kutgw and harry is smart to have his prioitys straight.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Ginny will keep Harry in line, especially with their bond connection. The Grangers don't understand yet how different the Wizarding World is but they will. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: greybackfenrir Signed Date: 2006.09.30 - 12:08AM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Loved the chapter! : ) Sirius getting married and Ron finally asking out Hermione all in one go! Hopefully the next chapter won't keep us waiting so long? Great job! : )

Author's Response: Nice, wasn't it? Yes, the next chapter will deal with the Third Task. Hopefully, I'll have it out by the end of the week. RL still leaves me little time for writing at the moment. Please be patient.



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2006.09.28 - 04:48PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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I found it interesting that you had Harry unable to lift his 1 year old sister, yet you had Hermione lift her 1 year old brother with no problem.

Can't wait to find out what you have planned during the third task.


Author's Response: Actually, Cricket, if you read it again. You'll note that it was Hermione's mum who carried Daniel up to his room and Hermione just followed them. Harry could have lifted his sister but decided not to. Anyway, thanks for the review. I hope to have the next chapter, the one on the third task, out by next weekend.



Reviewer: GWeasley Anonymous Date: 2006.09.27 - 09:14PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Good chapter, Ido have one thing to say though. A 14 year old shouldn't have a problem picking up a 26 lb one year old. That part seamed a litle unrealistic but besides that good chapter.

Author's Response: I know, GW. Harry was just caught off guard by how much his sister had gained in the three months since he saw her last. Anyway, thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2006.09.27 - 06:57PM Title: Siblings' First Birthdays

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Families growing closer

Families growing apart

Ron gets a clue

Nice chapter

Look forward to the new third task

Ja ne


Jim

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I like the way you wrote it. Ron still needs a little more growing up. It won't be as easy for him and Hermione as it is for H/G.




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