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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.06 - 02:40AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

Well the turning point has come at least Harry will have one friend at least its to bad that it that the stakes had to be so high for it to happen but alas your story is pretty dark I like it though.



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.16 - 11:46PM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Oh, I do hope Harry wil get to be friends with Hermione soon. I'm wondering about Ginny though. Maybe if she's already possessed enough by Voldemort when the sorting comes, the Hat will place her in Slytherin



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.27 - 11:41PM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

ok well bout bloody time something good happened! even if harry had to get almost killed by a troll!

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.27 - 11:40PM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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ok well bout bloody time something good happened! even if harry had to get almost killed by a troll!

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Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.29 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

What a great chapter, I love how the story is going. But what I don't get is why Albus and any of the other Professors, don't do anything about Snape... I never got it from the JKRolling books, and not from this story. I know that Snape spys for Albus on Voldemort, (I still believe that he only work for Voldemort, and is spying on Albus for Voldemort) but that dosen't give him the right to do the things that he has been doing. He has no rights to teach children, dosen't any of the Professors see that, and if they do, why don't they do anything?? And what about Malfoy and his goons, why haven't something happened to them either, I know that they are students, but they shouldn't be able to get away with the things that they getting away with.

Will at least he as got Hagrid to talk to , and when Harry is healed he'll have Hermione to talk to...

I still think that it's stupdy not telling Harry about the Prophecy, he needs to be trained up... I know that Daphne do that anyhow, but he should know ASAP, so he is ready for anything.

Keep up the great work.



Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 01:01AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Even if I have to take the dog seditive, this is good night.

Since all the guys hate him, maybe an harem, Wait, that sounds like advice for a finished story on siye. Definatly too tired.



Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.04.25 - 01:10PM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Yay! You posted the whole story here! How cool is that?
You may know me from FF.net, I review there too. I just wanted to say welcome to this site... you really made a good choice (and you know what I'm talking about)!
Are you going to post SH here too? That would be brilliant!
Take care!

Author's Response: I'm planning to post them all here. I'm waiting for the SIYE community to read book 1 before I post book 2.



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2006.04.25 - 12:56PM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Very good story, a very well written "alternate history." I hope you are able to carry the story to completion, 7 years is a long time! I look forward to more. S.



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.04.25 - 10:47AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

Great chapter... Hermione is finally going to be friends with Harry, will that's one down and the whole Weasley family to go. I hope he gets to be friends with Fred and Groage soon, other wise how will he get the Map in the thard book. I hope that hearing that Harry saved Hermione's life, will make Ron think... and that he will make firends with Harry... as I said before they make a great team, and it would be a shame to part them. Hope you get them together soon. But if that dosen't happen before the second book, then it'll be even harder for them, when Ron finds out that Harry can speek to snakes. Maybe saving Ginny's life will change that... we can but hope. Update soon please.



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.04.25 - 10:47AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Great chapter... Hermione is finally going to be friends with Harry, will that's one down and the whole Weasley family to go. I hope he gets to be friends with Fred and Groage soon, other wise how will he get the Map in the thard book. I hope that hearing that Harry saved Hermione's life, will make Ron think... and that he will make firends with Harry... as I said before they make a great team, and it would be a shame to part them. Hope you get them together soon. But if that dosen't happen before the second book, then it'll be even harder for them, when Ron finds out that Harry can speek to snakes. Maybe saving Ginny's life will change that... we can but hope. Update soon please.

Author's Response: Keep in mind that my goal in creating an AU is to merely keep the climaxes and setting intact, while re-inventing the hows and whys.



Reviewer: harry 4Eyes Signed Date: 2006.04.25 - 10:41AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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ARGH!!!!! SIYE just ate my review...ohwell lets try this again hopefully won't eat my review this time.

This story is Intense,I loved it, I'll admit I had my fears when you did three three typical rewrite points I dislike allot 1) Harry is brought up by a super Aurer, 2) Harry is Brought up in America and 3) Harry is sorted in Slytherin.

I dislike point 1 because in every case I have read on his Harry ends up super powerful with more spell knowledge than even Dumbledore but you have done something I have not read before and that is Harry was brought up normally and just taught a few spells that might help him but otherwise a normal kid with a loving mother. Good Job.

Second point, I have nothing against Americans but Harry is still British and I don't think being brought up in America is going to make him Gun trigger happy or a baggy jeans Skater Boy, I like how Harry is still Harry only someone who grew up with a normal childhood and a loving supportive upbringing. excellent

and then lastly Slytherin Harry, I so dispise all Slytherin Harry as they always make him so arrogant and best friends with Draco with Snape as his Mentor or make it so All Slytherins are misunderstood and it's really the other houses that are in the wrong, speciall Gryffindor who was the real evil dictator not Slytherin.

This is the first time ever I have read a Slytherin Harry who is essentially just Harry but someone who is still hated by the Slytherin for what he did, and Snape still hates him for his looks, and the other houses hate or fear him because of what they have taught about Slytherins and fearing him because of that knowledge and the fact he had defeated Voldermort so he could be the next dark lord.

I am a guy and i'll admit the treatment Harry was getting made me cry and at work no less, hopefully things look up after this chapter atleast he has a friend with him now, and the rest of the school will back off when they find out he risked his own life for another person a muggleborn at that...and might even get some house unity in the future, the hat will be pleased.

I love this fic so far and can't wait for the rest to be validated. Also love Daphne, very nice charactor for an OC.

Well loving it
Keep up the great work
Harry

Author's Response: I understand where you are coming from, but with this Harry, I'm truely trying to create something entirely new. As growing up with a legendary ex-Auror, well, that's going to have a major impact. Daphne has NOT left her past behind, she really can't. She's lost everything, and no matter how hard she tries, she can't shield Harry from that. I specifically wanted to avoid one of those fics where Harry begins Hogwarts with a tremendous advantage over his classmates. He'll eventually learn a hell of a lot, and become powerful enough to face his destiny, but for now, he's on an even playing field. As for being raised in Canada? Claw's Clan is a wizarding community, and Daphne is a pureblooded heiress. Harry's been raised in a slightly more civilized manner than with the Dursleys in some respects, though he seeks to emulate Daphne, who is not always kind and respectful. As for clothing, Harry's been wearing robes for as long as he can remember, and he's used to them. Make no mistake, Slytherin Harry will be very different from his canon Gryffindor self. He won't truely develop until he's thrust into the role he was born for, but you'll see him begin to change, especially as book 2 gets underway. Let me put it this way: Harry wouldn't take a Killing Curse for someone he barely knows. Or even someone very close to him. For Daphne? Probably, though he knows that would probably kill her. Trust me, it's difficult to explain without giving away too much, but he's very different. Daphne is to me, absolutely fascinating. You've barely touched the tip of the iceberg with her thus far. When it's all out there, it's very possible you'll question how the hell she's capable of raising a child. Like I said, Daphne has NOT left her past behind. She still seeks vengeance.



Reviewer: Azabaza Signed Date: 2006.04.25 - 01:22AM Title: Chapter 7: Trouble with Trolls

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Oh my god. Tears are nearly streaming down my face...

I'm loving this story already, and I'm wondering why more people aren't reviewing... it's certainly a good read. After year one is over, I'm looking forward to see Ginny's reaction towards Harry in year two. ;)




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