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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.08 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

So Harry's anger eyes flashing red that a little Tom coming out im thinking though I will say I do like how you mess with a friend of Harry's and he will come after you if needed that is pretty cannon but I think you made him abit more powerful and smarter so it isn't a laughing matter anymore pissing Harry off.



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.16 - 11:50PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 01:58PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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Oh hell, Voldie's shining through Harry. I wonder if Harry's going to try to get rid of Diary like Ginny did. Well done



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 02:59PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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well ron is a complete idiot but what else is new! arrg on him!

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Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2006.05.27 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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Holy cow! Your chapters get really long if I keep hitting that little plus button for the font size.

You're presenting the story in a thought out detailed way. I only have good things to say and would recommend your work to everyone.



Reviewer: ChickenIsGood Anonymous Date: 2006.04.27 - 09:54PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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This is quite simply a great story. I love how much it follows cannon despite being a fic with a Slytherin Harry. Your take on how things would work out is quite beautiful.

One of the things that I like most is how Harry reacts to Ginny's crush, it must be quite embarassing for Ginny to take that. Also I love Harry's comments about the dark lord Harry going home to his gorgeous lover Ginny.

Now that you have to write again I wish you luck.

Author's Response: Harry's sarcasm and wit is something he's picked up in a year and a half in Slytherin House.



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.04.27 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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Great chapter... I still can't believe you made Harry to open the Chamber of Secrets, of all the people you could have chosen you chose Harry... now how will Ginny get to the Chamber of Secrets, unlis you've got other ideas about it. :) Update real soon, as I really like your story.

Author's Response: Oh, she'll be in the Chamber, alright...



Reviewer: murgel Signed Date: 2006.04.27 - 04:36AM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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I have just read both your stories in one pass. which is obviously a testament for their quality. I did like the first better though. The second had its absolut high in the Hat / Ginny conversation. a bit less insight into Tom's planning could have increased the tension a bit, but that is just me. I am looking forward to the updates.

Author's Response: The insight into Tom's head is A) Fun to write, and B) Necessary to keep the ff.net community from biting my head off about Harry not noticing something is wrong with him. You've learned from his plotting that he can alter and supress memories, implant suggestions, and of course, possess Harry.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2006.04.26 - 11:04PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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Fantastic Fic.

Like the Slytherin angle.

But wonder if your going to bring in The sword?

Question is for me is who will save who this time?

Maybe Gin and Hermi going after Harry? Or even Ron or the twins helping out.

Anious for more

Ja ne

Jim

Author's Response: Yes, the sword will be involved...somehow.

I only ask this: why is it always the kid's job?



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2006.04.26 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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Wonderful story, I look forward to the future chapters. S.



Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.04.26 - 11:29AM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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*thumbs up*
Your story seems to be developing very nicely! I'm glad the attacks aren't going to be like the ones in canon, that would be quite boring... and I'm dying of curiosity right now! How long will it be until someone suspects Harry for real (aka, with evidence)? I believe Snape already does, judging by his reaction to the last attack... the question is, will he voice his thoughts before it's too late? And what about Ginny? She is aware Harry may be the culprit of the attacks, even if she refuses to believe it... how long till it all clicks into place? Is it she who will rescue Harry? Worse... is it Ron (I actually like the canon character very much, but you made me dislike yours, lol. That's a good sign!)? I don't believe it'll be Hermione, her being muggleborn and all...
Ron and Dean asking for Penelope's help? Did they see her snogging Percy too or what?
I'm glad you showed us a bit of Ginny's Slytherin-ish side! Though hat was quite a low kick, using Dean's family issues and all that... I believe that if canon Ginny didn't get sorted into Slytherin, it was because everyone she knew (and adored) was in Gryffindor and she had been taught to despise Slytherins. She is a Slytherin, more than a Gryffindor. As for Harry, I think there must be a reason why he (in canon) almost got sorted into Slyhterin, such as his ambition, which I would like to believe will be the source of some kind of temptation... as for your Harry, he's a very well-constructed character, he came from a different experience, but I wonder if the results won't be similar... for he's going to suffer, isn't he?
What a rant!
Take care.

Note: This review is almost identical to the one I left in FF.net, only cut in some parts due to the obvious difference between the archives... I'm glad you've posted everything here, this archive is a bit more... cosy. For when is the next update? ;)

Author's Response: Glad to see I have followers. I've just started Chapter 11; I've got the unholy barage of standardized tests coming up (SAT, three SAT IIs, ACT, and APs), so I've been busy.



Reviewer: LolaPotter Signed Date: 2006.04.26 - 06:45AM Title: Chapter 10: Weasel's Folly

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well, now i´m really impressed....
your new story is really amazing, i am so interested, in how it goes on... i hope you will update so fast like before... but most of all, i´m so interested, who will get down in the chamber and who will save this person... :-)

Author's Response: That is indeed the question. I'll say this: Philosopher's Stone will be easily the most true to canon...eh, maybe Darkness Rising. This one differs dramatically, and I'll be utterly shocked if anybody anticipates the rather surprising ending to this one.




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