|
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.08 - 07:05PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
well I do think that Daphne is right Harry can lead them through this war and think he is very pwerful hopefully your story does a better job of showing that than JK's last book and I do like you showing Harry and Ginny together right now seems like they are growing closer while seemingly not knowing it.
Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.16 - 11:51PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
No Review
Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 02:42PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Outstanding and moving chapetr. well done
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 04:11PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
those last few lines reminded me of Fate's Debt. good chapter! i'm glad that daphnie is going to start training him soon. though i do hope she figures that diary out soon! arrg on them all for that one!
CodeRomance
Reviewer: ShadeXH Signed Date: 2007.08.11 - 01:14AM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Brilliant. I assume Sirius is one the two people in Azkaban who could duel evenly with Daphne, then?
Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2006.05.27 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
It's so nice to have your story to read over this holiday weekend.
Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.05.02 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Eh eh, a little bit on our dear and a bit scary Daphne! I tell you, I feel almost fascinated for this character, she can be so... imprevisible! No one knows when she'll explode or have a sentimental crisis... I'd like to see her in a real battle, that would be very nice indeed. What I find a bit odd is that she won't attempt to know more about "Tom", even if she doesn't suspect him... but I suppose it must be that way for the story to work.
I read a review response about the end of this book... you got me curious, what could be that shocking? A murder? Some gruesome scene of torture? Oh come on, don't keep us waiting like this! Update ASAP and take care!!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response: (grins evilly)
Reviewer: Tron Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 01:58PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Another great chapter!
I like how you have prevented Daphne from finding out Tom's full name. That would be too easy! At least she knows about the diary and is concerned about it. Harry's desperate attempt to prevent Ginny from touching it was explained, but it still left an imprint on Daphne.
In your response to my previous review, you said that some people might not like what you do with Ginny. As long as she doesn't turn into a killing machine or a tramp, I think you will be okay. She has to be tough to hang out with Harry and to survive in Slytherin. Besides that, she has had to hold her own against six brothers all of her life. Yep, she's tough - just like Harry. I don't like reading stories that has a weak Ginny. Her character has never seemed weak to me. So, if you make her hard to handle - that's fine with me.
I noticed the theme of this chapter seems to be trust. Daphne wants Harry to trust her and she wants to trust Harry. I look forward to seeing how Harry's stint as "The Heir of Slytherin" affects their relationship.
Also, I would expect Harry and Ginny to do the Slytherin thing and Harry teach Ginny everything he can. Just because he is teaching Ginny doesn't mean Molly Weasley has to ever find out. Now that I think of it, I would expect Slytherin Ginny to be more able to sneak around and do things that Molly would not like.
Thanks for a great story. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 07:19AM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Not a bad chapter, but not as good as some of the other chapters that I read, but it was good. So when are you going to put more in the story about Harry bring a Metamorphmagus, you said a bit about it in the last chapter, , but for that we haven't heard much. I would like to see what Daphne would do to make fate pay the debt that it owed Harry... Keep up the good work, and update date soon.
Reviewer: GryffKnight Anonymous Date: 2006.05.02 - 05:37AM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Wow that was a great chapter, thank you for writing a little of Daphne's past and thoughts. I think this story is unfolding nicely, I can't wait to see what happens with the diary and if in fact Ginny saves Harry this time. I do think Harry makes a pretty good Slytherin, keep up the great writing!
Reviewer: murgel Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 04:30AM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
nice and fluffy chapter.
I like theway you do the Harry /Diary relation AND make the H/G relation work.
Author's Response:
Author's Response: Fluffy? How in the name of God's green earth was that fluffy?
Reviewer: LolaPotter Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 02:38AM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
good job, i liked the background about the characters and i hope to learn more about ginny/harry... but i also interested in the harry/ginny/hermione relationship und you mentioned that it will be a shocking end, so please, don´t mess with time and write more... :-)
Reviewer: Falcoren Anonymous Date: 2006.05.02 - 02:36AM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
I liked the idea with a chapter in Daphnes pov, but I was looking forward to a little more H/G. I hope next chapter comes soon and that you continue your fight between Harry and Ron a long time,
10/10
Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2006.05.01 - 07:53PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Great chapter and story, I loved the first one, too. I just shudder to think what the reaction will be if the story goes on to what happened with the book. I'm intrigued how the diary Tom is getting Harry to do his dirty work. How will it affect his relationship with Ginny and Hermione? I hope he won't be alone in his third year. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: The end of this book is just shocking. Trust me, it's nothing like what anyone is expecting.
Reviewer: leia Anonymous Date: 2006.05.01 - 07:38PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
this is such a grat ideal. there is going to be so much more thing to guess with the hugh changes you've made. i like it.please update soon, can't wait to get to the other boks!
Reviewer: ChickenIsGood Anonymous Date: 2006.05.01 - 07:27PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
Nice chapter; it added a lot of background. There's really not much for me to say at this point, I prefer the parts at Hogwarts. Good Job-
Reviewer: Azabaza Signed Date: 2006.05.01 - 06:32PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
That was the most beautiful ending to a chapter I've ever read. Seriously.
Reviewer: Qt4167013 Signed Date: 2006.05.01 - 06:24PM Title: Chapter 12: Mother in All but Blood
That was intense but i think it was necessary-- we need to know a little bit more about Daphne and I think this chapter really helped. I'm glad that Daphne likes Ginny and i am DYING to see the Tonks/Ginny interaction you promised. You are a really fast updater and of that i am really greatful!! Harry does seem awefully immersed in that diary....good luck to him! Excited for the next update, great part!
