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Reviewer: runnerman87 Signed Date: 2008.04.13 - 09:31PM Title: Making Friends

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Harry and Hermione's dialogue is remarkably sophisticated, given that they're meant to be six. Granted that Hermione should be more than a bit precocious, but it's just unrealistic to expect children of that age to have developed empathy. At that stage of development, my understanding is that most kids still have difficulty thinking of people outside their immediate experience as "real people." Actually, some adults have trouble with that as well.



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.06.05 - 08:22AM Title: Making Friends

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Great two chapters, you are turely a great writer with this stroy and Leaping Into Magic... I can't wait to read Harry Potter and the Mask of Loki, keep up the godd work... as you are a great writer.



Reviewer: firephoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.06.01 - 06:40AM Title: Making Friends

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BRILLIANT!!!!! hurry up with the next chapter



Reviewer: lyric Signed Date: 2006.05.29 - 03:46AM Title: Making Friends

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Interesting chapter. It was spiffy! : ) When will the Granger's adopt Harry? Or am I assuming too much?
-Lyric



Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed Date: 2006.05.28 - 03:59PM Title: Making Friends

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This is really good. Please write more really soon, because i cant wait to read more. ~Ginny M~



Reviewer: pigwidgeon Signed Date: 2006.05.27 - 12:39AM Title: Making Friends

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Awesome story. I really likes this plot and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Update soon...



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 10:03PM Title: Making Friends

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ooh u must update soon! this was a really good story!



Reviewer: SilverPhoenix Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 04:02PM Title: Making Friends

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Oh, so cute again! This is a really great story idea, honestly. Only a couple of things I'd like to know--number one, it should be "Math" not "Maths" and number two, they have periods in first grade? The school I went to didn't have periods until sixth grade--but whatever, I'm not an expert on the schools of the world. That just confused me a little bit. Awesome story!



Reviewer: murgel Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 07:30AM Title: Making Friends

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this is quite a good start and should develop into a good story. Well crafted to this point.



Reviewer: gryffindorchaser17 Signed Date: 2006.05.25 - 10:52PM Title: Making Friends

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Very interesting story. Can't wait for more.



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.05.25 - 10:46PM Title: Making Friends

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I see that you addressed the matter of the protective wards. I am really enjoying both your characterization of Hermione and her interaction with Harry. While not as dramatic as the original, it is none-the-less facinating, and I think that we are in store for some more good chapters. I'm going to have to hit the Google site to see if they ever mentioned the Granrs'first names. Good job and thanks. Eric B.




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