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Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2010.05.27 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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That hurt.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.10 - 02:55AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

well I do like Harry learning the Prophecy sooner never understood why he waited as long as he did since it just seems foolish that you wouldn't let him know and grow magically and mature faster so he could be more prepared for it.



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.16 - 11:54PM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 06:47PM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Well, at least i hope it won't get Sirius killed if he learns it. Well done



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.09.22 - 10:53AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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so she told him without Dumbledore's permission which is fine if you ask me because harry needs to know...and I've just thought...has Sirius escaped yet? woooohhhh

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Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2006.06.15 - 10:40AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2006.06.15 - 10:39AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2006.06.15 - 10:38AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.06.12 - 10:52AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

Ego stroking, indeed. I'd like to know why, though... *frowns*
All the same, thank you very much, Chris. Believe me, it's a honour :)

Author's Response: Why? Because you read and review every chapter with detail and care, appreciate my storytelling, and still point out questionable things at the same time.



Reviewer: Tron Signed Date: 2006.06.09 - 03:12PM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Now this is what I call Drama! This is a very intense story you have going and I really enjoy reading it.

The floo exit was classic Harry. Poor fellow - or should I say lucky fellow?

I'm glad Tonks is okay and that Harry and Neville appear to have the beginnings of a friendship started.

Your writing seems to get better with each chapter. I have noticed an improvement since the first series as compared to the third. Please update soon! I need another dose of drama!



Reviewer: nevascared Signed Date: 2006.06.09 - 02:45PM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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if u want harry to deal with anger get him a guitar. helps u focus too



Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.06.09 - 10:23AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Nice chapter!
I'm glad that Tonks didn't die, that might throw Harry off the edge, and we don't want that, do we? At least for now...
The voices in Harry's head seem like Rowling's depiction of the Runespoor in "Fantastic Beasts...", the three heads that are always in conflict, you know? I find that highly amusing and disturbing at the same time. And how ironic indeed, to have Harry survive because of Riddle's magic!
May I dare to assume it was more than Riddle's magic that entered Harry's mind or... not?
Now, I've got another question for you. In canon, we learned that a spell "dies" when its caster dies. So... please correct me if I'm wrong... should Daphne die before Harry was ready to hold such an extraordinary amount of magic in his body, the situation would get a bit complicated...
I was delighted to read Neville's encounter with Harry too, mainly because I think Neville is an exaggerated portrait of many real people no one cares about, which is sad, in my opinion. Harry was very insightful there.
The scene between Harry and Ginny was amusing. Mrs Weasley's reaction was hilarious, really.
Tsk, tsk, listening at doors, how rude of Harry! ;) The guy knows how to be manipulative when he wants (something I think could have been explored a lot more in canon - if he could persuade Slughorn like that because Felix Felicis made him confident enough for that, there's a lot of unused potential there). I'm very satisfied with the way he's treating Daphne, so keep it coming, please. Anyway, I wonder what Harry's reaction to the prophecy will be AND how Dumbledore will react when he finds out Daphne told him the truth. I guess this means you'll be changing book 5 completely, eh?
One last question: when will we hear from Sirius again?
That's all. Take care and update as soon as you can. Please!

Author's Response: I'm going to officially dub you my no. 1 fan. Congratulations.

After that exercise in ego gratification, I'll talk about the actual story. Yes, it is very ironic. It also makes it look less like a shameless Super!Harry story. Harry might be able to throw Death Eaters around like confetti at somepoint, but it will be very draining...and there's that small problem that Voldemort can do it too. He doesn't often, for the reason I gave: using powerful magic without a wand is exhausting and a measure of last resort.

I like Neville. I don't like the way Rowling handled him, but I think that he's capable of a great deal. He's going to be quite important in this story.

As for Sirius? He hasn't actually escaped yet.

Book five will be very different. There will be a huge original subplot that will begin with the prologue. Obviously, I'm not telling you what it is. You can also draw a conclusion about the climax via the title. Keep in mind that, with the exception of Harry, I'm fully willing to kill off anyone. I won't sucoomb to the trap of making casualities out of minor, insignificant characters like Hannah Abbot or Anthony Goldstein. War is Hell. People die. Remember that.



Reviewer: 3amCel Signed Date: 2006.06.09 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

Isent he a bit harsh towards Daphne..
If he is so mature as you make him sometimes, he should could see there werent not that many other options than what she did in the chamber, than killing him...He's really anoying me now...None the less a good story, well written :)
Keep up the good work, and update soon again.!


Author's Response: He'd be much more considerate of that fact if he was perfect. However, just like everyone else, he's not. He makes mistakes, and they tend to be big ones. He suffered alot because of Daphne, and with Tom obliterated, he blames her for his suffering. Nor has Daphne told him the entire story - she is still ashamed of her actions as well.



Reviewer: 3amCel Signed Date: 2006.06.09 - 08:34AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Isent he a bit harsh towards Daphne..
If he is so mature as you make him sometimes, he should could see there werent not that many other options than what she did in the chamber, than killing him...He's really anoying me now...None the less a good story, well written :)
Keep up the good work, and update soon again.!



Reviewer: EmeraldFire Anonymous Date: 2006.06.09 - 04:05AM Title: Chapter 4: Burden of a Destiny

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Another great chapter, looking forward to more :)




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