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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.12 - 01:54AM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

Well done do like Harry starting to get allies though I do think Hermione isn't going to be set off the trail so easily think she will get right back onto it very soon so Harry will only have a slight break from Hermione the bloodhound



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.16 - 11:54PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 07:45PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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Hehe. this is getting interesting, well done



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.09.22 - 12:18PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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bloody hell SIRIUS! you cant kidnap harry! oh my gosh what an idiot! that will only reinforce his belief that your a dark wizard! i cant believe you! stupid idiot!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.02.02 - 01:44AM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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Loving the stories. I have been reading through them steadily for the past 2-3 days. I've also added the 4th to favs, even though I have not gotten that far yet. Very interesting twists.

You might want to watch the changes of tense. You'll be in second or third tense and all of the sudden the word "I" pops up. Also, you might want to look back through the first few chapters of this one. Somewhere you forgot to do the /i. You gave a warning about violence, saying that it was in italics...but the whole story has been in italics since the first few chapters. Just trying to help!

Michelle



Reviewer: TrueBlueJP90 Signed Date: 2006.06.22 - 03:08PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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A great chapter for sure Chris. Outstanding work, really. I've followed the series for a while now, and finally decided to review. One of my favorite stories, right along with Fate's Debt by Intromit. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more.

~Josh



Reviewer: Horus Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 08:34PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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love love love it. Cant wait to see harry interact with more of the students.
I like how harry looks at percy. It would be really fun to see a parcy on the side of harry instead of like he is in the books.

Again great work 10/10 and keep em comming :)



Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.06.21 - 03:55PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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Very good chapter. You seem to be one either for very informative chapters or for very "agitated" ones. I believe this one goes in the former cathegory.
So, was Blaise Zabini the male friend you had planned for Harry? I would think so, judging by the contents of this chapter... and doesn't it seem ironic that Hermione will have someone to bicker with again?
All that conversation was very Slytherin. Power, power and power... I tell you, Harry is a bit too cold at this stage, but I suppose it must be that way for his own good... I wonder if we will meet an hindrance caused by our dear Dumbledore (I love the character, mind you... he may be convinced he rules the world, but at least he means well) once he learns of Harry's plans to "get popular".
The Dementor scene was good to read, too. I was wondering whether you would rewrite it or not... hopefully, this time there wasn't anyone around who could give away the fact that the now-not-so-golden boy fainted... was there? ;)
I absolutely love Remus, can't help it... I fully understand his alarm, given his past, and I do think myself that Harry is going to enter very dangerous territory - I don't think the purebloods are very good allies... at least, in the sense that they're not the kind of allies that are with one through and through, they're far smarter than that. Unfortunately for Harry, I reckon. Still, he needs influence and they can rovide him with that, like you've been telling us readers. I liked Harry calling Remus by his given name - that was a bit of a giveaway, I reckon. The trunk only said RJ Lupin, after all.
Ah, Sirius, your foot's in it, man! It was your fault that those things entered the train! Honestly, I would like to now what kind of favour Bane owes him... a centaur and a human... that might be interesting... and how in Hell does he plan to approach Harry?
I hope you can get another chapter out by next week - can you manage it? That'd be brilliant...
Take care! :)

Author's Response: Power is the name of the game. But while I may not have made this absolutely clear, Harry's sense of urgency and ambition are running away with him right now. He's going to find out that making any adult consider him an equal is going to be rather difficult. Harry's setting himself up for a reality check, one that Hermione and Ginny will not hesistate to administer.



Reviewer: Tron Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 01:27PM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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Wow! Now this chapter was deep!

I like how Ginny keeps reminding Harry that he is just thirteen. I do wonder if a thirteen year old boy/man has the maturity to be thinking like this? I know Harry is beyond his years, but this seems to be really out there. I'm not complaining, but I am wondering how this will direct the path of your stories. Is Harry going to turn into someone looking for the next chance to make an alliance? That sounds like something Malfoy would do, but I guess it is just the Slytherin in him coming out.

I sometimes wonder about your version of Ginny. I know canon doesn't give us much to go on, but when comparing your Ginny to your Harry and Hermione - she seems to come across as childish sometimes. Maybe it is just me. I guess I want her to be more of an equal to them instead of a tag-a-long. It would seem that I'm thinking of her as the character was thinking of herself when she visited Harry at his home. I know she is not as important to Harry as Hermione is, but I get the feeling she is well aware of that.

Great story! Great chapter! Please update again soon!


Author's Response: At this moment, making Ginny grow up is probably the greatest concern I have. Your description of her at this point is rather accurate. I think I've got some ideas to slowly morph her personality. In terms of Harry's grandiose ambition, don't forget that its entirely possible he's biting off more than he can chew. Simply because he doesn't know the full contents of the Prophecy doesn't rid him of the sense of urgency, which is this case is decidely unhealthy. Don't think Ginny and Hermione will let him grow up quite that fast either,



Reviewer: Ginnyrules Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 05:35AM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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Very good chapter again. I like where you are going with the story. It will be interesting to see how Harry comes into his own great power, boosted by the extra acculmination.



Reviewer: EmeraldFire Anonymous Date: 2006.06.21 - 01:45AM Title: Chapter 7: A Question of Blood

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That chapter wasn't too bad, maybe not quite the shock factor that some of the previous chapters had but still good. Your doing a great job with this story so far, looking forward to more :)




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