Reviewer: piltad Signed
Date: 2008.06.17 - 01:39PM
Title: Chapter 10: Watch the Skies
Well seems like you have made Harry very mature that is just a little stretch I am thinking but other than that slight flaw the story is amazing.
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed
Date: 2007.09.22 - 03:08PM
Title: Chapter 10: Watch the Skies
ok that last line was confusing i must say....i dont really get that...but ok...and i'm glad snape is being much more civil to harry that was quite interesting! and blaise! well i'm impressed with him too...hermione and ginny however! well i dont know...and and sirius and remus and just all of them arggg on everyone in this chapter! LOL
CodeRomance
Reviewer: Treecat Signed
Date: 2006.07.12 - 11:38AM
Title: Chapter 10: Watch the Skies
'Twas good, as ever, I like that Hagrid is able to help Harry, he is a bit neglected by some authors. Update soon!
Treecat
Reviewer: CruciareMors
Anonymous
Date: 2006.07.03 - 08:34AM
Title: Chapter 10: Watch the Skies
Nice chapter, as always.
I have to tell you that I somewhat dislike canon-Hagrid (though he's a good fellow, he's a bit besotted), and you made me like your insightful version of him. I couldn't agree more with the guy.
I have a feeling that those tryouts didn't serve any purpose... I'll just have to wait and see, I guess.
I reckon Ginny's too insighful for someone who is only 12. From the group of 4 "friends", only Hermione seems to be acting truly her age... and Blaise, perhaps.
The conversation between Harry and Zabini was interesting to read, though Blaise could just as easily be faking his fondness of Harry (I doubt it, but, with you, I never know, do I?). I'm looking forward to seeing those Occlumency lessons too... ;)
Now, Daphne... that never-ending mystery of a woman... I now understand her take on the scene, even though I do not agree with it. The reference in those last lines goes to Sirius, right? She should be more feared than Sirius (Orion)... but who is the "he" that must fear her?
Take care!
Author's Response: 'Orion' was just her stargazing. Orion is the 'hunter.' Sirius is the dog star, so the implications are obvious. Artemis was one of the Greek Goddesses of the Moon, and the goddess of the hunt. She's saying that rather than the hunters, it is she he should fear. It's kind of stupid, but it sounded strange and cool...