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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.19 - 01:46PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

Well I wish you would of kept Prongs but alas you do things your own way and hopefully for some reason the snake thing takes on a bigger role I mean yeah you can make some weak points for it to be his Patronus but Prongs had a deeper connection than this snake does but hey that is just my thoughts.



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.16 - 11:56PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.09.22 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was soo sweet! and harry already having feelings for ginny! OH my! wow! oooh im so excited!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: Storm Anonymous Date: 2006.08.02 - 05:17PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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Brilliant.. I just found your series the other day and Ive been glued to the screen as I read. I give you a major thumbs up.. Harry being in Slytherin is a great idea. Keep up the good work.

-Storm-



Reviewer: Treecat Signed Date: 2006.08.02 - 02:03AM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

Ah, yes, sorry.
Treecat



Reviewer: Treecat Signed Date: 2006.08.01 - 05:07PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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Why the unusually long waits? I'm not hurrying you, but... Hurry up?
Your fan
Treecat

Author's Response: LONG WAITS? I really I've spoiled you, but writing a 9,000 word chapter in four days is hard. Plus, my beta has a life of his own.



Reviewer: L_J_4eva Signed Date: 2006.08.01 - 05:25AM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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With your crack about 'spiritual connections', you might get people like 'Intromet' and 'bengpotter31' on your case. LOL!

Author's Response: Intromit's story is extremely well written, and appeals to a community such as this. I enjoy it myself. But I'm appealing to a different audience, and a number of my readers elsewhere think the idea is absurd.



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2006.07.31 - 04:16PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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ok this is my first revie on this site and as i have been following this story from the start id review youtrs first. overall this story is excellent the idear of ginny in slytherine was inspired although i would like to see more of this sode of her as being surrounded by pure bloods and snape must have some affect on her out look on life. the other great idea was to give harry and hermione great power but not the control to use it as this turns and advantage for them in to a haddicape. finally i love harrys new patronus very slytherine it alos ledds me to think that harry hasnt got the kind of control over his power that he thinks he has. any wayy keep up the excellent standered and please post soon.



Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous Date: 2006.07.31 - 07:26AM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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It seems like everytime I walk away from the computer for a few days, someone decides it's time to update. Sorry for the lateness.
Hooray for Harry's feelings for Ginny... 13 seems like an appropriate age, lol. I wonder what she thought when he felt that urge to kiss her - I got the impression she knew...
I felt a bit surprised that you decided to have Harry tell Blaise about Hermione's powers. Your Harry doesn't seem to be the type to trust people easily, much less make friends with someone this fast, especially someone that seems ambiguous, like Blaise. Still, and if you are planning to have them be good friends (and, unless I'm mistaken, build up a relationship for Hermione), I reckon it had to be done and that Harry has to take his risks.
Very good point there, though. Harry didn't remember to ask Daphne for help even when he perceived her as some sort of idol. May I dare to assume that his ambition and urge to prove himself got in the way of his thoughts back then?
I truly pity Remus. The guy, though a bit out of the frame (know what I mean?), means well, and the only thing Harry seems capable of doing is telling him to bugger off. That Patronus scared m a little. Even in his harsher version, Harry doesn't trike me as being that malicious - or, as you put it, poisonous - not to the point to resembling a adder *shudders* I'm not very fond of snakes, I'm afraid, lol. Let's see if that's this time around that remus accpets Harry for what he is and not for what he "should have" been...
Very good chapter, this was. Take care!

Author's Response: While Harry trusts Blaise, it's pretty clear that Hermione doesn't, and that's a bit of a problem. Rest assured she and Harry will have a talk in the near future.

Ginny was just confused by why Harry was suddenly so embarassed and confused. She might have the slightest inking, but based on the fact that Harry spent a great deal of the previous year trying to anihilate her crush, she'd dismiss it...right?



Reviewer: Roxy Signed Date: 2006.07.30 - 12:09AM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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Great start! I'm a little disappointed that Sirius doesn't know about Wormtail being there in the castle and that he escaped with pretty much no chance at being considered innocent. It was stupid on his part. It's great though. I can't wait for an update. I'm definitely hooked on this series!

Author's Response: The climax of this book is going to be absolutely wild, with several different parties, all after Harry, colliding with one another in several confused melees. Trust me, without the Time-Turner, I can be very creative.



Reviewer: leia Anonymous Date: 2006.07.28 - 04:17PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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update soon, love these storys



Reviewer: Crazygal4lyf Signed Date: 2006.07.27 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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I just want to thank you for being blessed with the incredible gifts of great timing and wonderful writing skills.
I haven't reviewed yet, and was about to review the previous chapter when I saw the new one up.
I love the way Harry reacted to his feelings for Ginny, It was very funny.
I also love the way that Remus reacts to Harry, though it alarms me that Harry is already 'gathering followers' and not even of his free will. Of course, that's the part of me that's hooked.
All in all, a wonderful chapter from a wonderful story.



Reviewer: EmeraldFire Anonymous Date: 2006.07.27 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 13: Confusing Signals

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Excellent chapter, I think it was extremely amusing how Harry started reacting to Ginny, brilliant! Interesting patronus indeed, shows the change in character from Canon Harry. Looking forward to how you take things from here, great writing :)




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