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Reviewer: ReaderRabbit Signed Date: 2010.07.12 - 10:13PM Title: Snape's Story

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I am relieved about the switch in plans, but am now irritated in the unfairness of the Harry hating. I mean assuming that all the events of the books happened prior to now except for Ginny's tale Harry is hardly arrogant. I also find that while I understand Ginny's anger with in limits I think that you have taken to an extreme that is slightly unrealistic.

We will see I guess.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.19 - 10:03PM Title: Snape's Story

well maybe not dark ginny will say not to pleased to read that but at the same time it would of been something new and out there not that your story isn't still



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.23 - 05:41PM Title: Snape's Story

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Reviewer: TGIF Signed Date: 2006.06.22 - 12:09AM Title: Snape's Story

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Great start to this story. I wasn't keen on the "Ginny as a Death Eater" thing when I read the description but after your first chapter I didn't care as long as the writing was this good!

I don't think Harry is being portrayed as a fool. Look at who was in this last chapter. Ginny - who's heartbroken at his decision and failure to notice her, and Snape who never liked him. Also there is Hermione who knows most of what Ginny does and can look at the situation in a different light. It is alot easier to avoid looking like a fool when you know all (or most of) the facts than just one side.

My questio nis why Hermione didn't tell Harry and Ron what the note said. I realize that she didn't want to worry them, but if she truly thought Ginny was joining the Death Eaters wouldn't she try to stop her friend?

Looking foward to the next update!



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 08:10PM Title: Snape's Story

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Great chapter, I'm happy that you didn't make Ginny into a Death Eater, but I have to argue that Harry is a fool... he might run into things, but he is no fool like you making him to be.

The only reason he runs into things is that no-one not even Dumbledore teached him other wise. If he was told what he must do sooner, and Dumbledore teached Harry how to think ahead then things would be better.

People have give Harry a break, as he doesn't know another way to be.



Reviewer: ready2run2006 Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 05:45PM Title: Snape's Story

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You had me worried there for a moment with Ginny joining the Death Eater. I like the story with Lily and Snape. Great chapter! You have me hooked!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 04:49PM Title: Snape's Story

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Thank God Ginny doesn't want to become a DeathEater. This was a good background chapter and supplies even more motive for both Ginny and Snape the second cousin. I'm still in shock over Hermione's non-disclosure to Harry ..... and I expect him to be really pissed when he finds out all the very important information about Ginny withheld from him.



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 03:44PM Title: Snape's Story

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woa, that was an intrseting story for snape, it makes alot of sense... i wonder if some like that crops up int= the real n=book. hmmm, a brill read keep it up



Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 03:26PM Title: Snape's Story

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You have got me hooked... I cant wait to see where you go from here. Looking forward to your next update.




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