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Reviewer: ReaderRabbit Signed Date: 2010.07.13 - 05:18PM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

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Wow you managed to throw some Ron into Ginny. " In Harry's shadow now". For someone who is suppose to be mature that is such a teen thing to think. The reality that you've created is that she really nothing more that a jealousy pouty teen. Give me recognition, see what I can do, If you don't let me play I'll just take my ball and play on my own, I can't have my way so I'm going to do everything I can to show you I'm better than you. COME on Ginny Grow up and think rationally instead of emotionally.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.20 - 02:27AM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

Well i took a break from reading to come back thinking and hoping past reviews have been alot more Criticism than I have in the past I hope that doesn't bother you. I want you to know I really do enjoy this story alot and that you are a wonderful author I think I am more of a critic since this is a very orignial story I haven't read anything quite like it so I want more out of it and the best out of it if that makes sense.

But onto the review..... Love this chap thats 2 in a row and I am quite pleased about that. But the things I am disliking is that you have Harry take that pretty well I really saw him blowing up and likely leaving the group and going solo. Thats what I saw I just don't know if you made that big of a deal out of it this is a very GINNY and HERMY story they are kinda doing everything while the rest kinda run around and not do to much. While I don't have a problem with the girls taking a stand I do believe they are powerful I just think you are letting things come to easy to them like how no one cares Ginny is off on there own Hermy keeps some big secrets but hey its all good attitude im not liking that at all hopefully start seeing Ron and Harry start coming into there own also.

I understand that this story is mainly about Ginny but I think as soon as you added Hermy and let her do whatever and control the boys something that just doesn't happen you needed to bring Harry and Ron into it also not left them out in the rain.

And im sorry if you thought I was being kinda of a butt in my reviews I don't mean to be and sorry for past and future spelling and grammer errors. Also I call Hermione in all posts Hermy since im lazy hopefully that doesn't bother you.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.23 - 11:38PM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

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Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.06.27 - 04:46PM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

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You are sure sticking to your plot of having Hermione act in Ginny's best interests rather than Harrys' ..... which drives me nuts ....... I thought Voldemort was the main objective. Altho' Harry listened to Hermione, I am perplexed why he hasn't put more clues together and really gotten mad at Hermione yet.

Now that Ginny is more aware of how and why she became a horcrux, I am glad she howed up to the trio's apartment, and it is left kind of open as to whether she was ready to talk to Harry yet. Perhaps we'll find out next chapter, unless hermine talks Ginny out of disclosing this infformation ...... in which case I'll be sending many RED HOWLERS.

Your story is top of my list for reading updates. Please update soon.



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.06.27 - 06:11AM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

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I don't care what Hermione think is right or wrong, SHE HAS TO TELL HARRY, he cares for her, and he would want ot know about this... if she dosen't tell Harry everything, then she's a fool and in the wrong. In all his fralts, Harry needs to know so he can do something about it... if she wants Harry to defeat Voldemort, Hermione MUST till Harry.

Great chapter by the way, keep up the good work, and update soon. by the way my next chapter of my story is up, could you and all of your reader, when you've got time read and review??



Reviewer: ready2run2006 Signed Date: 2006.06.26 - 11:10PM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

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Another great chapter! Excellent writing!

Finally, an explanation on why Ginny was chosen as a horcrux. It's definitely AU but it makes a lot of sense! Like I said, excellent writing!



Reviewer: TGIF Signed Date: 2006.06.26 - 10:42PM Title: What Was Bound To Come Up

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I am gald you addressed how Ginny was made into a Horcrux and why. I was wondering - why Ginny? He picked all these important artifacts why would he choose a random baby? It was a great way to explain it.

Also, I like that Harry found out at least some of what Ginny is up too. And even though he doesn't know the rest he KNOWS there is more he doesn't know. (if that makes sense)




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