Reviews For Fighting Harry
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2010.08.28 - 10:35AM Title: In the End I read this story in one sitting. I just could not put it down. What a phenominal piece of writing. Edge of the seat and emotional all rolled into one. Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.20 - 04:48AM Title: In the End YUCK........... LOL but seriously you went to far out of your way to make this a very dark story by showing people's worst features. You tried to get love and trust into the story but you completely dismantled it way to early in your story. Unfortanatly it seems like there was two people writing this story for awhile I didn't think there was no way in the world that I would finish this it was that bad but towards the end you made a comeback the thing I would say is you shouldn't of left the love and trust come at the end that was Harry's power in your world if I am right but you didn't give it to him at all you only did it when it became obivious to you I think that he needed it at the end to win against old Tom. There was parts were your true brillance shown through but there was more parts were it was a very hard read and im thinking maybe alot of ppl gave up on. BUT this is all my ideas on your story and how it was hopefully you feel alot more happier than I do about the finished product. Reviewer: Aethonan Signed Date: 2007.06.06 - 10:19PM Title: In the End Dumb ending...it just doesn't seem to fit the rest of the story. But the rest of the story is completely addictive. I stayed super late to finish it! Even if I didn't like the end I would definetely read anything else you wrote. Keep up the good work! Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.29 - 09:19AM Title: In the End well, that was a bloody long time coming. Reviewer: aurorasky Signed Date: 2007.05.29 - 02:05AM Title: In the End excellent ending to an amazing story! Reviewer: Jonathan Brenner Signed Date: 2007.05.28 - 10:00PM Title: In the End Excellent story! I look forward to reading anything else you have or may write. Reviewer: lolamadrid Signed Date: 2007.05.28 - 03:17PM Title: In the End you did a really great job with this story. I liked the acceptance they come to with each other at the end, but it was a tad rushed for me or rather a bit abrubt there at the end. will there be an epilogue? If not (or even if so) i'm all in for the sequel! Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2007.05.28 - 03:06PM Title: In the End HURRAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Epilogue/ sequel PLEASE! | |||||||
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