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Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.08.12 - 02:24PM Title: Birthday Surprise.
Still loving the story I think you are doing a good job with Harry, the mix of the young boy and the young man. I hope you plan on telling Ginny about Harry much sooner than later. I find it a bit hard to believe that no one knows about Godric in the manor? Where was he that the information never made it to the Marauders?
Oh yes I know this has been written for a long time but I am not sure if your fingers are just getting ahead jof your brain, which happens to me quite frequently, or you forget who is talking? It gets a bit confusing.
Still love this and I an so glad I found it.
Tricia
Author's Response: Unfortunately Ginny doesn't learn the truth for a long time. actually she doesn't learn the full truth until the chapter I just updated. sorry.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.01.29 - 05:43PM Title: Birthday Surprise.
Harry has obviously got the marauders map and invisibility cloak sooner this time. I wonder how he will make use of them. Will he use them to sneak out of the castle to see ginny?... But that would need a lot of explaining to her.
I loved the present from mr and mrs weasley...that would have meant so much to him. I
Interesting thoughts from Sirius... I hadn't thought about the grieving process ... Now that he's mentioned it, it's bound to happen at some point...i hope Sirius has the chance to help him with it.
Looking forward to his first year at hogwarts and seeing how it compares to last time around...
Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2008.10.09 - 12:02PM Title: Birthday Surprise.
Well done on Fred and George. Great read
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.12.29 - 09:48PM Title: Birthday Surprise.
this chapter was really good. I jsut started laughing when you had harry saiying:" shes only ten for goodness sake, becuase i had my first boy freind at 10.
Reviewer: Cole Signed Date: 2006.09.05 - 05:06PM Title: Birthday Surprise.
Starting to get moving, still need to fix grammar, incorrect words.
Reviewer: Baby_Huey Signed Date: 2006.08.23 - 02:43PM Title: Birthday Surprise.
with all of the gramatical errors, i am beginning to think that english is not you first laguage. If this is true then you are doing a wonderfull job. If it is not true then you have some work to do
Author's Response: i guess i have on hell of alot of work to do. blame my beta reader if you want :P
Author's Response: Just noticed what chapter that is. since that chapter and the latest ones i ahve changed beta reader. is there anythign like this in the later chapters?
