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Reviews For Erasing The Future

Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.06.25 - 08:09AM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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Sorry, but where is it moving to? I want to keep reading it and would not want to lose track of it.

oh yeah so i should review and tell you i think it's a fun story and, er...eah two thumbs up lol.



Reviewer: potters_girl Signed Date: 2007.06.24 - 03:42PM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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aww i really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one. Please update!



Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 12:32PM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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hey, are you still going to continue to post this story here and FF?

Author's Response: When pheonix comes out i will be stopping on ff.net and on here and posting exclusivly on pheonix, if i like the site. if not i'll just post on all three



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 07:56AM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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great chapter!1



Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 01:13AM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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Awwww...

You love torturing us, dont you? You have them nearly kiss twice. Growlness.

I think that Harry might slip at some point and end up having to tell his friends and the like about him being from the future. I almost hope he does.

I also am curious to see what happens at the end of this year. Will Ginny somehow get the diary and end up in the chamber. It was weird, but a few days ago, I had a dream concerning that. Strange. I dreamed that one of Gin's dormmates found the diary in Harry's trunk. Strange.

Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. It had funny parts and the lot.

I look forward to seeing what Rem does with the map. Jo and Sirius seem suitably matched; I like her. I hope they stay together.

Update soon? I love it. Please save us from the grueling wait and update very very soon!

~Tricia~



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.06.22 - 06:55PM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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I hope he kisses Ginny on New Year's Eve.



Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso Signed Date: 2007.06.22 - 06:41PM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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aww... that's so sweet!



Reviewer: Alanius Signed Date: 2007.06.22 - 06:02PM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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You've got two words mixed up. I encountered it in some earlier chapters, but now I'm finally leaving a review to tell you :)

'Properly' means correctly, in the right way

'Probably' means in the most likely case.

A just once this chapter, but a couple of times in the previous chapters you wrote 'properly' when you probably meant 'probably'. Additionally, probably is often abbreviated to 'prolly' in chat rooms, but you don't need to know that.

Can't wait till next update!



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2007.06.22 - 03:27PM Title: A Relaxing Christmas

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Harry needs to tell her everything now it will only get worse later, and he should just kiss her.

MPF




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