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Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed
Date: 2007.06.25 - 08:09AM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
Sorry, but where is it moving to? I want to keep reading it and would not want to lose track of it.
oh yeah so i should review and tell you i think it's a fun story and, er...eah two thumbs up lol.
Reviewer: potters_girl Signed
Date: 2007.06.24 - 03:42PM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
aww i really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one. Please update!
Reviewer: carolquin Signed
Date: 2007.06.23 - 12:32PM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
hey, are you still going to continue to post this story here and FF?
Author's Response: When pheonix comes out i will be stopping on ff.net and on here and posting exclusivly on pheonix, if i like the site. if not i'll just post on all three
Reviewer: Breanie Signed
Date: 2007.06.23 - 07:56AM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
great chapter!1
Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed
Date: 2007.06.23 - 01:13AM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
Awwww...
You love torturing us, dont you? You have them nearly kiss twice. Growlness.
I think that Harry might slip at some point and end up having to tell his friends and the like about him being from the future. I almost hope he does.
I also am curious to see what happens at the end of this year. Will Ginny somehow get the diary and end up in the chamber. It was weird, but a few days ago, I had a dream concerning that. Strange. I dreamed that one of Gin's dormmates found the diary in Harry's trunk. Strange.
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. It had funny parts and the lot.
I look forward to seeing what Rem does with the map. Jo and Sirius seem suitably matched; I like her. I hope they stay together.
Update soon? I love it. Please save us from the grueling wait and update very very soon!
~Tricia~
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed
Date: 2007.06.22 - 06:55PM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
I hope he kisses Ginny on New Year's Eve.
Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso Signed
Date: 2007.06.22 - 06:41PM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
aww... that's so sweet!
Reviewer: Alanius Signed
Date: 2007.06.22 - 06:02PM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
You've got two words mixed up. I encountered it in some earlier chapters, but now I'm finally leaving a review to tell you :)
'Properly' means correctly, in the right way
'Probably' means in the most likely case.
A just once this chapter, but a couple of times in the previous chapters you wrote 'properly' when you probably meant 'probably'. Additionally, probably is often abbreviated to 'prolly' in chat rooms, but you don't need to know that.
Can't wait till next update!
Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed
Date: 2007.06.22 - 03:27PM
Title: A Relaxing Christmas
Harry needs to tell her everything now it will only get worse later, and he should just kiss her.
MPF
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