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Reviews For Erasing The Future

Reviewer: Phoenix Tears Signed Date: 2008.11.10 - 07:08AM Title: Lessons With Ginny

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I think you may have to edit what you have of this story so far but you only have little things to consider fixing like a few misspelled words and little grammar mess ups. Also I've noticed that you use the word 'whilst' a lot when there are many words with similar meanings that might fit better.



Reviewer: potters_girl Signed Date: 2007.06.29 - 09:43AM Title: Lessons With Ginny

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great chapter! cant wait till next update



Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2007.06.28 - 01:15PM Title: Lessons With Ginny

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Great chapter! Good to see an update so soon. Looking forward to seeing how and when they get together. ~Jeff~



Reviewer: TedwardDietrek Signed Date: 2007.06.28 - 09:33AM Title: Lessons With Ginny

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Thank yo for another great chapter. I think I see where this is going where Harry Saves her not from the chamber but from her fears and confusion and from being controlled and it has the same effect. You are an amazing author and I truly look forward to each new chapter you write.



Reviewer: Myrkul Signed Date: 2007.06.28 - 05:40AM Title: Lessons With Ginny

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WOW, that was fast:) But great as always. I like the scene when Harry teaches Ginny, if only every teacher was so good:) And I must say I like this new Neville, he's lot better than canon one.




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