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Reviewer: starvalised_ham Signed Date: 2008.05.22 - 02:19PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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i'm so tired, i'm staying up half the night reading the rest of your chapters (i'm not sure if i've already submitted a review for your story in a different chapter but i'm too lazy to check and my memory is not serving me well..lol) Now that i've finished 'a savage attack' i'm reading 'the truth sweet' again...i mean, it's just sooo romantic!! how harry's boggart is ginny not loving him and how he comes to her rescue and shows off his wandless abilities just to save her?!!? how romantic can that be?

the little scene in the pensieve reminded me of the 'chamber of secrets' chapter. (i'm also too lazy and not to mention tired to go back to that chapter and review on that) that chapter was very nice too except that maybe you could;ve done more when they were down in the chamber. Anyways, the quidditch game was cool and how harry shouted at mcgonagal (sp?)...i'd give everyting i got just to see her face!! and also, the part where harry confesses his love for ginny in front of her family, i was wondering if bill and charlie were there to?? its quite sad really that ginny forgot but i'm glad that they definitely got back in the 'truth sweet' chapter!!!! aaagh! i'm soo happy...

ohh, i think i've babbled and disrupted your time long enough,,,g'night!! hope you can update soon!!

starvalised_ham
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Author's Response: The next chapter, Which im sure most people who read the reviews will be glad to here, is in the final stages, actualy its in the final scene of the chapter, however its kinda a couple thousand word scene, and truthfully, im not even sure if that's scene is going to go into the chapter. But anyway, its really close.



Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2007.11.11 - 03:46PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Thanks for the great chapter. W.



Reviewer: Ekul Signed Date: 2007.10.23 - 07:28PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Very good story. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Reviewer: turtle7 Signed Date: 2007.10.18 - 08:23PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2007.10.18 - 07:18PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Are you sure they're FINALLY together? Ginny isn't going to lose her memory again? Harry isn't going to push her away like he did in HBP? Together, together. Like as in forever? They better be or ELSE! Great chapter. ~Jeff~



Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso Signed Date: 2007.10.18 - 03:40PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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aaaah! wonderful chapter! i loooooove the fluff!



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2007.10.18 - 01:43PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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What a chapter, and they are finally togather. I wonder how Ginny is going to react to what happened to Harry in DADA. I bet that Malfoy is going to use the information he found out from Ginny to use aginst Harry later in this story. Also he is not going to mess with Harry or Ginny for awile.

Thanks for Writing
MPF



Reviewer: partypooper Signed Date: 2007.10.18 - 01:35AM Title: The Truth Sweet

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yayayayayayayayayay!!!!!!!!!!!! u updated!!!!!!!!!!!wha-hooooooooooooooo!! !!!!!!!!! hermione asks to many questions. and i bet that she'll pressure harry to show her wut he can do. peer pressure i tell u!!!!!!!!! peer pressure!!!!!!!



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 11:15PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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ooh truth is coming out - not all yet tho lol



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 11:05PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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I'm glad that they're together, and that Ginny told him off a bit, also pointing out that being a squib brought attention.
I think he should've broken one of Malfoy's legs when he found out Ginny's ankle was twisted.
He should've dumped the lemon drops on Snape's head. No matter whose side he is in the war, Snape is an evil man and shouldn't be in authority over anyone, especially children. They might be better off if Harry and Ginny got expelled together. I would never be able to put up with Snape.



Reviewer: Kingslee Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 09:02PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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I'm so glad their finally together. I wasn't surprised by the boggart but I was surprised by the way he confessed his feelings. I guess now will get to see just how powerful Harry is.



Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 07:09PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Great chapter. the fact that Harry and Ginny are finally together is just the icing on the cake after all the other details. Can't wait to see more. :) Chris



Reviewer: SRTW Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 02:16PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Cool i cant wait til the next chapter!!!!!



Reviewer: countesslaphoenix Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 02:08PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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well finally!!! gosh, you'd think they would be a bit quicker but no. i cried i admit it. it was soooo sweet.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 02:00PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Excellent chapter, love this story and looking forward to the next Chapter...



Reviewer: nonym7 Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 01:41PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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excellent chapter!



Reviewer: Atelier Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 01:20PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Great chapter, great story, can't wait for the next one! Wasn't expecting Harry to bat Malfoy around like a fly, but it was definitely welcome. Keep em coming!



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 12:36PM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Reviewer: cherrion Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 10:51AM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Fantastic chapter. I admit, I didnt think they would get together that way. Anyway I really enjoyed it.

Cant wait for the next one!!!



Reviewer: BeyondRedHorizons Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 09:15AM Title: The Truth Sweet

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Awww. Sweet is right. That definitely wasn't how I expected the confession to go, but that doesn't mean I didn't love it. Wonderful get together.

For a 20 something year old, though, Harry is really pretty dense. Pretending to be a Squib so that no one would pay any attention to him is right up there with giving Ginny the diary to make her love him for sheer bone-headedness.




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