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Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2013.10.30 - 08:21PM Title: The Fall of Hogwarts
I'm glad you're picking this up again. I felt this chapter was a bit heavy on the memories but it was good context to have.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2013.10.16 - 05:51AM Title: The Fall of Hogwarts
I found a small flaw in this chapter... all it would take to end the effect of the potion would be a Bezoar, since, in effect, the potion is a poison. Just my take on it. :)
Til the next chapter,
ILG
Author's Response: ah, yeah you know what, i didnt think of that :P
Reviewer: Hank Signed Date: 2013.10.06 - 06:17PM Title: The Fall of Hogwarts
Mox,
Good to see you back! I always did like this story. Very interesting. Don't worry about the plot holes. No story is perfect, but yours certainly is interesting. I look forward to your continuing with it.
Also, don't let the black cloud get you. Depression is a tough battle. If you need someone to trade emails with let me know. Been there, done that.
Best regards,
Hank
Reviewer: KMACKD Signed Date: 2013.10.06 - 02:11PM Title: The Fall of Hogwarts
It's a pleasant surprise to see this story update. I like this story and thought that you had given up. Good chapter. Hope to see more, especially Harry confronting Ginny with the truth. All my best to you as well in your life.
Reviewer: SakinaWithLove Signed Date: 2013.10.04 - 10:15PM Title: The Fall of Hogwarts
It was quite a surprise to see an update o this story - I had resigned myself to the fact that all the good stories here might always remain unfinished. having said that, I must say this chapter was amazing - I had been wondering about Harry"s problem with the Dementors but your reasons are very true - his fear and lack of trust remains as a wall that needs to conquered - the memories were truly awful, but I am not sure how the potion reached Harry. Anyhow, the update was truly amazing and worth the wait. Thank you so much for updating!
Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.10.04 - 08:54PM Title: The Fall of Hogwarts
Quite a bombshell, but I daresay Dumbledore is right. There is a lack of trust, a lack of oneness there, that I can easily see preventing him from fully embracing the power of her love, their love, as the fuel for his patrons. His memories are truly dreadful. Poor, poor Harry. Great to see another chapter. I hope things start pulling back together. Good luck.
