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Reviewer: Greencolt Signed Date: 2006.12.22 - 10:56PM Title: Chapter Four: Painful Reminders
I love the similarities between the old and the young but yet... They are still differnt. It seems to me that pride in these families runs deep, too deep. I have a good notion this story will take a wack at demolishing that wall of pride
Author's Response: We can only hope. You are right about the pride though. I made a point of making that an issue.
Reviewer: PottersGirl13 Signed Date: 2006.12.05 - 09:40PM Title: Chapter Four: Painful Reminders
ahhhh! i cant wait for an update- you havent in a while! you left us hanging!!! pleaseee update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, update will be soon I hope!
Reviewer: I_love_hpforever Signed Date: 2006.10.28 - 11:55AM Title: Chapter Four: Painful Reminders
YAY!!! I'm SO happy!! And this happened on the best day also because my biggest competition of the year is today and I was really freaking....but YAY!!!!!!!!!! Ok so I've been waiting awhile....but I totally get crazy life. Right now I keep saying the world is a ride....and I want OFF! But anyways onto the story!!! Ok so I really like this chapter and though not a LOT of drama was in it...it's nessasary. For me...I don't think Jack realizes he still loves Lily. He know's he doesn't love Ally, but I don't think he knows what love is anymore. At least this is from my perspective. He is saying stuff he is of course going to be mad about saying later...but some things probably needed to be said. Yes, Lily would have come back if he asked...but he begged her to stay so I think it's both their faults and since they both seem to have tempers...well we can just imagine. Now I'm also wondering, when's Malfoy going to come in??? I hope soon....still have a few plans of hanging him by...ok off topic again. I really liked this chapter and I LOVE this story. You are just an amazing writter and every day I look for an update and I was so happy today. I don't care how long it takes I will wait for this story to finish, I love it so much and you are just a great writter. Can't wait for the next update, TOODLES!
~Kat
Author's Response: Lol, I can always count on you leave me a really good review! I'm glad you liked the chapter! Yes, live is really busy right now, but I really am trying to get this story written. I'm actually working on it now. It's coming along, slowly but surely. As for Malfoy, I know I've been telling you this a lot (in pretty much every review) but Malfoy will get his. Soon. I promise! Thanks again for the review! I look forward to hearing from you next time!
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.10.28 - 11:31AM Title: Chapter Four: Painful Reminders
Jack is such a blind pompous ass. It appears he is going to get his ass kicked real good too by Adam whem Adam realizes he should pursue Lily. Yhe big question is: will Lily recognize that Jack is a hopeless case and move on, or will she hold on for more time?
Author's Response: Lol, well I guess you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for the review!
