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Reviewer: I_love_hpforever Signed Date: 2007.03.07 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter Six: Admittance
Ok....last to review AGAIN....-_-.....sorry and again I didn't see it update and just did me weekly check on it and BOOM...chapter 6. *rolls eyes* BUT I didn't forget and I never will. I plan on reviewing EVERY chapter to till the end! Ok, so the begining was good. The thing with Allie...yes it had to end and I like how she understood that Jack has always loved Lily and always will no matter what. I also like how you had Jack admit that he loves her, but not EVERYTHING about her. Even the people we love have things we don't like and admitting that is good. Just saying that you love EVERYTHING about them is stupid...because you can't. And I LOVED how Jack explained their relationship....'friends.....who just happened to.....sleep together.' totally perfect! ^_^ I loved Jacks speech to Lily. We all knew it would have to come sometime and I LOVE it. I like how they forgave each other like this but I just have a small feeling that there will be more. A simple 'I'm sorry' isn't going to fix things perfectly...it never has. Of course if I'm wrong just slap me in the face and say NO...but that's just my gut feeling. Also...MALFOY! MALFOY, MALFOY, MALFOY! I still have plans for him. Muh ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! *ignore evil laughing.....YOU HAVE NO PROOF!* j/k. Can't wait for the next chapter. Again, loved the chapter. I have no idea what movie inspired this....but I have a feeling I've seen it. *ponders* nope....still nothing. O-well....I'll just have to wait.
~Kat
Author's Response: I knew I'd hear from you before all was said and done. I wanted the conversation between Jack and Lily to be real. They have a very real relationship with very real issues. You're going to see in the next chapter that they still have some things to work through. Jack knows he still loves her, but he hasn't told her that. Malfoy will be handled. I think I like dragging it out because it gives dramatic affect! They talk about Malfoy in the next chapter. We don't see him, but he's talked about. I guess I've given enough of the next chapter away! It should be up when I get it back from my beta! Always nice to hear from you again!!!
Reviewer: PottersGirl13 Signed Date: 2007.03.03 - 02:09PM Title: Chapter Six: Admittance
YAYYY! you updateddd! soo happy! imm sooooo glad that lily and jack are good now!!! ....hmm but what has malfoy been up to lately? we haven't heard much of himm....
Author's Response: Malfoy is a topic in the next chapter. He has been kind of quiet so far, and there is a reason for that. More of Jack and Lily next chapter as well! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2007.03.01 - 06:19AM Title: Chapter Six: Admittance
Thanks goodness. Finally! I'm glad they've reached this point. I've been avidly following your stories and was quite upset with the way the last one ended. I was wondering how they would patch things up. I know they're not out of the woods yet but it's a good start. You really know how to keep people in suspense. Good job! Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that the ending of the last story made you try to stay away from my stories! I didn't like ending it that way, but I think it had to be done. They needed time apart to learn and grow. Things will work out in the end, though. I promise. Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: LolaPotter Signed Date: 2007.03.01 - 05:19AM Title: Chapter Six: Admittance
hm, but where do they go from there?
good as always
Author's Response: That is a good question. Where do they go from here? I cut this chapter off because my beta and I felt it was raher long. A lot more gets resolved in the next chapter, trust me. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.02.28 - 10:11PM Title: Chapter Six: Admittance
Allie finally ended their relationship and opened the door for Jack to pursue Lily. Now that Jack finally understands his feelings with much needed support from his family ...... he was finally able to confront his demons and have an honest and forgiving talk with Lily. The final scene of them holding hands on grass couldn't have been more romantic.
Author's Response: That is def. what I was going for with that scene. This chapter was a turning point for Jack. I thought about excluding the part with Jack and Allie, but I thought it was important to show that she really did care about him and that she was a good person. Jack wouldn't have dated someone terrible, and I think the story was making her out to be. There is a lot more story to come. The drama doesn't end here! Stay tuned!
