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Reviewer: DansGirl Signed Date: 2011.08.09 - 05:47PM Title: Chapter Seven: One Step Forward…One Step Back

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Make that four long years. I know we've all badgered you about continuing to write, and I don't want to do that again. I know HP fanfiction sometimes must take a backseat to real life. However, I just want to compliment you on this series. I first latched on to the woes of Lily and Jack when I was in middle school and now I am beginning college--a true testament to the power your writing has. As an author, you are incredibly creative. Your stories are so compelling and the emotion with which you draw your readers to your characters is unbreakable, clearly. Even though the last we heard of Jack and Lily was in April of 2007 I still hopefully check for updates every month or so. That's remarkable writing. I think you are fantastic and whether you chose to find Lily and Jack again or not, I am incredibly grateful to have been with them and you since the beginning. Thank you.



Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.04.01 - 07:41AM Title: Chapter Seven: One Step Forward…One Step Back

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Waiting for the chapter that never came. 3 long years and no update. Perhaps you could at least put us out of out misery and do one final update, just so we know how it would have ended IF you had written it!!!



Reviewer: Coreyo504 Anonymous Date: 2007.12.27 - 09:34AM Title: Chapter Seven: One Step Forward…One Step Back

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Another fan from Hpff Lol that siite is only up to chapter 19 on the 2nd story i was crazed when i got done and there wasnt no end lol i googled ur name and got led here

Thiis is such a great story i dont want it to end i would read it forever if it didnt but all things have to end and i understand u have a life to live lol.

Great story tho if possible u should really keep writing



Reviewer: potterfan97 Signed Date: 2007.04.27 - 09:25PM Title: Chapter Seven: One Step Forward…One Step Back

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fabulous! I had been following this story on Harry potter fan fiction and had no idea you were so much farther along in this site. I love it and can't wait to see how you end it all. Is the potion still making Jack Angry? And just where is Malfoy? Can't wait!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confidence. The update time is really slow on hpff so I came over here a while ago. Hopefully I'll have a new chapter up soon!



Reviewer: I_love_hpforever Signed Date: 2007.04.06 - 01:39AM Title: Chapter Seven: One Step Forward…One Step Back

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HELLO! Ok, so I like this chapter a lot. I want to know even more of the conversation between Lily and Jack but that's cause I'm very curious. I like how the friendship is slowly rebuilding. When you have a friendship like that and it falls apart once everything is out in the open the headling process starts and it really doesn't take as long as building the original friendship, as I know from personal experience. I love how Lily explains about Adam, and I actually want to see how Jack explain his relationship with Allie. Harry confronting Lily about Malfoy though...I'm torn. I like that he did it because it needed to be said....but at the same time I want to smack both Harry and Lily and call them idiots for talking with their tempers and not their brains. They are soooo much alike it's scary and are both very stuborn. (As you know...you're the author) I love how they refuse to admit that they are wrong but know that some way they are right. I like how Dominic and James ask Lily if she is going to be leaving because I don't think she was thinking about it as much until they mentioned it. She knew eventually but she was sooo happy about Jack and then mad at her father... And though it is a sad line I LOVED the line Lily told Harry. It hurt him yes...but it is something anyone would say in that situation and it was very needed. I also like how quickly Jack says that he will go looking for Lily and that Ginny needs to go out and have fun. I think when he finds her, if he does of course, it will be fun. Though I'm a bit scared thinking about what would happen if Jack DIDN'T find her. So many questions...quess I'll just have to keep reading and reviewing. Again, LOVED the chapter and can't wait for the next update.

~Kat

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to answer this. It's the end of the semester and I'm crazy busy! So this chapter went through a lot of surgery. I cut a lot out and added a lot mroe. I wasn't sure exactly what to do with certain parts of it. I wanted Harry and Lily to have the fight. You're right about Lily not really considering leaving until her brother mentioned it. I'm glad that came out in the writing because his quesiton did catch her off guard. The fight served the purpose of showing how alike Harry and Lily are as well as serving to bring Lily's issues to the surface. You see more of the reasoning behind her thinking in the next chapter when Jack finds her and gets her to go back and talk to Harry. I guess I just gave more of it away. I don't know how you always get me to do that! Next chapter should be up as soon as I fix some minor details and send it off to beta land! Thanks, as always, for the review!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.03 - 11:52PM Title: Chapter Seven: One Step Forward…One Step Back

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Even though Jack and Lily are both talking to each other and heve renewed their friendship ..... which is really good news ..... Lily's fragility was really exposed by no other than Harry. I hope that when Jack finds her, she is in a safe location and that when they talk, that Jack is a calming influence and not a repeat of Harry's pressure. As a young couple each wanting to renew their old flame, the timing is not good for either. Harry has inflamed Lily's sensitivity and will make her defensive to Jack's involvement. Anyway, that's my prediction, so I'm looking forward to you blowing my Seer abilities to smithereens with another thought provoking chapter.

Author's Response: Lol, I don't think your seer abilities are that far off! That is true...when renewing an old flame, sometimes things move fast. You will see a littl ebit of what is to come in the next chapter. I kind of set it up in this chapter though so I think you're spot on in assuming what you have. Harry and Jack are a lot alike and we see that in this chapter. I can imagine that any child of Harry's would be very much like in in the same ways Lily is. As for how Jack will handle her...you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for the review!




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