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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.17 - 08:14AM Title: Three - Monday

A lightning bolt lol



Reviewer: sunnyseaforever Signed Date: 2012.04.29 - 11:51PM Title: Three - Monday

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Ginny and Hermione's girl bonding was fun to read. I was giggling with them about step number 2. LOL!
That was a very insightful divination class. Colin's character was nice to read.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.04.25 - 09:43AM Title: Three - Monday

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This chapter was hilarious! Hermione and Ginny's conversations at the start were quite funny and so was the Divination class. Things seem quite funny from Ginny's perspective and I'm glad you're making her seem so lovable.



Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2009.06.25 - 12:31PM Title: Three - Monday

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I was LOL at the Y-front/boxers conversation! Too funny! And Trelawney's class was a hoot too!

Abraxan



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.05.05 - 12:44PM Title: Three - Monday

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"hex the Nargles off first"
has Trelawney been channelling Luna?
funny chapter



Reviewer: CyanGreenBreath Signed Date: 2008.11.03 - 05:41AM Title: Three - Monday

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Brilliant idea here, I totally wasn't ready for that little addition to the end till it was nigh upon me. Great concept for the chapters so far. Did this all hit you at once or are you creating as you go? Either way, you've yet to dissapoint here.



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.07.14 - 12:42AM Title: Three - Monday

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I was looking for a laugh and came back to reread this awesome story. Cel, you're too good. Really. All the little details, "Merlin's pointy purple hat..." "Mum would adopt him in the blink of a hippogriff's eye..." Embroidering Harry's initials in his boxers because it was the "closest she was going to get to his bits..." I've read this story twice and I'm still laughing out loud. Your writing is so crisp, descriptive and alive. I'm jealous! But glad you wrote it anyway. :)

Author's Response: Hi Debbie. Thanks for coming back and reading this. I like adding those details, because that's one of the things that I loved in the HP books.



Reviewer: DarkLady Anonymous Date: 2007.06.23 - 08:00AM Title: Three - Monday

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No you must not go into detail as to what Y-fronts are... *giggles*
I guess the question really is... What does Ginny prefer on Harry??

Hahaaa...

Loved the chapter

Author's Response: Um, I don't think anybody would actually prefer Y-fronts to boxers! LOL.



Reviewer: lolamadrid Signed Date: 2006.12.14 - 04:30PM Title: Three - Monday

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I'm really enjoying your story. It's well written and at a great level for hp fiction, not too immature and not pretentious either. It's also made me laugh a lot. The underwear discussion was hilarious. I think Hermione and Ron are both written perfectly. I love ron muttering under his breath after she reprimands him at the quidditch match for his rude hand gesture. And I'm really enjoying your ginny. she's very funny. Thanks!

Author's Response: Hi lola. I'm glad you've discovered this little story of mine, and that you like the way I've written Ron and Hermione. Those two are always fun to write.



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2006.10.14 - 05:29PM Title: Three - Monday

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he-he poor ginny being told by prof. trelalwney that she has a bad love life then finding a lightning bolt when she's trying to get over harry...

Author's Response: The poor girl can't get any breaks, can she?



Reviewer: herekittykitty Signed Date: 2006.09.12 - 10:18PM Title: Three - Monday

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So cute! Great characterization of Trelawney, and I love hearing from Colin!

Author's Response: Thanks buffy. I love Trelawney.



Reviewer: Leiselily Signed Date: 2006.09.10 - 04:56AM Title: Three - Monday

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Very enjoyable! Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read.



Reviewer: musicbaby13 Signed Date: 2006.09.09 - 10:52AM Title: Three - Monday

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great chapter! (:

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.09.09 - 02:02AM Title: Three - Monday

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The line about Harry’s bits is still one of my favorites in the story. It’s not your cleverest or funniest. It’s just Ginny being honest in that way teenage girls have. Hermione didn’t need to hear that. Hahahahaha. It’s fun shocking our friends.

That being said, the Divination class is also one of my favorite parts of the story. Bugger is right. And Colin being so enthusiastic about the whole thing adds to the charm, especially as he smugly points out the bolt. Yeah, Ginny’s not fooling Hermione. She’s not fooling Colin. She’s trying to fool herself, but she’s not doing a particularly good job at that either. Poor Ginny.
~ Christine


Author's Response: Secretly, I think Hermione wishes that she was able to get close to Ron's bits also - only by handling his boxers of course. And Trelawney, I love her character, especially the way that Emma Thompson played her. Our poor Ginny's still in for a bumpy ride, right?



Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2006.09.09 - 12:53AM Title: Three - Monday

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Great story...I loved the dialog between hermione and ginny reminded me of high school and college. I don't know what y fronts are but i can guess cant wait for your next update

Author's Response: I plan to update a bit faster than I normally do, since there's a lot of chapters finished. Thanks for reading. And your guess what the Y-fronts are is probably correct. ;)



Reviewer: SunDevil05 Signed Date: 2006.09.08 - 09:56PM Title: Three - Monday

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And yet another very lovely chapter! I've never see Colin as someone who was into Divination but I like it. It's a different approach and I like it. Love Ginny and Hermione's conversations!

Author's Response: I'm glad that people are appreciating the friendship between the two girls. Thanks for taking the time to read this story.



Reviewer: AshesHinny4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.09.08 - 09:52PM Title: Three - Monday

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hahah...no detail on the
Y-fronts..if they dont no..to bad heehee


haha she told her to go the lake with all the cap naked..I like that teacher..shes retardedly funny.

yay Lightning bolt! harry!
weeeee...there sooo should be more Harry in this story!


update sometime sooon! hehe

oo and by the way..schools going well! i met some people already..I liek it!

ok byeee

~ashes

Author's Response: It's good that you've already met some new friends. :) Any cute boys yet?



Reviewer: Sovran Signed Date: 2006.09.08 - 09:15PM Title: Three - Monday

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I love the bits with Ginny (no pun intended), but what really stuck with me from this chapter is Hermione. Her reaction to Ginny's teasing showed so much more depth in that direction than most people give Hermione (myself included, perhaps). At the same time, her reaction is not incompatible with the Hermione we know and love.

Other than that... everything I've said in previous reviews still stands. Harry is a sly devil, Hermione is smarter than Ginny is giving her credit for, and Ginny, dear Ginny... is doomed.

Here's hoping Harry catches her trying out that 'remedy'. =)

Author's Response: I like to think that Hermione has a funny girly side to her that people tend to overlook because of her bookishness. Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed Date: 2006.09.08 - 09:13PM Title: Three - Monday

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i know what a Y-front is...thanks

hilarious chapter...love it..

There, beginning from the rim and cutting right through the bottom of the cup, was a clearly defined lightning bolt.

Bugger.

that is hilarious...i also love the comment about Binns being usefull in the war against Voldemort...that was hilarious

laughed pretty hard when ginny and Hermione were talking about the boys' choice of undergarment...and then ginny's gaze flitted to harry's lap....brilliant...and the two of them burst into giggles, causing Ron and Harry to be freaked...hilarious...absolutely hilarious...love it...

i looked at that site you sent me and am lost...lol...the font site...yeah...i get confuzzled easily...so yeah...

brilliant chapter...hilarious...update soon...love it...~Ginny M~

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Thunders Shadow Signed Date: 2006.09.08 - 08:01PM Title: Three - Monday

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Terrific, as always. I loved the part about Y-fronts, and how Ginny said that was the closest she'd probably ever get to his bits. You write all the characters so spot-on, it's quite eerie.

And also with that boxer/Y-fronts part, I believe you've captured the quintessential girl friendship; all I know is that when my friends and I talk about the guys we like, I definitely say stuff like Ginny did to get a laugh from them.

And I think Harry likes Ginny. I mean, seriously, he casually rubs his thigh against hers during dinner? A sure sign.

Update real soon please? :)
signed,
Samantha

Author's Response: Spot-on eerie is good, right? :) Ah, the quintessential question: boxers or briefs? I'm a boxer girl myself... Thanks for reading.




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