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Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2015.05.30 - 04:17AM
Title: Endings and Beginnings
This is definitely a different spin on my favourite Bible verse, but it really does fit. I'm glad Harry and Ginny found each other. Well done.
Reviewer: muggledog Signed
Date: 2006.09.24 - 06:32PM
Title: Endings and Beginnings
Why did Ron and Hermione have to die? Despite that, though, I loved this peice. Of course, I DO know that in a war, not everything can end happily, and that loved ones will die, so that's realistic.
Like I said above, I loved it, and I loved it all, so it's impossible to pick out a favorite scene, but one thing that greatly impressed me was your ability to summerize the war with so few words, and of course, Harry's feelings. And Ginny's, too, of course.
Had a lump in my throat at the end.
Author's Response: Why did R & H die? Not because I am entirely cruel, I assure you. Rather, I think it strengthens the message of Hope. Does that sound odd? If you think about it, the Hope that Harry has is that, in the end, he will be reunited with his friends and family in a much better place. To have such Hope after a loss so dear is quite an accompishment, don't you think?
Thank you for your kind words about my writing -- that is, after all, why I've decided to do this. No, not to hear your kind words, but rather to find a way to make my writing convey thoughts and feelings, and hopefully to wrap you, the Kind Reader, up into the story in a way that may make it seem real.
These reviews help me to feel that I have accomplished that, at least to a small extent, and for that I am trully grateful for all who have written. Thank you.
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick Signed
Date: 2006.09.23 - 10:45PM
Title: Endings and Beginnings
Beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words.
Reviewer: Watermelon531 Signed
Date: 2006.09.23 - 10:27PM
Title: Endings and Beginnings
I love it, although I hate the idea of Ron and Hermione dying! This was sweet; great job!
Author's Response: I, too, hated that. It isn;t what I'd want to have happen, R&H dieing, but it felt necessary to the story and the message I had hoped to deliver.
Reviewer: bmp412 Signed
Date: 2006.09.23 - 09:36PM
Title: Endings and Beginnings
Really great story and message.
Author's Response: Thank you.
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