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Reviewer: Sionwitch Anonymous Date: 2007.01.31 - 11:27AM Title: The Dog Star

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I really like your story so far, The part I liked the most is that Sirius is back, I wish that would happen in canon, there must be a reason why the mirror is still there and just a simple reparo could fix it, Besides I do believe that in some way or another is Sirius who will be solving the RAB mystery for Harry, But I have to ask you that please don't leave poor Sirius alone for all the eternity there, he deserves much better than that, he deserves to be with his friends. Keep the good work.



Reviewer: Dmw1515 Anonymous Date: 2006.10.11 - 07:19PM Title: The Dog Star

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Good Chapter. Now everyones caught up with everything they need to know and they got their first lead on a horcrux. Let the Adventure begin. Cant wait to see what you do with the horcrux Hunt. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Heh, that's pretty much how I feel about it at this point. We've got the wind-up, now wait for the pitch!



Reviewer: Alanius Signed Date: 2006.10.11 - 04:54PM Title: The Dog Star

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The whole point of killing off Sirius is to have Harry lose his guide. (The same is true for Dumbledore) It doesn't make any sense to bring him back in the story, nullifying the situation Jo set up. Harry is supposed to go through his ordeal without guidance.
Of course, it is okay to bring Sirius back after Harry kills Voldemort.

Author's Response: JKR has said in interviews that Sirius still has a part to play, and that the mirrors will make a reappearance. I took those "hints" and put them together for this story. I disagree that Harry has to go on without guidance; what he has to go on without is protectors/mentors which is what Sirius and Dumbledore were. Sirius is not "back" any more than Dumbledore will be "back" when Harry talks to his portrait. Thanks for your review, though, I always appreciate reader input!



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2006.10.11 - 02:51PM Title: The Dog Star

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Nice beginning, please keep it up! S.

Author's Response: I'm trying! The next chapter is about halfway done. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2006.10.11 - 09:43AM Title: The Dog Star

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Interesting story. I liked how Harry was finally able to talk to Sirius! Too bad no one else can. I'm glad that Harry is going to let Ginny help; he most definately needs her. I liked the previous chapter immensely with Harry disapparating to the Burrow to talk to Ginny. Fearing her bat-bogey hex, but still finding the words to tell her how he feels. Just the right amount of nervousness. You wrote that VERY well. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!



Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 10:44PM Title: The Dog Star

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HI. I just wanted to leave you a short review. You mentioned in chapter two that you were nominated for a DSTA. You definately deserved that nomination in my view. If I'd started reading this fic sooner, I'd have voted for you too. :D One thing though, are you aware that chapter three is missing. It skips from chapter two to chapter 4. Just though that I'd mention that. Please be one of those authors that update fairly quick! I've enjoyed reading what you've got posted here and am looking forward to reading more! Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Yes, I'm aware of the chapter skip; I submitted this chapter as Chapter 3 and somehow it never made it into the queue so I had to delete it and upload it again as chapter 4. Kind of frustrating, but nothing I couldn't get over. As for the DTSA, thanks for your kinds words! It's nominated for one in October, though, so it's still possible to vote for it!

Author's Response: Aha! I figured out how to fix the chapter skip!




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