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Reviewer: Aikio Signed Date: 2007.04.05 - 07:27PM Title: Last Golden Day of Peace
Well... (alright, Brilliant)
I must say you made it plausible, but as you said on Melindas "chat/mail" thingy you didn't like reading ff that weren't plausible..
I really like your writing style, and I think the characters act just as they're supposed to..
And the story so far is really interesting, so I can't wait for the next chapter..
---Aikio---
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.03.23 - 12:57AM Title: Last Golden Day of Peace
The handling of Snape in this chapter was excellent -- quite plausible.
I rather liked the interactions, especially between Harry & Ginny; Krum is good, too.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review - I hope to have another chapter up soon, so I hope I keep your interest!
Reviewer: nerdy_bookworm Signed Date: 2007.03.19 - 03:18AM Title: Last Golden Day of Peace
I really liked the Pensieve scenes with Snape; I can't wait for his reply. Also, Krum becoming the DADA teacher is a nice, unique twist. I've really enjoyed reading this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you keep reading (and reviewing!).
Reviewer: Rhetor Signed Date: 2007.03.18 - 08:41PM Title: Last Golden Day of Peace
I love this chapter, and I know how hard you worked on it. I think your tarot/elemental take on the horcruxes is inventive and right on target (despite all the grief I gave you about it ;)). Like Melinda, I think the opening up to Ginny -- especially in the intimate moment -- is a great piece of character building and shows the relationship maturing. And yes, we may have come up with the messages on AIM, but you thought of the dialogue between Harry and Hermione on the subject all by yourself. Finally, despite having read at least six previous accounts of Bill & Fleur's wedding, I find this one fresh and satisfying -- as I told you, I especially like Ginny's line to Harry after the battle and the image of the two of them fighting side-by-side.
Your readers hope you'll have another chapter for them soon. I just hope you keep writing, because you're so good at it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and all your hard work in the beta process, Ken. "Love as doing battle together" - could it be anything else, with Harry and Ginny at this point in history? I'm hard at work on the next chapter, but starting a new job on Monday may take some time away from that endeavor, so we'll see how long this one takes. Hopefully not as long as this last one!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.03.18 - 05:41PM Title: Last Golden Day of Peace
well that was fun what better wayt o get out of dancing....and to bad about the happy days...hope ginny will be fine...harry is enought sence to not do anything but then again anything can happen....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2007.03.18 - 11:12AM Title: Last Golden Day of Peace
Good chapter. I'm so eager to see Snape's story come July. I used Petunia's anger toward Harry in a similar fassion, but I'm still not willing to forgive either one. They're the adults, they should/ve acted like them.
Interesting idea with the Unforgiveable Vow. It makes me wonder what would happen if someone took two vows that opposed each other - like the one to the Order and the one to Narcissa. It's an interesting thought.
I LOVED that Harry opened up to Ginny about life with the Dursleys. I think it's very appropriate that its her he shares some other, private things with. I'm eager for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Melinda! I'm eager to see how everything with Snape plays out, too, and I guess I'm using this fanfic to expound on my personal theories. I'm glad you liked the bit with Harry and Ginny - I think that in a mature relationship, it's that kind of intimacy that's most important.
