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Reviewer: piltad Signed
Date: 2008.07.07 - 03:05AM
Title: Chapter 7: The Goblet of Fire
Well really like how the Snape and Harry relationship is turning out I usually don't like it but this time i really do. And should be very interesting how Harry handles all the hate this time around and will you make one of the trio you made not believe him to add to Harry's discomort if you do I really do think it will be Hermy.
Reviewer: wave Signed
Date: 2008.05.17 - 12:00AM
Title: Chapter 7: The Goblet of Fire
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Reviewer: Treecat Signed
Date: 2007.02.22 - 01:25PM
Title: Chapter 7: The Goblet of Fire
You're alive! I'd been worrying, I thought this chapter was superb, and if a wait is what it takes to get a chapter like this, then don't let us hurry you.
I always enjoy reading your Lunas, you make her fascinating. I don't know if you'll follow JKR's plot for 4th year, but I'm on the edge of my seat to find what happens next.
Reviewer: CruciareMors Anonymous
Date: 2007.02.22 - 12:48PM
Title: Chapter 7: The Goblet of Fire
Glad to see you've returned, and with a great chapter too!
I was thrilled when I read the scene where Harry's magic fights the domination of "Moody"''s Imperius. I assume the guy impersonating him is still Barty Crouch Jr, then? Pity Harry didn't kill him, tsk, tsk... unless you're planning something no one can foresee with him. Which, now that I think about it, you probably are. Gah.
That conversation with Dumbledore was my favourite part of the chapter. I think it's good that Harry and Dumbledore are on good terms, for Dumbledore can eventually, who knows, help Harry when he most needs. You're never too prevident. And, of course, I have to admit I like the character, at least for now.
I don't know if you've already corrected this or not, since I read the chapter last Tuesday but didn't have enough time to review, but you've misspelled Beauxbatons a number of times in this chapter (you wrote Beaxbatons, I believe).
I wonder if Harry'll wish he hadn't revealed that information to Nott in a reasonably close future. Then again, I also wonder about the mysteries of our dear friend Luna. Oh, and about the elghts Malfoy would go for those books, too.
Harry's been chosen as a champion again. Yahoo! [/sarcasm] I'm very curious as to who placed his name in there. It could have been Barty Crouch Jr, if it's really him, it could have been Karkaroff (too chicken if you ask me, but you may have a different opinion), it could have been Snape, supposedly illibated for having entered Harry's mind, allegedly in search of the memory of him entering, or it may have been someone else entirely. And I do wonder about your reasons for having Daphne as a judge, besides potentailly aiding Harry. Or not.
Oh, and I don't think Maxime would say "shit" in front of all those people. She's a lady, after all, lol.
Again, very nice work!
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed
Date: 2007.02.20 - 02:54PM
Title: Chapter 7: The Goblet of Fire
dam even though i knew harry was going to be entered it was stil very well done & then having snape defend him was a ingenus twist to cannon.
so youve got six judges one of which is his garden yep that is not going to go down well with the rest of the students (cant wait for weasley reaction & i just hope ginny & hermone come round quickly to tte idea that he had nothing to do with it).
I relly like the relationship your developing between, harry & ginny while there is atraction there although its more from harrys side you still have them intrested in others a very realistic approch which should make the run up to the ball rather intresting & a further distraction for harry.
James
Reviewer: Milk Signed
Date: 2007.02.20 - 08:02AM
Title: Chapter 7: The Goblet of Fire
wow, daphne, now that was, well, not expected. poor harry, he never gets a break.
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