Really don't like the way you are making Harry think as a kid it shouldn't of gone as far as you did should be more does he like her or not.... at the very most pull the Harry thinks it will ruin a friendship like alot of ppl do not the allies thing really didn't like that left in my mind a dirty taste in my mouth for this chap.

Hey great Chapter as usual. Just one thing. You mention in the last chapter:

"Daphne Dressler hadn’t been expecting her old Head of House to be present, either"

The only problem is that Professor McGonagall was not Daphne's head of house as Daphne was in Ravenclaw. At least I think. Sorry if I'm wrong.

Still a wonderful chapter. I also never reviewed the last chapter but that was an intense action scene.

Sincerely,

Chris Pena

Great chapter with a very good title as harry is certanly in a very complicated dance with pretty much all of his classmates in one form or another.

Your carecterization of lunn is making her one of my favorite carecter (although i do like her in cannon as well just yours is is slightly edger which is in keeping with your story). However when reading this chapter i keept wanting to compare her to cassadra form homers lyad as both were able to see the horros of what was to come & both were completly misunderstood.

So harry might be taking ginny to the dance well that colud be intresting & her familys reaction should be fun to observe also given the amount of detail youve given to pureblood history & ritules am wondering what extras your yule ball will have & just how much ginny will have to change in order to be accepted by ether the light or dark purebloods.

As for the whole dragon episode its beging to look like its turning in to a three way dance between harry whover entered him into the tri wizzard tournimnet (am still going with moody & for the same reson as cannon) & whover tried to get him killed in that last task for which i have no idea butiam sure all will be rievield in time.

James