Reviews For Grey Maiden IV: Darkness Rising
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.10 - 11:08PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing Well seems odd that you have Barty getting caught now don't really know how Harry is going to fall into Voldy's hands now but im sure you will have it happen some way since don't think you are going to keep Voldy as a ghost but I could be wrong. Don't really know what is up with Barty dying like that think you oculd of kept him around for a bit could of used him later on though it isn't like Voldy doesn't have enough crazy followers but I am really confused on why and he died im assuming you will let us know next chap though. Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.17 - 12:03AM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing No Review Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing No Review Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:51PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing No Review Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:48PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing No Review Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2007.08.27 - 04:56PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing No Review Reviewer: Fleury Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 11:41PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing ...what a lovely parting image you gave us. :| Reviewer: partypooper Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 12:58AM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing wow. and i'm sorry about what i said in my last review. i didn't mean to sound judgemental. i just didn't think it was right for an eight year old to die. i really did love the chapter though and this one. wut happened to jr. anyway? is there a curse on tommy-boys name to kill whoever directly heres it or sumtin? again i'm sry. update soon. i also understand when a specific things happens like gabrielle, happens for a reason. again i'm sry. Reviewer: Jovan Schnee Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 03:11PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing I have been keeping up with this series since and I wanted to let you know that I have really appreciated your increasing skill. The plot was always decent, but your writing has gotten tighter and tighter and it really helps to propel the story and build suspense. It's great to see talent grow. These last two chapters were rivetting. | |||||||
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