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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.10 - 11:08PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

Well seems odd that you have Barty getting caught now don't really know how Harry is going to fall into Voldy's hands now but im sure you will have it happen some way since don't think you are going to keep Voldy as a ghost but I could be wrong. Don't really know what is up with Barty dying like that think you oculd of kept him around for a bit could of used him later on though it isn't like Voldy doesn't have enough crazy followers but I am really confused on why and he died im assuming you will let us know next chap though.



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.17 - 12:03AM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 03:25PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:51PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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Reviewer: Chris Widger Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:48PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2007.08.27 - 04:56PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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Reviewer: Fleury Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 11:41PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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...what a lovely parting image you gave us. :|

Um. Yeah. Chappie was awesome. I'm sad you killed off Gabrielle, but it was essential to the plot. I'm guessing. I do have a question though: will Ron ever grow up enough for Harry and him to make peace? I mean, I know I'll find out eventually... it's just that it kinda annoys me that he doesn't play a more prominent part. I think Ron can do some great things (if his personality would allow it; I hate how he was depicted in DH) and it's very sad not to see him grow into any potential he may have had.



Reviewer: partypooper Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 12:58AM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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wow. and i'm sorry about what i said in my last review. i didn't mean to sound judgemental. i just didn't think it was right for an eight year old to die. i really did love the chapter though and this one. wut happened to jr. anyway? is there a curse on tommy-boys name to kill whoever directly heres it or sumtin? again i'm sry. update soon. i also understand when a specific things happens like gabrielle, happens for a reason. again i'm sry.

Author's Response: Relax, I didn't mean any offense. I was just pointing out that since this s my story, I'm going to make things happen that some of my readers aren't entirely comforortable with. But I'll always do them for a reason.



Reviewer: Jovan Schnee Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 03:11PM Title: Chapter 19: A Snake in Wolf's Clothing

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I have been keeping up with this series since and I wanted to let you know that I have really appreciated your increasing skill. The plot was always decent, but your writing has gotten tighter and tighter and it really helps to propel the story and build suspense. It's great to see talent grow. These last two chapters were rivetting.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. That kind of compliment really means a lot to me. I've been trying to get this one finished as fast as I can, and I'm glad to hear that it hasn't negatively impacted the quality of my work.




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