Reviews For Grey Maiden IV: Darkness Rising
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.11 - 03:52AM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection Well that was diffrent would of liked Harry to see his parents since it seems like Harry only likes his mom would of been nice for them to come into play but oh well. The duel I think was better than JKs though JKs Harry doesn't have power and didn't have the aresenal that yours does spell wise. The chap was good only thing didn't like was Cedric dying figured you would let him live and really want to know what the spark or light whatever it was that Harry saw before Cedric died. Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 09:22PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection I've been lurking as I've read through Parts I - III and have finally caught up with you. In this chapter, you have improved on canon with your graveyard scene, and it may have been my favorite scene in JKR's entire series. The writing was extremely descriptive and evocative. Having said that, I'll 'ditto' parakletos's comment and say I'm looking forward to new events from your creative pen. Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection Oh goddammit. thanks for the nice little cliffie there. Reviewer: partypooper Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 11:35PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection oh my gosh i'm so sad. i wish cedric didn't have to die. T_T but all things happen for a reason as u have told me countless times. ha ha ha love the chapter. Reviewer: Ginnys_secret_lover Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 07:46PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection A brilliant, outstanding chapter! You have a real skill for writing action scenes and I believe this scene is better than the Canon version. Far more realistic, we really get to understand the fear and power that is Voldemort. I hope you continue to let us learn about Voldemort and his mind, Canon HP failed to do this so I'm happy that you are attempting to do and doing it mighty well. Reviewer: werekitten Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 05:56PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection Wow. That was really good! I like the changes you made, with the essences. In this chapter, more than before, we can see how this Harry differers from canon. JKR's innocent, kind Harry uses an Expelliarmus to disarm Voldemort, while your Harry aims to kill. Intersting. Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 04:08PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection First let me say how much I enjoy the story you are writing here and look forward to your updates. I do have some quibbles though. Reviewer: Omaha Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 03:59PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection Great Chapter :) the story keeps getting better Reviewer: Omaha Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 03:59PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection Great Chapter :) the story keeps getting better | |||||||
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