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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.11 - 03:52AM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

Well that was diffrent would of liked Harry to see his parents since it seems like Harry only likes his mom would of been nice for them to come into play but oh well. The duel I think was better than JKs though JKs Harry doesn't have power and didn't have the aresenal that yours does spell wise. The chap was good only thing didn't like was Cedric dying figured you would let him live and really want to know what the spark or light whatever it was that Harry saw before Cedric died.



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.05.17 - 12:03AM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 09:22PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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I've been lurking as I've read through Parts I - III and have finally caught up with you. In this chapter, you have improved on canon with your graveyard scene, and it may have been my favorite scene in JKR's entire series. The writing was extremely descriptive and evocative. Having said that, I'll 'ditto' parakletos's comment and say I'm looking forward to new events from your creative pen.



Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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Oh goddammit. thanks for the nice little cliffie there.



Reviewer: partypooper Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 11:35PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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oh my gosh i'm so sad. i wish cedric didn't have to die. T_T but all things happen for a reason as u have told me countless times. ha ha ha love the chapter.

candace



Reviewer: Ginnys_secret_lover Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 07:46PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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A brilliant, outstanding chapter! You have a real skill for writing action scenes and I believe this scene is better than the Canon version. Far more realistic, we really get to understand the fear and power that is Voldemort. I hope you continue to let us learn about Voldemort and his mind, Canon HP failed to do this so I'm happy that you are attempting to do and doing it mighty well.



Reviewer: werekitten Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 05:56PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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Wow. That was really good! I like the changes you made, with the essences. In this chapter, more than before, we can see how this Harry differers from canon. JKR's innocent, kind Harry uses an Expelliarmus to disarm Voldemort, while your Harry aims to kill. Intersting.
Just a note -- you have a missing italics tag somehwere, you may ywant to find that.
Again, great chapter! Can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Ugh. I have no idea why that keeps happening. It's fine on ff.net, but when I transfer the HTML code this happens.



Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 04:08PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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First let me say how much I enjoy the story you are writing here and look forward to your updates. I do have some quibbles though.

One of the problems, from a reader's perspective (well this reader's) , in an AU story is that sometimes when cannon events dominate, we are left wanting more of your original creation and less of the events we are familiar with. The chapter was well written, but because of the familiarity with the major events I was somewhat disappointed. I'm probably being harsh when I say that, but what I read the story for is your own creativity and not just JKR retold.

But as I said, I do enjoy the story and look forward to your next update.



Author's Response: I understand what you mean. A lot of the suspense and drama is taken out when you know exactly what is going to happen. As creative as I can be warping certain events, I'm not really that comfortable coming up with entirely new ones. That's going to have to change, since I'll be veering wildly away from canon starting in five, although certain elements of Ootp will still be there. GoF was my favorite book, which probably explains why I changed so little of the core events.



Reviewer: Omaha Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 03:59PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

Great Chapter :) the story keeps getting better



Reviewer: Omaha Signed Date: 2007.09.18 - 03:59PM Title: Chapter 22: Resurrection

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Great Chapter :) the story keeps getting better




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