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Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2006.10.28 - 09:20PM Title: Chapter 2: Allegro con grazia
I liked Rene's name for Ginny, Gin-every. Very sweet. I think Arthur's accessment of Harry is very accurate. Curious though, did Harry have that same dream or only Ginny? I like your writing style very much, the only 'complaint' I have is that your chapters seem to be over too soon. But I understand that you need to end the chapter when it feels right. I don't post here, but I do have a story going elsewhere, so I understand that. I look forward to reading more about Rene. Will Harry ever contact Ginny?
Author's Response: I know these chapters seem short when you read them, and they are, but man, when I'm writing them, they seem LOOONG! LOL :)
The dream is only Ginny, as far as we know. If I was splitting the narration between Harry and Ginny, I could have written a dream for Harry, but in this story, Ginny's dream is the only one of imprtance. I'm not very good at "scrambling" names if I need a character--like Rene--to be unable to pronounce something just right, so it means alot to me that you like "Gin-every". Of course, I'm glad that it came out sounding a wee bit corny, because it gave Ginny a reason to smile--when she really, REALLY needed one. Thanks again for the great review!
