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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.03.23 - 09:03AM Title: Chapter 11: Love
Absolutely fantastic. I really enjoyed all the differnt POVs as it just built up the action and finale even more while, at the same time, making the events clearer in my mind.
Loved all the fluffy bits too. The scene at the end with Harry standing behind Ginny with his arms warpped around her was particulary moving in it's description.
I'm smirking at the thoughts going through Arthur's mind and I'm having the same questions myself!
Reviewer: Scorcher Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 08:01PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
aww.. teenage engagement and planning children.. how cute..
..jesus christ..
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like how it ended. They were/will not be teenagers when they had kids. The planning is merely a by-product of having to deal with an overly exciteable press.
Reviewer: Fleek Signed Date: 2007.01.08 - 07:46PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
Almost over I supose *sad smile* That was an excellent way to kill of Voldemort. Gotta love the fights =]
Author's Response: Thanks. Getting killed by one of his former Horcruxes seemed appropriate to me. :-) Yes it is sad, I really liked writing this story.
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.01.07 - 04:18AM Title: Chapter 11: Love
Another wonderful chapter. I'm glad you are doing the epilogue type chapter or two to tie things together. I agree with GM, showing how they handle the not-wanted fame, and much-wanted future would make the story complete! Looking forward to next week!
Author's Response: Thanks. It can be so hard to figure out how to end a story. :-)
Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 09:54PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
Author's Response: I take it you're happy with the way things worked out? :-)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 05:51PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
Well Ginny Marie is right and you should that is a cliff if ever i read one and what is it about cliff at the end that kill the hope for more...love it glad they made it out and voldy is dead...voldy never was smart just cowerdly.....kutgw and what the &*^( is up with snape....
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it then. See, a happy ending, everyone who has to live has. :-)
As for Snape, well, he was just very very stupid when he was young, but it took him too long to realize it. By that time, he already had the Mark and the Mark influenced him in ways he did not understand. Still, he retained just enough "rightness" to know he was in the wrong and needed to do something different, and Dumbledore gave him a second chance. In my story "Choices", Snape was bad, though he tried to act good. In this story, he was good (barely) and played a spy for Dumbledore. In my third story (maybe I'll finish alpha tonight :-) I show yet another way to perceive Snape. I'll be very curious to see how JKR reveals his true allegence in book 7. Personally, I hope he's bad and Harry turns him into a flaming marshmellow. ;-)
Author's Response: BTW, I forgot to add, that of all the guesses, I would consider yours the closest since you mentioned his mum. You just didn't take the idea far enough. :-)
Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 04:25PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
Thank goodness for your pre-beta, I want an epilogue too! Great chapter! Everything is explained and Ginny & Harry are alive. I really liked reading the events in each persons view. That answered a lot of my questions. I'm glad Sirius is okay too. The proposal was beautiful. Yes, I'm sure Harry could, in time, talk Molly into letting the wedding be sooner. Some people are lucky enough to find their true love early in life, some people never find it at all. They both deserve happiness, and that happiness is each other, they should be able to be together. Please don't make us wait too long for the epilogue. :) Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! OK, you'll get an epilogue late next week; it's the longest (barely) chapter in the story. Glad the multi-view worked for you. I was hoping it wouldn't be too confusing. The epilogue will further explore what Harry is capable of. :-)
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 03:55PM Title: Chapter 11: Love
THANK YOU
Fantastic story.
And LOVE ya for a epilogue
Ja ne
Jim
Author's Response: Thanks! Guess it all came out alright for you.
