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Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2010.02.26 - 06:04PM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
I like how you've gone about the re connection f Harry/Sean & Ginny. Lovely ilne abiout the broom closets towars the end, brought a really big smile to my face!!!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.02.14 - 10:10AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
he he, I loved the end of this chapter
three broom cupboards vs two - brilliant!
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.02 - 07:54PM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
Amazing how he remembers...almost like on auto pilot. Nice bit of humour with the broom cupbaords and good that Chrissy is out the way (hee hee!)
Reviewer: jkrofan Signed Date: 2007.03.09 - 10:49AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
Hi another good chapter. I disagree with some of Ginny's logic, though. Yes, the things you experience and the people you know do shape your personality to a great extent. But, just because he doesn't remember them doesn't mean that his personality will automatically change. His ways of thinking and his personality are already shaped. So even if Sean doesn't consciously remeber everything that's happened to Harry, his subconscious does and he is still essentially the same person.
Author's Response: you're totally right. this reasoning makes everything much easier for Ginny to deal with emotionally - that's why she's thinking this way. there will be more discussion of this later in the fic as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: RSS Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 07:14PM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
Great Chapter! I'm smiling! I loved it! Very cute ending, and I'm really glad for all that "Sean" had to say to Ginny about Chrissy at the end. So now the playing field is open and I can't wait for things to start happening! Ollie is so cute, esp with "Harry". I love the length of the chapter as well. Keep it up!
Author's Response: yep, that was definately a long one! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 04:11PM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
I loved the humor in this chapter whilst we are surrounded by Ginny's angst. Having her brothers protect her about her quidditch injury .... Hermione kicking Ron because he was inadvertently bringing up Chrissy in the conversation ..... and finding out that Ginny had a deep jealous streak .... the FAt Lady dialogue was hilarious. And then the serious talk, the one that eliminated Chrissy as a rival and now allows Ginny to focus on Sean/Harry. Ginny has barriers to overcome about her guilt. I wonder if she will confess these to Sean and let him remove he doubts and guilt. Looking forward to more exposure of Sean to Harry's past and Ginny's role in bringing back his memory. Maybe on the way back from the kitchens they may just take a peek into one of those broom cupboards.
Author's Response: haha - maybe you can write a broom closet outtake??? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: magical princess Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 10:09AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
I liked the emotional struggle going on with Ginny and I like the way she is handling all of this. Great job by the way and can't wait to read the next chapter. Do you know how may chapters this story will haved when its completed?
Author's Response: thanks for the review.... tons more emotional struggle is on it's way! Poor Ginny - i torture her so! i think there are... 6 more chapters? I'm technically done writing this thing, but i have yet to make chapter divisions.
Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 04:23AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
Ha! I see that Cel is rubbing off on you. Ginny making lists about Harry and why not to be with him… well, close enough. Sorry. I couldn’t resist the comparison.
Nice job with the Fat Lady’s melodrama. Funny.
The flangst is killing me (evil and delicious all at once – you’re so skilled). I know she’s trying to be all level headed and mature (and with good reason), but I so want her to throw caution to the wind and just pull him into a broom closet and enjoy herself. Ollie is only, what, 18 months old? He won’t understand. So… Chrissy cheated on Harry with one of his soccer teammates. Ginny married one of Harry’s Quidditch teammates which wasn’t technically cheating, but as they’d never broken up… Love the parallels. She even was a bit Dursleyish in her desire for normalcy. Well, at least that bump is out of the way (not that I was worried about her).
Now we just have to get Ginny to relax and let what might happen play itself out. Sean sure seems interested. You’d think that she’d have had more of a reaction to his being unaccountably attracted to the features she shared with Chrissy. Good reason to know the broom closet locations indeed. At least that got a reaction.
Wonderful job, Buffy. Is next chapter going to have some time out on the pitch? I do want to see Sean rediscover what it means to be Harry on a broom.
~ Christine
Author's Response: oh jeez, you're right! It's likely that I accidentally appropriated the list idea from Cel! I hate when that happens - i totally didn't even notice. *cringes in embarassment* Thanks for noting the parallels! And yes, the next chapter is indeed about flying! yay!
Reviewer: lee lee Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 01:43AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
This chapter was absolutely adorable! I am in love with the Fat Lady.. she was hysterical! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: thanks - I love the way the fat lady is depicted in the movies so I wanted to include her somehow!
Reviewer: NaruKoibito Signed Date: 2007.03.07 - 11:54PM Title: Chapter 11 - Hogwarts
Hmmm, don't know why, but this chapter didn't seem to flow as well as all the rest. Oh, but about the last chapter, it's quite hard to miss H/G here, what with the Harry/Ginny backround going on and all. I was just ranting about having Sean instead of Harry there. Anyway, continue please!
Author's Response: thanks for the review!
