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Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2010.02.26 - 08:04PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Phew bit hot that chapter!!!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.02.14 - 10:53AM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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whoa - angst galore!
love it!



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.03 - 03:37PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

had to read this again, before i went on to the next chapter...it was sooooo exciting!



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.03 - 06:45AM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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So Harry has got his memories back. Is he raging in anger because he has remembered what they felt for each other, and cant understand why Ginny didn't investigate his disappearnace, but ust presumed he had left her...or is it because she was talking to Kirley...I think it is the former with a little bit of the latter adding a bit to it...I'm sure we are about to find out!



Reviewer: thisgrlrox Signed Date: 2007.04.24 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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I have no idea how I missed this update, but I'm glad I have the habit of checking the chapter before the latest posted to make sure I'm up to date.

Nicely done chapter! It was exciting, suspensful, and sexy all wrapped into one. I hope Sean/Harry has a good explanation for his anger. Ginny did nothing wrong. I'm on to read the next!



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.04.24 - 06:34AM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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oaky, stupid question for the day: IF, and I have no idea if he did or not, Harry at one time or another put his memories into a pensive, does it work both ways? Can memories IN a pensive be returned to the giver?
I know it has nothing to do with the story, just a random thought that ran round my head.

You really are brilliant, and make everything seem so real. Being greedy, I look forward to reading much more.

Author's Response: wow - thanks so much! That pensieve idea is really something. My guess is there would HAVE to be a way to extract the memories... hmmm. Neat idea! Someone needs to write a fic about this!



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2007.04.17 - 12:25AM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Ack... you WOULD leave it like that, darn you... you'd better update soon, or I might just explode... Poof! Like that.



Reviewer: tcf Signed Date: 2007.04.16 - 03:52PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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I love your story. I think Harry is feeling jealous even though he doesn't quite understand why. You captured and conveyed his feelings brillantly. Poor Ginny. Everytime she tries to get her heart back on track it gets crushed. Thanks for the story.

Author's Response: thanks so much! Harry is definately jealous - and I agree... poor Ginny! Things will look up soon, though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Oooohhh! I go on vacation for the weekend and i get a little present in updates. Love it. Sean's now Harry isn't he? That's why he's so pissed off huh?

Author's Response: Seems like Harry's identity slipped by Ginny but not by any of my readers - heehee! thanks for the review, aryell!



Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 07:16PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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But it's not Sean, is it? It's Harry. I've known it was Harry since Tonks mentioned she saw Hermione crying happily. Great chapter, and please update soon! Is Harry angry because he thinks that Ginny is falling in love with Sean and not him? Fill me in, please :)



Reviewer: Sovran Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 02:40AM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Beautifully done. The setting and feel of the club really worked well with what was going on . . . the confusion, the press of people both known and unknown . . . very appropriate. Poor Ginny, though. She's gotten so very good at finding the differences that she's somehow stopped looking for them. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but there it is. And Harry . . . sigh. We knew this would be hard for him in a lot of ways. His apparent return is wonderful to see as a reader, but at the same time I know it signals some bumps in the road. And, of course, what exactly happens at the beginning of the next chapter is very important. Things could improve, or things could get worse, and there's really not much control left to be exerted, it seems. Wonderful story.

Author's Response: "She's gotten so very good at finding the differences that she's somehow stopped looking for them. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but there it is." YAY! YOU'VE GOT IT EXACTLY! hahaha! It does make sense, at least to me. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: magical princess Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 08:29PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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The cliffhanger was really evil of you. But I can forgive you because of the quick update. Loved the cliffy though. Update soon.



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 05:38PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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A pivotal chapter with lots of drama. Loved it. I think that with all the recent activity between Ginny and Sean and her misgivings over loving Sean vs Harry that Ginny's confusion carried over into the ball. That's why she missed the little signals from Tonks and hermione/Ron and Harry/Sean's signals. I believe Harry has recovered some or all of his memory and was trying to tell Ginny .... and she certainly missed the passion from the kisses and the snoggong after the chase which you took great care to differentiate in your descriptions. I am baffled as to Harry's anger and that look in his eye so I am going to guess that he put together most of the puzzle pieces concerning Oliver and Ollie and is a bit upset about that.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 05:31PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Good Lord Ginny is clueless! Let’s count the way she missed it. Well, I first knew when Tonks said that Hermione was happy and crying. I can certainly understand her missing that one as well as Ron’s near flub and Hermione’s subsequent off behavior at the club. There are, however, some things that were a bit more obvious. Not only should the tracking charm have been a huge clue, but the sulky anger was not exactly very Sean. I know that the Pettigrew issue might have been enough to make him angry, but Ginny should know that Sean would not take it as personally as Harry would, so why would Sean express his anger over Pettigrew at Ginny? It is, of course, because that’s not what has his boxers in a bunch. Above all, what was that about kissing her with that reckless abandon? Considering how quick she was to note how Sean kissed differently than Harry, you’d think that she’d have noticed that she was NOT kissing Sean anymore but her beloved Harry. Bye-bye languid, hello stars crashing down! Both have their charms. I assume she’s dismissing the change by attributing it to the anger and the odd mood he seemed to be in. Wake up, Ginny!

Now, I find it interesting that Sean was not exactly jealous of himself, but Harry sure as heck was (I’m sure Oliver factored in there as well). Hahahahaha! Of course, Ginny never made certain promises to Sean, and he always knew about her past with Harry. For Sean to be jealous would be less reasonable. Now, he really needs to speak up before things go any further with Ginny, because she’s going to be none too pleased if the two of them make love only to discover that it was Harry the whole time, and he never said anything. Poor girl is confused enough as it is and would likely feel guilty if she had sex with Sean, at least at this point. She’s not ready for that emotionally. Heck, she wanted liquor so she could face him. I know Harry has some issues to work through (and rightly so), but he should realize from his talk with Ginny the other day that this isn’t exactly easy for her either. She did tell him flat out that she'd always loved Harry and thought getting over him was hopeless. I would hope that would assuage his anger a bit.

What I’m most curious about is if she’s going to figure it out on her own, if he’ll tell her, or if it will be some sort of amalgamation of the two (Harry says or does something deliberately that will clue her in, even if he doesn’t tell her directly). I kept waiting for him mid-snit to tell her to stop calling him Sean. Hee hee.

I loved Sean’s quote in the Prophet. I also continue to appreciate the Tonks/ Ginny friendship. I like to think Ginny sees Tonks as a bit of a big sister, so I do love how you have taken their canon friendship and turned it into a wonderful adult friendship. Nothing against Hermione, of course, but I do love their dynamic.

Evil Buffy leaving us there and giggling at the cliffhanger. Cruel cruel cruel. OK, this time, I will harass you for a quick update. I need to see how this plays out! Fabulous chapter! I’m going to read it again.
~ Christine

P.S. From 2 reviews ago, a vuuf is a more visceral woof. Vuufing over a guy or a romantic situation means to me that it was quite the yummy scenario. As for last review, Harrean was inspired because of Sovran’s Meaning of One where Harry and Ginny are, for all practical purposes, “one”. So, in reviews when discussing the two of them, the regulars call them things like Harrinny, Garry, Pottsley, Ginnarry, Hinny, etc. The twins started it within the confines of the story, so it has taken off. As it was a similar idea here, I borrowed it.


Author's Response: haha - you leave the most awesome reviews ever... so awesome! And yes, Ginny is hopelessly clueless! and thanks for the "thesaurus" re all the terms - I'm as thick as Ginny, I guess! I LOVE tonks so, so much, and although I adore Hermione as well, I'm way too much of a goof-off to write a believable Hermione So I let her take a backseat to Tonks. I'm glad its believable. And if anyone needs a big sister with all those brothers, it's Ginny!



Reviewer: Crazygal4lyf Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 05:08PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Wow. I love this story, and hope you update soon.

Has Harry got his memories back, now, and that's why he's angry she called him Sean?

Please, hurry up and update, cause you weren't joking when you said EXTREME cliffhanger.

~ Suzi



Reviewer: FireOnIce22 Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 03:23PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Reviewer: FireOnIce22 Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 03:12PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Reviewer: LadyAllie Anonymous Date: 2007.04.14 - 12:58PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Thank you soo much for the fast update, ive never reviewed any story here but i love ur story! so i wanted to thank you and congratulate you!!
About this last chapter, i dont know why Sean/Harry could be angry but i think that he was actually happy that Ginny referred to him as Sean when she told him that moment was perfect, she asked him what was wrong and he said nothing was wrong and was trying to explain it but she just wouldnt let him...dunno maybe im wrong xD i dont think he would have kissed her if he was angry at her...

anyway hope u update soon!!!xXxXx

Author's Response: wow - i feel extra special! thanks so much for taking the time to review!



Reviewer: NaruKoibito Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 12:56PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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Whew, how intense. It's Harry, right? ^_^ I had this feelnig ever since Ginny saw Hermione and Ron... Tsk, I was a bit disappointed though. I would think Ginny would recognize him by his kiss! Anyway...can't wait for the next chapter. ^^



Reviewer: jkrofan Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 12:23PM Title: Chapter 15 - Saturday

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okay, so apparently Harry has his memory back. So is he angry because she was kissing him earlier as Sean? I mean, they're still essential0ly the same person, its not like he has some kind of split personality thing going on. Sean is Harry, just with different backrounds and memories. How can he be jealous? I'd understand him being upset not to have had a little more faith in him that she would believe that he'd just run off like that, and marrying someone else relatively soon. But I can't see him being jealous of Sean, that just doesn't make sense to me.




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