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Reviews For Autumn Trees

Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2010.04.05 - 01:48AM Title: Chapter 1


omg!!!! that is soooo sweet!!! u had a total romance movie/novel thing happen to you, you lucky duck! and btw i started reading harry potter in the first grade too!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.01 - 12:43PM Title: Chapter 1


aww, sweet story

Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.07.22 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter 1


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Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2008.04.08 - 09:01PM Title: Chapter 1

aww that is so cute i wish i had a fluffy memory like htat but i dont!:(

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, you\'ll get a lovely little memory like that at some point! =] And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 10:50PM Title: Chapter 1


How I wish things were like you describe them.

Nice story!

Author's Response: Yes, I wish things were like that too. Things are so much more complicated than when I had written this. And thanks!

Reviewer: The Electric Monk Signed Date: 2008.01.11 - 11:50PM Title: Chapter 1


This was a really nice story. :D

Author's Response: Why thank you =]

Reviewer: Watermelon531 Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 06:32PM Title: Chapter 1


This was such a great fic, especially considering it was your first one! I think you could've had a little more elaboration on the first two walks, though. And I liked the note at the end; I'm so glad you had someone like that to turn to when you needed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I agree with you about having a bit more on the first two walks. As I read it over, I thought \"Oh, I could have said more on that\" or \"Why didn\'t I continue writing more on this part?\" So I promise there will be more details in the next fic I write. Also, I\'m glad you liked the note at the end, but unfortunately I am extremely extremely angry at the person I was talking about - I caught him cheating. \'nough said. =/ Anyway, I know I talk too much, so I\'m just gonna say thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Miri Signed Date: 2007.01.04 - 12:33PM Title: Chapter 1


Hmmm...Because I think you've got potential as a writer, I'm going to be a little blunter than I would normally be with what, I presume from your profile, is a first fic.

First--techical skills--you've got a very good grasp on grammar, sentence structure, word choice, spelling etc. That's very good.

Story telling skills need some polishing. First off, the emotional "life" of your characters needs some fleshing out--especially in the first, second and third walks. They're too short and abrupt in content and don't completely set up the transition into the conclusion. The reader needs to see more of Harry ( his especially) and Ginny's thought processes and the emotions connected to them. This helps to pull the reader into the story you're trying to tell.

Since this story diverges from cannon after GoF (getting together with Ginny much earlier) you might want to add AU to the category designation. Although I really think that the feel and mood of this story would fit in much better as an end of 5th year tale. It would mean a bit of tweaking (changing Cedric's death for Sirius' etc.) but most of it would transfer quite easily.

Thank you for the little note at the end. It's good that you had someone to comfort you in your grief and that it led to you working on this story. You have definite skills so go write some more. I'll look forward to seeing what you have to post.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading the story and reviewing! I\'m glad you took the time to give me suggestions, because this is my first fanfic (as you could guess). I usually write poems and songs, not stories, and I always write about whats happening in my own life. To tell you the truth, I just caught my boyfriend cheating (the one who I talked about in the end of the story). I like to write about stories with happy endings, and at the moment my life is extremely stressful so unfortunately you won\'t see another fic from me in a while, sorry! Again, thanks for reading, reviewing, and giving suggestions!

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