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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 09:00AM Title: Chapter Two

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Yet another wonderful chapter--quite the thing to take my mind off work, which probably isn't such a great thing, after all.
Poor Ginny.



Reviewer: NaruKoibito Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 10:50PM Title: Chapter Two

Awwwwww! How adorable! I like how you go into detail without it seeming overdone. =) It's still a very sad concept, however, that her birthday was forgotten...

Author's Response: Thanks again.



Reviewer: NaruKoibito Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 10:01PM Title: Chapter Two

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Awwwwww! How adorable! I like how you go into detail without it seeming overdone. =) It's still a very sad concept, however, that her birthday was forgotten...

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Her birthday wasn't really forgotten though - more of temporarily misplaced. :)



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.02.13 - 05:53PM Title: Chapter Two

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.02.13 - 11:54AM Title: Chapter Two

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awww, poor ginny.

good read. keep it up

Author's Response: It's definitely not Ginny's day, is it? Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Katehc2 Signed Date: 2007.01.27 - 01:29PM Title: Chapter Two

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This is getting better and better. I guess a lot of us have a Cousin Cleo type relative.

Author's Response: We're glad you're enjoying it! I was by far the youngest cousin on both sides of my family, so I didn't have the annoyingly perfect younger cousin, but I had a few older ones that fit her description.



Reviewer: gryffindorgirl72000 Anonymous Date: 2007.01.20 - 10:21PM Title: Chapter Two

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Yes - life is so unfair. You always run into the cute guy when you are doing something stupid or you look bad... and there always seems to be another prettier girl in the way... so typical! Can't wait to read more of your story!



Author's Response: Do you think that everyone has a mortifying story involving a crush from their youth? It sure seems like it, doesnt' it? We're glad you're enjoying the story!



Reviewer: Keira Azul Signed Date: 2007.01.20 - 10:57AM Title: Chapter Two

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Oh! This was wonderfully embarrassing. The hated cousin....somehow one of those always comes up.....I never had one myself, being quite a bit younger than my second-cousins, and far older than all the babies that came later, but I can imagine. But the last part of the chapter is really the most interesting bit...was Ginny wearing nothing but a towel? Because I can imagine Harry's feelings about that.... :) Disheveled hair is cute! Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter.

~Meg

Author's Response: Thanks, Meg. I can only imagine the monster's response to the sight of a fresh-from-the-shower Ginny! Somehow, I don't think even the immaculately beautiful Cleotilde has a chance against that.



Reviewer: generalricky Anonymous Date: 2007.01.19 - 01:20AM Title: Chapter Two

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this is a great story and very well writen. it seems to be one strong voice and i can handly belive it is a collaboration. i can tell you are both having a lot of fun writing it and that makes it fun to read. Also great details pop out in almost every paragraph. i like that you are focused on the harry and ginny romance plotline and yet you dont forget about how much fun you can have with jkr's world, that is what fanfics are all about, after all. i hope you will update this one again soon

Author's Response: It is so fun to play in JKR's world, isn't it? I'm glad this seems to be written in one voice. Part of the fun of writing this story (for me anyway) was to match not only the plot line, but also the tone of the piece when it was my turn to write again. We're glad you're enjoying it.



Reviewer: pigwidgeon Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 11:45PM Title: Chapter Two

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I loved this chapter. Poor Ginny, everything's she's gone through and the day's only begun. Fred and George were hilarious, they had me in stiches. But what had me squeeing was that last sentence... I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: If only Ginny had been able to see (and understand) Harry's expression before she went to her room. I think her day would have improved tremendously! Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 11:32PM Title: Chapter Two

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This is really good! Keep it up and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! We're glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 11:20PM Title: Chapter Two

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It's still early morning and Ginny's frustration is slowly building, starting with the interrupted dream. Looking forward to a birthday recognition from her mother, the twins then mercilessly tease her and continue with the "perky" theme (where did that come from thinks Ginny?) And thenshe hears about Sherman and Cleo .... the day just gets worse. And then she comes out of the shower to the worst sight imagineable, Cleo flirting with Harry and her hair in a mess. I wonder if she will just go back to bed, things can't get any worse, can they? I just love the light humor and the continual buildup of hilarity.

Author's Response: I would say that, all in all, this is not one of Ginny's better days. :) I think Ginny has more spunk than to just give up and go to bed. Although I wouldn't blame her for considering that option. We're glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: animegodess Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 09:34PM Title: Chapter Two

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Good second chapter. Can't wait to read more.^^

Author's Response: Thanks! We hope you enjoy the rest of Ginny's birthday!



Reviewer: lyric Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 04:47PM Title: Chapter Two

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The chapters just keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work!
-lyric

Author's Response: Thanks! We're glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 03:20PM Title: Chapter Two

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another fantastic chapter that had me in stiches i just loved the exploding haggis (which i actually quite like). & having the twins tease ginny with that partucler word pricelees i wonder what harrys would have been. The ending of the chpater did what any good chapter ending shoud be lie wanting the next update as soon as possable some how i dont think Cleo efforts are going to be sucsessfull as it looks like harry only got on girl in mind and he just seen her completly natural looking which iam sure given his reaction has just been increased a notch or two.

Author's Response: I think Harry's word might have been something like, "Er,' or "Ummm" or something equally incoherent. :) Especially after seeing her right after her shower. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Miri Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 03:18PM Title: Chapter Two

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Oh dear, you two are really torturing poor Ginny aren't you? I hope there's a *really* good "reward" in store for our suffering heroine. I've had a few family gatherings like this and their charm is best observed from a distance...of several years.

Loved Ginny's fantasy of catching the Snitch with Harry--I just got a wider and wider smile while reading it.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Best

Jan

Author's Response: Thanks Jan. I think if Ginny could read some of the ways she is tortured by fanfic writers, she'd thank her lucky stars that JKR is in charge of her life. ^-^ Hopefully the "reward" makes the suffering worthwhile. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!



Reviewer: Sovran Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 01:15PM Title: Chapter Two

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Somehow I knew that minor train-wreck at the end of the chapter was coming. Poor Ginny. Poor Harry, too! He "doesn't take well to brunettes", to mangle a phrase.

I liked the unspoken but expressed kinship between Ginny and Ron here. Yes, they're definitely siblings who are often at each others' throats, but I got the feeling that they shared some sympathy there at the breakfast table. I can't help but wonder how Ron (and Hermione!) feel about dear cousin Cleo.

Any man who has ever seen his woman in the state Ginny presented understands the final scene. It still amazes me that the women in question don't quite get it.

Good stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks Dave. I have to think that anyone who spent their early years as a younger sibling of Fred and George would definitely form a special bond with someone else in the same boat. And I can picture Hermione having a very strong opinion of Cleo, can't you? I think you're right about the final scene--I don't think the women in question ever do get it. I know I don't. But I think your comment earned you "Ahhs" from every woman that reads this. :)



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 12:09PM Title: Chapter Two

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Sweet and funny, but gosh you guys are sure being rough, poor Ginny. We expect some teasing from Fred and George (by the way I would have preferred the term attributes rather than attitude, Remus would respond she's smart, kind, talented, ...anything other than voluptuose, which is what she wants at the moment.), but you guys, talk about kicking a girl when she's down, sheese. Oh well, I'm sure she'll come out OK in the end.

One question, I assume this story is discounting the KISS in HBP.

Author's Response: Yes, poor Ginny is definitely taking a beating, isn't she? Don't worry, though, she's in good hands. ;) And, yes, this is definitely AU-- no HBP kiss...sigh.



Reviewer: herekittykitty Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 11:53AM Title: Chapter Two

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Here's hoping Cleotilde will be bat-bogeyed into oblivion in the near future! And Fred and George are hilarious! awesome job, guys!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Cleotilde definitely deserves a bat-bogey or two. :)



Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 10:30AM Title: Chapter Two

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Very funny. The twins aren't too picky in who they choose to tease, luckily for Ginny they are easily distracted. I don't like that Cleo. Too bad Ginny doesn't realize that Harry doesn't seem to either and she's the one he's really looking at. Looking forward to meeting the 'geek' Sherman. Oh, what fun will be had with that one?! I don't care if you follow the movie closely; your story's twists and curves are so much funnier! Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: We're glad you're enjoying our twist on the plot. Fred and George are definitely all about equal opportunity when it comes to teasing. I think Ginny showed her intelligence by getting out of the kitchen when she had the chance. :) Sherman and Cleo will both make their presence known as the story progresses -- I hope you enjoy them.




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