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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 09:22AM Title: Chapter Four

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I loved Harry telling Cleo that she should keep trying to get freckles. Priceless!

And the Heathcliff/Molly interplay is phenomenal!



Reviewer: Sovran Signed Date: 2007.02.13 - 10:57PM Title: Chapter Four

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I, too, forgot to review this chapter somehow, and I don't have the excuse of having beta'd it. Ack!

So, the scene at the pond was definitely a favorite. I remember those yarn-girls, and while they were fun to look at in some ways, I never really wanted to have anything else to do with them. A bikini is one thing, but things like that just told me too much about the wearer. Anyway, Harry's reactions and Ginny's perceptions were really fun and well-done.

I'm so utterly jealous of the story about Molly and the uncles back at school. Hilarious! And somehow quite fitting for Molly. The uncles were quite believable as Weasley relatives, too. Poor Harry . . . he probably never wants to find out for sure about that mermaid.

Sherman... ugh! I'm not a physical person, so I can't say I'd have hit him, but I'd definitely have told him off long before Ron got tired of him. That's either a bad sign for me or a good sign for Ron. Take your pick.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Dave! I still owe you a review for MoO, so I know how chapters can get missed. :) I'm glad you liked the scene at the pond. It sounds like you're as noble as our Harry with the yarn-girls (great phrase by the way!). I think, if I ever make the time, it would be fun to write a story about Molly as a girl. I think she has a lot of stories just waiting to be told. :) As for Ron and Sherman, don't be too hard on yourself. I'm sure Ron is just maturing. ^-^



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.02.13 - 07:57PM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.02.13 - 03:12PM Title: Chapter Four

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ahhh the plot thickens!!!!

Author's Response: I felt like we needed good radio drama music at the end of this chapter. A well timed--dun, dun, dun- would have worked well, I think. :)



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.02.13 - 02:31AM Title: Chapter Four

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Oh, bad beta! I thought I’d left a review already. I think when you work on a story and have, therefore, commented on it so many times, that you forget you haven’t said something publicly. Not that it’s necessary, but I try to do it. Ugh. I think that means I’m behind on some other peoples’ stories too. Enough rambling.

Yarn… Poor Molly. That’s probably my favorite moment in the whole thing. Why on earth would she fuss at Ginny for wearing something perfectly acceptable/ normal and fairly modest for swimming in the first place? What does she think Ginny is going to swim in? Robes? So, I love the reality check of seeing Cleotilde in her crocheted garb. The sad thing is, lots of young teens wear such skimpy things. I was never that brave even when I was tiny.

The other thing I adore about this chapter is just Harry being so darn attentive and adorable. Keep trying for those freckles, Cleo!
Fun chapter, Erika, Cel.
~ Christine

Author's Response: Thanks, Christine! I think that both Molly and Ron would say robes are perfectly acceptable swimming attire. ^-^ Even if everyone but Hermione has forgotten Ginny's birthday, Harry's attentiveness has to be a great present in Ginny's world. The signals he's giving should be pretty hard to miss. Thanks for reviewing, in public. :)



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.02.12 - 07:04PM Title: Chapter Four

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This chapter was hilarious. I find it hard to believe that Harry's eyes didn't wander more when Cleo showed up in her meagre bikini, but the effect on Ginny's ego must have been huge. I loved the interaction between Harry and Ginny. They just seem to fit together so well in every situation. Now, ws Uncle Heathcliff the one behind the attacking gnomes. LOL!!!

Author's Response: I think that Ginny deserved Harry's full attention. :) And you never know, he might just be smitten enough to give it to her. I'm glad you like the Harry/Ginny interaction. Ahh, young love!



Reviewer: reel_macguffin Signed Date: 2007.02.12 - 12:06AM Title: Chapter Four

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This is fantastic! I love it! It's very well written - very funny. Great work! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! We're glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.02.11 - 08:02PM Title: Chapter Four

update?

Author's Response: It's coming!



Reviewer: werekitten Signed Date: 2007.02.10 - 01:19PM Title: Chapter Four

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Love it, it was hilarious! However, I would have added in something about Ginny's birthday in the end.

Author's Response: We're glad you're enjoying it! Don't worry--there's more about Ginny's birthday in chapter 5.



Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2007.02.05 - 07:02PM Title: Chapter Four

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Uh-oh. BUSTED.

Author's Response: It's definitely not Cleo's day, is it?



Reviewer: Ms Weasley Signed Date: 2007.02.05 - 01:18PM Title: Chapter Four

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Bravo!!! Excelent job girls!!! Loved Tonks scene. Sherman is a pain but he definitely makes me laugh -out loud by the way, hehehe... ginny and Harry was so sweet. But best of all was discovering that Cleo is a Squib -at least I hope she really is !!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! We're glad we could make you laugh out loud. Cleo's day is definitely not turning out to be too great, is it?



Reviewer: ivy_s_snowe Anonymous Date: 2007.02.04 - 07:46PM Title: Chapter Four

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Yes! Some more Harry and Ginny interaction. And it wasn't even disgustingly fluffy. I liked it. And that prank was hilarious. Personally, I want to know where you're going with that last line. Cheers.

~Ivy

Author's Response: I'm glad we didn't cross the line into disgustingly fluffy. It's such a tempting line to cross. ^-^ You'll discover the meaning of the last line in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: jlovegood Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 04:54PM Title: Chapter Four

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This is definately the best chapter yet! I was hysterically laughing the entire time. LOVED the reference to Cleo's swimsuit being 'two pieces of yarn'. Too funny. Also couldn't stop laughing when Sherman asked Ginny and Hermoine to go for a ride on the old broomstick and Ron's response to that. Yay to Harry for not being distracted by Cleo and keeping his eyes and attentions only on Ginny. I loved it when Cleo asked Harry if he she got any freckles from the sun and he told Cleo, "Maybe if you keep trying, though,” I love reading a fic like this where Harry is so obviously smitten with Ginny. I've nominated this story for the DSTA's. Good luck! Can't wait to read chapter 5 and see what Harry's response is to it being her 16th birthday!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! If Ginny wasn't aware of Harry's feelings for her before the scene at the pond, I can't believe she isn't aware of them by the end of this chapter. The boy ignored her scantily-clad cousin, commented that Cleo should keep trying for freckles, and implied Ginny was brilliant. Ah...what a day! I don't think I'd mind at all that everyone had forgotten her birthday. ;) And thanks for the DSTA nomination!



Reviewer: lyric Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter Four

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Wow, I don't thihnk words could do Sherman justice...
Another fantastic chapter, although I didn't expect anything less. I know you guys probably won't answer this, but is she a squib? And what do squibs have to do with angry little gnomes?
-lyric

Author's Response: Yes, Sherman is something, isn't he? And the angry little gnomes will be explained in chapter 5. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 03:56AM Title: Chapter Four

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You two have managed to bring to mind why I dread family reunions, and also part of the fun of going. I have a 2nd cousin that IS Sherman. He started his "moves" when we were both still in diapers, according to out mothers.

Cleo's reality check is about to bounce, isn't it? Nice to see that the ones that appear perfect, are usually anything but. Looking forward to the next chapter, and future works from the both of you!

Author's Response: Oh, you poor woman! Growing up with a Sherman at family reunions? Shudder. Did he eventually outgrow that? We're glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: annkaro Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 01:13AM Title: Chapter Four

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Oh! That was absolutely brilliant!!
I loved those Harry/Ginny moments!!
Aww, poor Cleo!! Serves her right! lol But Is she a squib? mmhh...interesting! No wonder she's all spoiled!
I love how Mrs. Weasley doesn't deny her 'adventures'!!
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think it is only Mrs. Weasley's sense of parenting responsibility that keeps her from joining in the telling of the stories. I don't think any of her brood need any encouragement in mischief making. :) And, yes, poor Cleo. It sort of explains her parents indulgences, doesn't it? We're glad you like the Harry/Ginny moments.



Reviewer: hippoiluvdearly1 Signed Date: 2007.02.03 - 09:40PM Title: Chapter Four

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ohhh! update soon! realllly soon!!! this iss greatt! and you're an awesome writer!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The last chapter is on its way!



Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Signed Date: 2007.02.03 - 06:38PM Title: Chapter Four

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Oooh, nice cliffy! I love that Ginny is so oblivious that Harry's completely wrapped around her little finger.

Please update very soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's amazing how being in love can blind us to signals that should be obvious, isn't it? I think they're both starting to figure things out a little bit, though.



Reviewer: Leiselily Signed Date: 2007.02.03 - 03:32PM Title: Chapter Four

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I love it! You are doing such a good job of building the romantic tension, but keeping the laughs coming too. So glad you have Ron and Hermione getting friendly, and Ron's reaction to Cleo's bikini was hilarious. LOL at him trying to stuff a whole sausage roll in his mouth, that is EXACTLY Ron.
I loved the diving competition, and the way H &G are on the same wavelength. Nice to hear a bit about Molly as a girl, too. And I'm delighted to see poor Cleo having such a rough day, LOL.

Whatever will happen next? I've just realised I hope this story goes on for days, cos I enjoy it so much - haven't felt like that since "Getting Over Harry Potter"!

Author's Response: Thanks! Ron really is a great, big prude, isn't he? A hungry prude, to be sure, but a prude nonetheless. I'm glad you liked the bit about Molly. I think the twins had to get their sense of humor from somewhere. And what a nice complement! We're so glad you're enjoying the story, but only one chapter to go.



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2007.02.03 - 02:11PM Title: Chapter Four

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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Author's Response: The last chapter is in final revisions!!!!!!! Thanks for all of the exclamations points!!! :)




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