Reviews For Songs of War
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.11.17 - 09:35PM Title: The Collier Recruit
Well I must say I am so very happy... For reasons you might find odd but a Harry death I give you major props for this and say well done! Most people are to scared to do it of the reviews they will get they don't want to actually do it they pull some solution out of no where and say just kidding just like JK did. I really do have to say this is the best use of a song in story I have ever read in this chapter I don't know for sure if this is a song fic or you just used the song since it fit so well. I must say though I am a little confused about Ginny's death I mean was she somewhat ill already? I mean a person in perfect health just doesn't die even if there lover has died. I will say once again great job and you surpassed my expections for you in this chapter hope you write some more and soon.
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.11.17 - 09:28PM Title: Over the Hills and Far Away
I will say I am confused that if Ron and Hermione went to school why in the world wouldn't Ginny? I will say I don't like seeing Harry as scared which you kind of pointed at though I will say it fits and this I will overlook I mean he did overcome his fears and charge so liked that.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.02.05 - 08:21PM Title: The Collier Recruit
Having been raised in a house that was ruled by war; my Dad always going off to one war, skirmish, "police action" or another...having been captured in VietNam, injured in Iraq, and STILL going back to train troops, and now training SAS in the UK (Dad is an American, USMC, General retired)...these songs have special meaning, as do the emotions they foster.
Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 05:35PM Title: Over the Hills and Far Away
See review at the end of chapter two. Just wanted to get a rating in on this chapter.
Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 05:34PM Title: The Collier Recruit
This was a great two chapters, but I think I would have liked a little more about how Harry died or how Ginny found out. It just seemed to suddenly be there without the emotional build up to make us overly sad. Not sure what I'm trying to say. The first chapter was great with Harry's feelings, but the second didn't seem to have the same amount of attention given to it. This doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it. It was a great idea and you write very well. Is this finished? It is marked as incomplete, but this seemed like a final end to the story. I hope you keep adding more stories. You have original ideas that are interesting.