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Reviewer: piltad Signed
Date: 2008.09.28 - 03:15AM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Well good to see James realizing what is going on maybe he can prevant some bad things happening since I think the path your going down is going to end in a clash but we shall see. I do like the idea of the Potter holdings though I do wonder if there is more to it that is yet to come with the bit about Harry being the Heir.
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed
Date: 2008.09.13 - 05:59AM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
i think it goes understated about how rich the potters are, cos there are hints in all jks books! your writing style has improved from your last story, its makes it even better to read!
Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed
Date: 2008.08.11 - 05:48AM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed
Date: 2008.01.19 - 11:33AM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed
Date: 2007.04.14 - 07:30PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
wow thats a lot of money! draco would have a fit! i can just picture the look on his face! wow! well good chapter!
Author's Response: Hah, he would indeed. Of course, Harry doesn't like to brag so Draco will not know for a while longer. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Firebolt2006 Signed
Date: 2007.04.11 - 07:25PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Great sequel!!! I hope you have some devious plans (maurauder style) for Rita Skeeter. Actually I think the Marauders should ride again, along with Fred and George and have some fun with the minister and umbridge. Maybe a truth potion so they have to tell the truth for a 2 or 3 days or a potion that flashes I'm lying above they heads every time they tell a lie which gets them booted out.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. That is a great idea. Thanks.
Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed
Date: 2007.04.05 - 10:42PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
You must update...lol...
I love it...the birthday party was really good...and then also, Tonks' entrance...entertaining...and her reaction to Remus, and his to her. That was pretty brilliant.
The vault...im glad you didnt go too over the top. Some authors give Harry too much wealth, or the like.
I cant wait to see what the rest of Ginny's present to Harry is.
And by the way, you forgot to have Harry put the cloak back on when he went back out into the alley. I dunno if it was intentional, or accidental, I just thought that I might point that out.
Also cant wait to see Rose's reaction to what Harry tells her is in the vault.
How long will we have to wait for Harry to give Ginny that ring? Hopefully not too terribly long.
Urgh...lost my train of thought!
I loved James' thoughts at the beginning, and the Neville part...i was like...TEEHEE...it was funny...
The twins and Daniel playing together was really sweet...maybe he'll take after Hermione, yeah? Then the toddlers can be together a lot...awww...that'd be so sweet! *resists the urge to start a shipping between Daisy and Daniel, resists it, I tell you!*
lol
i cant wait for the next chapter...update soon, yeah?
love it
~Ginny M~
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I enjoyed reading it. I'm glad you don't think the things I gave the Potters in the vault was too much, though 10 million galleons is like 70 million pounds or 100 million dollars i think. Rose's reaction will be in the next chapter. Ginny's birthday will be in chapter 8. Daniel and Daisy? Hmm, haven't thought that far. GRIN! Thanks again for reviewing. Next chapter will be out by the end of the week.
Reviewer: JPotterNY Signed
Date: 2007.04.05 - 07:41PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
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Reviewer: Black Rose Signed
Date: 2007.04.05 - 05:54PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
That was a great chapter, Keep up the great. I hope to see Ginny and Harry fight one time and see what hapeness or something like that.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You've seen a bit of them in practice in chapter 4. James was just being cautious in this. He wasn't around when Harry was showing them the spells he'd learned the previous year. You'll see them dueling each other in a future chapter.
Reviewer: Wolfric Signed
Date: 2007.04.05 - 04:19AM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Thanks for the fine chapter. I am enjoying the story. I like to see how Harry and the others train and then how they apply their training. I look forward to further chapters. W.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The rest of their summer training is about the same. I'll be writing more of their training when they go back to Hogwarts.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed
Date: 2007.04.05 - 12:05AM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Interesting, but Rose did say pretty explicitly that she'd rather wait to see the vault until she's of age, so I'd expect that hse would not be all that interested in the contents of the vault just yet. Molly still has a bit of adjustment to do, it seems.
Still, the chapter was well done.
Author's Response: Oh, she just said that because she was a bit uncomfortable, the reason for which you'll see in the next chapter. Molly does need some more time to completely adjust to Harry and Ginny, Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed
Date: 2007.04.04 - 06:28PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Good chapter. ~Jeff~
Author's Response: Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed
Date: 2007.04.04 - 03:25PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
another great chapter & it was good to see the relashionships beging to come to the fore but not dominate the story to much always a tricky balance.
So harry get the ubiquece mult compartment trunk for his birthday not a big surprsie but one iam quite fond of.
the potter vault scvean was ok though slightly over the top (at least harry has sevral sibbling to share it with though). & we also see a bit of molly old fashiones come out iam looking forward to see where that goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I try to have a mix of romance, drama and action in my stories without any of them dominating the scenes. I know the multi-comparted trunk has been used in many stories but I thought it was an appropriate way to bring up the topic of their wealth and lead to James deciding to show Harry the main vault. I know the vault is overwhelming but, hey, they're supposed to be one of the oldest pureblood families. Molly still hasn't completely accepted the fact that her only daughter has a bond with a boy only a year older even if she's known the boy for almost fourteen years. She still has old fashioned ideas about courtship and relationships though I do agree with some of those ideas like sex after marriage and a proper courtship. I do agree with Ginny that it was James' decision alone to let her see the vault. Her mother should not have objected. Thanks again for your review.
Reviewer: peskypetunia Signed
Date: 2007.04.04 - 03:20PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Hey sweet! The chapter is positively brilliant! You had a few spelling errors I spotted but I'm far from perfect. Soyl=soul, Voldymort=Voldemort, m=me. I could only catch a few but ah well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hmm, I have to go over the chapter again. I have a beta from another site who didn't spot all that. I do use Voldymort intentionally to ridicule Tommy boy. I hope to post the next chapter next week.
Reviewer: LilyLady Signed
Date: 2007.04.04 - 02:43PM
Title: A shared birthday party and The Potter Vault
Good chapter. Just wondering but have you read "Prophecy Fulfilled" by Breanie? I know a lot of stories put a lot of emphasis on the amount of money Harry owns, but the way you wrote it just reminds me a bit of hers (it's not exactly the same or anything don't worry!) Anyway, good chapter, keep up the good work and as always I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I don't recall reading that particular story though I'm familiar with the author. I do read a lot of HP fanfic but try really hard not to allow them to influence what I write. I'll try to check that fic and see what you mean. Thanks again for the review, Next chapter out by next week (I hope).
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