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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.28 - 03:38AM Title: A new training task

LOL OMG I don't know what is up with a Rooster I am sorry I really think it was quite funny but more because of how Harry acted I will say Roosters can be some angry sob's if messing with them or the chickens learned that the fun way so I guess can see just think it is very funny and I think you added to that with how Harry acted to that form. I am wondering about the magical froms I am wondering if they are part of the bond if so where Harry and Ginny touching when they saw that form? Though I like the Tigers I won't lie the best Harry form I have read has been a wolf... So lets see how you do with your tiger don't think I have seen the tiger lion yes but don't think tiger.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I wanted something a bit different from the other stories where Harry learns how to be an animagus.



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.13 - 06:19AM Title: A new training task

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hehe, i just looked at a picture of a mongoose, and they are very similar to a ferret!!!!
and if harry can become a rooster, is that something to do with the basilisk in COS, cos they are afriad of the cry of a rooster? i am guessing! tigers are appropraite to harry and ginny. maybe that is also why the horntail reacted to harry in his first task???? well, i am reading on!



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.11 - 05:48AM Title: A new training task

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 11:46AM Title: A new training task

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Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.04.22 - 12:31PM Title: A new training task

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great chapter all the animagus form you chose fit weel with the various charecturs & harry having three form is rather intresting. it was nice to see those little seeds of doubt beginging to form with in the group & iam defenatly intrested in who eventuly ends up with whom * harry talk with his sister was a nice touch no big brother spech which shows how much he trust her judjment (of course with her temper & ginnys insight he relly wasnt going to make the same mistake ron makes in cannon).



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, had to think well to get the right animagus forms. It will be a while for the final pairings to come out but the road will be rocky. I really intended for Harry and Rose to have a better brother-sister relationship than Ron and Ginny, considering how much of a heart Harry has. Plus, Harry has better sense than Ron in dealing with redheads. However, in the future, Harry's decision to let Rose make her own decisions will be put to the test.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.04.20 - 11:50AM Title: A new training task

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I see Hermione's got the hang of behavior modification . :-}

Seems to me that in general, having an Animagus form that is fairly common for the area where one is would be a considerable advantage. Sure, a dragon or a griffin could be a formidable opponent in a fight -- but sometimes it's better to be able to do things without a direct confrontation. This, I think, is one of the benefits of McGonagall's Animagus form. Similarly, of Harry's 3 forms, either the tiger or the dragon would be somewhat ... conspicuous ... in the English countryside. (Well, in their native habitat, tigers can hide pretty well, but that habitat isn't so common in the UK.) So I suspect that he may have occasion to appreciate his rooster form. :-}

Interesting bit about Rose having seen the vault in a vision. I'd guess that Harry was nervous that she might have seen him select the Promise Ring, eh? And it's good that Harry & Rose got things settled re: each being a separate person, capable of making separate decisions. :-)

[Oh: there was what was likely a finger-slip, there: "comprehendible" should probably be "comprehensible."]

Still quite good, of course. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I know that their animagus forms are mainly there for their fighting ability. Being a rooster may give Harry an advantage of camouflage as long as he doesn't do it in a farm or the people who see him aren't hungry. LOL! Harry and Ginny's forms reflect their combative and aggressive natures. Harry was quite nervous about that. Yes, Harry and Rose have a better brother and sister relationship than Ron and Ginny. The next chapter will show Ginny's birthday and how Harry gives the promise ring to her. That's okay about the finger-slip. Thanks again for the review.



Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed Date: 2007.04.17 - 07:33AM Title: A new training task

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I liked it...some hilarity...okay...quite a bit...lol

Rose saw the vault...it all make sense now...though, i think it still wouldve been a bit shocking to see it in person instead of in a vision, but to each their own.

I cant think...bleh.

I loved the shocked responses to Harry and Ginny's animagi forms. it was quite funny. especially the eyes popping out, abd then when Harry told Dumbledore about his third form....teehee

I loved it...lol

I think thats all. The gift Ginny gave harry was sweet...and hmm...she wonders how he got the dragon form...lol...or maybe that was just a bit of foreshadowing on your part, yeah?

I hope you update soon..

~Ginny M~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked all that. It was fun writing it, though i revised it a couple of times. Initially, Ginny's second form was a kneazle but I decided that I wanted a more powerful and flying form. The dragon and griffins are their main animagus forms. I don't think anyone remembered what happened in the first task with the dragon. This is why the dragon chased after him and Rose, it saw Harry as another dragon stealing a treasure from him. Thanks again for the review.



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.04.17 - 12:19AM Title: A new training task

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Interesting choice of forms.
I think the rooster's gonna kill a basilisk with his voice. Perhaps Riddle is a basilisk animagus.
Anyway, good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. My lips are sealed with the rooster.



Reviewer: pottyboutpotter Signed Date: 2007.04.16 - 07:16AM Title: A new training task

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Excellent chapter, up to your usual standard, looking forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hope to have chapter 8 up next week.



Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2007.04.16 - 04:11AM Title: A new training task

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Good Chapter. I like the animagus forms. Thanks for writing. W.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the forms. I had to change them a couple of times to come out right.



Reviewer: Black Rose Signed Date: 2007.04.16 - 03:30AM Title: A new training task

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That was a great chapter. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what your idea with the rooster is, I thought is was very funny LOL^^.---- Black Rose

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll see the reason for the rooster much later but it will make sense. Of course, a few reviewers have an idea already. :)



Reviewer: theplatonist Signed Date: 2007.04.16 - 03:09AM Title: A new training task

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I can see it now! Boy Who Lived kills He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named when He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named transforms into a Basilisk and Boy Who Lived crows as a rooster!!

Author's Response: Yep, just see how that plays out. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: encyclopediabrit Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 11:24PM Title: A new training task

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Great chapter! Could Harry's rooster form have anything to do with the fact that the rooster's cry is fatal to the basilisk? That is the only mention of a rooster in the magical world, so it would make since that that would follow.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Oh, you're right there. GRIN!



Reviewer: LilyLady Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 07:27PM Title: A new training task

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Hahaha that was cute...and a rooster? I'm intrigued...in fact I can't wait to find out your explanation for that one lol...anyway, good chapter, and as always, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. That will be explained some time in the future. For now, Harry will concentrate on the first two forms.



Reviewer: The_Great_One Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 04:14PM Title: A new training task

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i like it. A Rooster! although i'm ashamed to say that my first thought when i read that, was Foghorn Leghorn from looney toons wearing glasses. Then i came to the same basilisk conclusion as another reviewer. great story!

Author's Response: Hmm, that's an interesting picture. You'll just have to see when he finally turns to changing into that form. As to why he has a rooster animagus form, you'll have to be patient to find out. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 03:47PM Title: A new training task

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What's up with the rooster? So glad that you didn't go with the phoenix and instead gave Harry a dragon and Ginny a gryffin.

You gave Hermione an owl??? She HATES to fly!

I am really enjoying your story! It is as good as the first!

Author's Response: I didn't want to go with the common trend of having Harry as a phoenix animagus yet show his power. The reason for the rooster will come out in the future. Well, being an owl will help her overcome this fear. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Valandar Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 02:30PM Title: A new training task

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A rooster? Perhaps instead it is a... cockatrice?

Author's Response: The reason for this form will come out in the future. A cockratice is a bit overboard but I'll consider it. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: SeriousScribble Anonymous Date: 2007.04.15 - 02:12PM Title: A new training task

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"However, I cannot see in any way what quality you share with a rooster." ROFL!

Now that is something original. I don't think I've ever read a fic where Harry is a chicken Animagus, lol.
My guess is that is has something to do with the Basilisk he killed - wasn't a rooster it's natural enemy? In that way it would be fitting.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You're close with that last reference to his rooster form.




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